"When the sun goes down"
"And all its rays of hope go away"
"It leads many to wonder"
"Will there truly be another day?"

"...can I see another day..."


"The earth's flowers now bloom"
"Staring at their beauty till past noon"
"From outside the window, of a lively lit bedroom"
"Smiling lightly at the sight"

"Like a happy bride and groom"


"The seasonal tide strides true and through"
"Earth's life of tree's and nature brought forth anew"
"As your life seems to fade...like a song of the blues"
"Similarly to a fall leaf leaving its branches..."

"And leaving this earth, as its nurturing tree starts to pass on"


"Take a peek into your life"
"Though you may smile and spring about your day"
"Our hearts and mind see you falter"
"Laying on the cold ground, not knowing what to say"

"As the rain falls upon your shoulders..."

"This saddening spring day..."


"Cuddled and crying"
"Grasping the land as you lose thy mind"
"Screaming and yelling to the world, WHY!"
"Why does the world make us want to die?"
"Is it that our lives..."

"Have all been just a lie?!"


"Life..."
"One such joy and agony"
"No doctor or writer..."
"can truly ever define"

"Something to just sit and ponder"
"Is it truly even worth it, all the pain and pressure..."
"Death..."
"One such solution many have chosen, relieving their minds and hearts"

"Thrown into an eternal "peaceful" rest"
"....or is it all just another test...."


"The loss of one's soul to soothe a cry for help"
"That sadly never seems to be heard or told..."
"A standing solution, only seen as a worse fate"
"Almost Like a bitter poison/gas..."

"Intoxicating and infecting...the lives of many others as well"

"All for a simple "relief" or...death"


"Humans can become like the sky, with it's cloudy nature"
"Taking away the rain that could be falling in ones days..."
"Yet, tearing apart that light of guidance"
"By drenching thee with the tears of sorrow"

"Of a broken child, mother, man or more..."


"Such selfish souls considered by many"
"Thou can't deny however"
"They've never felt that same petrifying fear as before"
"Needing a voice to call out to..."

"In a sickening moment of despair"


"Take a listen to that daunting wind"
"The fierce and vicious strength, amongst each passing by"
"Holding out a calling hand or listening ear"
"For that lonely scream, out of frustration and heartbreak"


"Reach out one's hand into thy shadows"
"Even if no light can be shown from afar"
"Listen or hold on, to the helping hands descending upon you"
"Leave that symphony of desolation"

"Finally reaching a moment of hope"

"When swimming in an ocean of woe..."


"Though thou range of sour devils"
"Outway the hands of heavenly angels"
"A simple outcry to anyone, and dispelling of deadly temptations"
"Is one miracle of an outcome, one can only wish upon the moonlit stars"

"To come through for in the most necessary of times"



"The words of an echoing nightmare"
"May not persuade ones mind at a times being"
"When one's time is near and the words become clear"
"Take a lesson like a punch to the shoulder, or whisper beside the ear"

"Never drown in one's forsaken rivers of dolor"


"Don't let it take your mind away"
"Remain where your sunshine can stay"
"A beacon of light shall represent your power to fight"
"To the harshest of days, to that darkest of nights"


"You'll always find one kind of "friend" "
"To stick with and listen to you, till the end"
"Back to back against an emotional wall"
"Watching each others crumble"


"Until you start to see them fall..."
"Just like the seasons weathery call"
"Leading into the winter's chilling overbearing gall"
"Chipping the icy fragments of one's own personal foundation"


"Crying..."
"An emotion cursing you from inside"
"now dwelling outside the spirit and mind"
"Into the pit of misery once more"

"A tear to be shed here and there, only to be said"



"I can finally stand amongst it all!"



~~A journey forever daunting and aching, is a learning experience not meant to be lost/given up~~
~~Repressed emotions can only wander, if refusing the listening ears from upon another...don't!~~


~~Sonicthehedgehog57tm~~

For others to understand why made this/what is going on about this, I'll inform you on what happened. I woke up this morning at 8am and have had this poem stuck in my head for some strange reason...no matter what I would try to do, nothing would help get it out of my head? Figured writing it down would be best since would already have it down and my mind might finally be able to relax. Saw there was some meaning to it actually for some that may be depressed and want to end their own life, so figured might as well put it on here and see if can help someone/be of interest to others before would delete off my computer.

Enjoy...maybe?

Wonderful poem as always Erick. I don't really need to say much here

Thanks so much for sharing this with us, man. It clearly had some meanings that were not readily visible to all, and as such can mean what the reader needs it to. It's always nice to see poems pop up on here. Again, thanks for sharing this.