Awsome it is a combo game both ruby and shapire. Plus u get the battle frontier eventually.
enough of the intro now to the caegories.
GRAPHICS: 9/10 it was better then most but could of been better
sprites: the sprites look a little bigger and a little mre realistic then other pokemon games the battle sprites r awsome so much quality the buildings less realistic




SOUND: 10/10 this game is tooooo loud i love the sound on the ocean


ADDUCTIVNESS 5/10 : i played for 10 hours straight



STORY: 6/10 u r a kid just moving to the honen region moving into littleoot town u go out to become a pokemon master and u can also win contest


DEPH: 10/10 takes awhile escpecially if u do all the optnal side quest or whatever u call em like the contest
DIFFICULTY 4/10 nice game challenge but eh litle easy after all this is one of the game fields i am best in but added challenges are awsome


closing statements: one thing i would like to ay is it sucks u cant visit kanto in the game at all
SuperCrash64 : thank u what u think

thetruemasterofgames : Hey there! How are you? I'm fine.

I would recommend working on some elements of your spelling. In reviews it is important to use great spelling, punctuation and grammar. Some words such as 'sapphire' and even 'you' were spelled wrong. I know you are thirteen but at that age I was using appropriate spelling etc. You left letters out of words at times "caegories". I know these can be accidental but you should read over your reviews before posting them.

For every section in your review I think you could have included a lot more detail. The Graphics was barely two sentences and most of your points were brilliant and valid but you just didn't develop them as much. You used really good words such as 'realistic' etc. in your review which was good but again your grammar and spelling let you down.

The other categories had little detail in them also. I can see detail is a common error in your review, as well as spelling. I suggest checking out this thread below before posting your next review:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

Having said that above, I'm really glad that you took that huge step in making a review, some users find this very difficult and do not have the confidence to post one. Well Done!

I was typing it quickly

thetruemasterofgames : Oh I'm sorry. Its just that your profile states your thirteen. This suggests that you lied about your age when registering or made some sort of mistake. I understand that you were typing quickly, but that's why you read over your work before submitting it. This was a good review, it just needs more development and effort.

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