Hello everyone. Most of you know I did a lot of poems before. I don't do them as much now but I still try to do them when I can. The title may confuse you a little. I'll explain I made 2 new poems and so I thought to share them in one thread instead of making another thread for the other one to put in. Thus I had to come up with a simple title that goes with it. I hope you feel inspired in a way of what I have done here. I made another thank you poem for my friends because why not?

if you don't thank your friends a lot for what they have done to help you then they may kinda think wrongly of you in a way. So I am saying its always good to show your gratitude sometimes to friends. Weather you know this or not when you do this it will boost their confidence to being more of a friend to you, since they feel that they are appreciated. When your friends feel appreciated they will go even further for you as you have done for them. Friends are hard to come by, so don't ever take them for granted for whatever selfish reasons you make.


Another thank you poem for my friends

It's around that time to give thanks again. 
I couldn't let it down for that to bend. 
As a friend, I need to at least show my gratitude. 
Of how I am still grateful time after time again, with no excuse. 

I treasure my friends a lot many do know this. 
But if you understand why I do this it's,
Showing people and your friends how happy that you are around them
And do at least something once in a while to show your friends how much you care, and love and not feeling numb. 

I will still continue to do this way. 
It also shows my love and happiness, which wouldn't go away. 
So my dear friends thank you again. 
And I hope our friendship and bond lasts and doesn't break that bend. 

Its a short poem but it will do. You guys know who you are. Thank you so much for being there for me in my time of need. And being the best friends I could ever have. ^-^


Here is the second poem. I hope this serves well in the messages I said within it.

Betrayal, trust, and hurt poem

Friends come and go. 
There are somethings you have to let go. 
Remembering pains of what someone did to you. 
Then it will stay with you like glue. 

From there it gets harder to trust people. 
You think of many ways to keep yourself safe, from the hurt of people being deceitful. 
When one does an action, and not think carefully about the damage it will do. 
It's sad, but I believe people can get second chances too. 

But, if someone has broken chances of too many. 
Then it would be better off to stay away. 
It would be for your own good. 
But here is something. How far are you willing to go to fix something so broken, if you are at fault for which you stood?

Not all friendships are sadly can be repaired. 
It makes you to think why you cared. 
So never take what you have for granted. 
Because once you do something bad to a friend, without knowing it has planted. 

If you really want to rekindle your friendship with that person once again. 
Think about what you have done first before you try gain his/her trust back of their pain. 
Then from when that person was once hurt. 
Will come around to see the effort that you are putting in, instead of dirt. 

I hope you see what I am trying to say here? Anyways I hope these poems inspire you in a way to do better as a friend. And not leave them in the dust. We know to keep your friendship going with someone its hard.....but, if you do things the right way by helping them, while you allow them to also help you. That friendship will never break, and continue to grow strong throughout the years. ^-^

Eniitan : Those were awesome, Eni. I've read a few of your poems, and you're really great at this.

i know I could never write something like this if i TRIED! You just... are really talented with writing these poems, big sis.

I try to never take anyone for granted, but... in real life, i don't really KNOW alot of people outside of my family, but if i do, some day, i'll take this to heart.

I get the idea, your basically saying that your friends are the cause of your happiness, and that you treasure them provided they do the following things:

Stay loyal,

Always be nice,.

Discuss what possible problems happen,
Never take you for granted.



I really enjoy the powerful showing these poems had, and it really shows great characteristics.


Your Poem reminds me of a song I listened to,

It was called"Hold on tight" by  Greg holden.


People may get busy, and in some cases like myself, may forget but thankfully your still there to jog my memory back.

Great poems

These poems were really great! True poetry is made with real feelings and that is what I can see with regards to your writing. Keep up the great work!

I'm sorry I didn't respond to this yesterday, I wasn't on that day :c.

Anyways, these poems are true. Especially the second one (I can name more than a few instances where that happened...) and oddly enough, it made me feel better. Better that I actually had people like that I could trust. And I did have a bad dayish. It just got confusing.

I feel like both poems implied me in many ways, it's almost as if you took your time to read everybody's heart and then put together into the poem. You should be an artist, you got a beautiful raw talent right there!

Keep it up.

Friendship doesn't need you, it DESERVES you.