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Well, I think it's clear what I mean... it's about the TdV by the way.
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My second poem on Vizzed

 

07-02-14 10:56 AM
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I've been thinking about making a second poem, here it is:

When I take a look at my name
I notice something, a flame
How did that came?
Will I get fame?

Competing in a competition is hard
Some can not handle it and fall apart
But I also made a new friend
So I can call it a nice blend

That said, I don't know a good topic as you can see
I tried to make the best of this poem though, I agree
I hope you liked it, I will think about a better subject next time,
I don't know how to end this, so I will say dime.



That's it guys, not very original as it has to do with the TdV. I hope you liked it, maybe I will find a real subject sometimes.
Good luck to all who compete in the TdV

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generalspleen :
rebelyell :

All four of you responded to my first poem:
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=75955

And Enii, you make nice poems as well. I'm not sure if you will like the subject but I hope you like my poem ^_ ^


I've been thinking about making a second poem, here it is:

When I take a look at my name
I notice something, a flame
How did that came?
Will I get fame?

Competing in a competition is hard
Some can not handle it and fall apart
But I also made a new friend
So I can call it a nice blend

That said, I don't know a good topic as you can see
I tried to make the best of this poem though, I agree
I hope you liked it, I will think about a better subject next time,
I don't know how to end this, so I will say dime.



That's it guys, not very original as it has to do with the TdV. I hope you liked it, maybe I will find a real subject sometimes.
Good luck to all who compete in the TdV

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rebelyell :

All four of you responded to my first poem:
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=75955

And Enii, you make nice poems as well. I'm not sure if you will like the subject but I hope you like my poem ^_ ^


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(edited by Frodlex on 08-03-14 12:43 AM)     Post Rating: 3   Liked By: cnw64, happiness7, SlovakX,

07-02-14 11:01 AM
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Its good juul I can see the message of what you said there. You are wondering about that problem and to see what it does for you during this tdv. I can answer those for you. That's only if you want to know. Anyways nice poem. ^^
Its good juul I can see the message of what you said there. You are wondering about that problem and to see what it does for you during this tdv. I can answer those for you. That's only if you want to know. Anyways nice poem. ^^
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nice rhyme! also, what if you were to do a sonic, Mario, Yoshi, or pokemon rhyme next time? and I can help!
nice rhyme! also, what if you were to do a sonic, Mario, Yoshi, or pokemon rhyme next time? and I can help!
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Eniitan : Thanks Enii, it's great to hear that from you, who always makes good poems I know what my name on flames means, it's because I made a certain amount of posts this day. 

Mega Mewtwo X : Thanks! Maybe I will do a game poem once, I haven't decided it for sure yet.
Eniitan : Thanks Enii, it's great to hear that from you, who always makes good poems I know what my name on flames means, it's because I made a certain amount of posts this day. 

Mega Mewtwo X : Thanks! Maybe I will do a game poem once, I haven't decided it for sure yet.
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Lovely rhymes you did there! And I must agree with Mega Mewtwo, a Pokemon rhyme would be awesome! :-) (Reading your poem kinda makes me want to try my hands with one as well!)
Lovely rhymes you did there! And I must agree with Mega Mewtwo, a Pokemon rhyme would be awesome! :-) (Reading your poem kinda makes me want to try my hands with one as well!)
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Another great poem, it was simple and fun. It flows really nice and a poem based on the tdv Is unique! Thanks for summoning me It was nice reading this one!
Another great poem, it was simple and fun. It flows really nice and a poem based on the tdv Is unique! Thanks for summoning me It was nice reading this one!
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07-03-14 02:32 PM
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sillysoul : Thanks! I know a lot about Pokémon, so maybe I will make a poem about it once. You should try one as well, they don't have to be very long you know

imamonster : You're welcome, I'm glad you like the subject
sillysoul : Thanks! I know a lot about Pokémon, so maybe I will make a poem about it once. You should try one as well, they don't have to be very long you know

imamonster : You're welcome, I'm glad you like the subject
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I enjoyed your poem very much. And  I hope to see  more from you. Thanks for posting.
I enjoyed your poem very much. And  I hope to see  more from you. Thanks for posting.
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rebelyell : Thanks man, I appreciate that I'm not sure when I will make my next poem, I will see.
rebelyell : Thanks man, I appreciate that I'm not sure when I will make my next poem, I will see.
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Hello there, I am sad to inform you that having a layout while making a poem or story in this forum is against the rules. Please do not continue this action in the future as doing so can potentially result in a ban. I have removed your layout from your post, on the bright side this is not the most serious offence plus it is highly possible that you didn't know, therefore I would not worry about it too much other than to not repeat this offence in the future, thank you for your time.

I believe I have told you this multiple times before however it is possible that this post was before that or at a similar time yet again meaning you didn't know, however I will be looking for fresh offences of this rule from now on, I will be on my guard for this and will not allow it to be broken repetitively, however again; there is a chance that you posted this before I said anything previously, so all in all it's minimal.
Hello there, I am sad to inform you that having a layout while making a poem or story in this forum is against the rules. Please do not continue this action in the future as doing so can potentially result in a ban. I have removed your layout from your post, on the bright side this is not the most serious offence plus it is highly possible that you didn't know, therefore I would not worry about it too much other than to not repeat this offence in the future, thank you for your time.

I believe I have told you this multiple times before however it is possible that this post was before that or at a similar time yet again meaning you didn't know, however I will be looking for fresh offences of this rule from now on, I will be on my guard for this and will not allow it to be broken repetitively, however again; there is a chance that you posted this before I said anything previously, so all in all it's minimal.
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Frodlex : I've never heard about that rule before, thanks for telling me. Since you didn't say this on my first poem I believe this is the first time I hear this, I'll try to remember it for my next poem, thanks
Frodlex : I've never heard about that rule before, thanks for telling me. Since you didn't say this on my first poem I believe this is the first time I hear this, I'll try to remember it for my next poem, thanks
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I like it. It's hard to find a rhyme scheme and have it still sound good and not cliche'. I write songs for my band and that takes a lot of originality. To make a long story short, I like it.
I like it. It's hard to find a rhyme scheme and have it still sound good and not cliche'. I write songs for my band and that takes a lot of originality. To make a long story short, I like it.
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well done. I liked it very much. I also never heard of that rule.
well done. I liked it very much. I also never heard of that rule.
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juuldude : Nice poem juuldude! I liked it. It had a good rhyme scheme to it. It was also funny how you just ended with dime. I cracked up a bit on that phrasing. Thank you for that! It seems like vizzed is going to a creative site now.

juuldude : Nice poem juuldude! I liked it. It had a good rhyme scheme to it. It was also funny how you just ended with dime. I cracked up a bit on that phrasing. Thank you for that! It seems like vizzed is going to a creative site now.
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apeman : Thanks, it's sure hard to find the right words that sound catchy and have to rhyme. You wrote Mister Misunderstood for All of Us right? Good job on that

rebelyell : Thanks and yeah, it was a first for me too

happiness7 : Lol, if I had more time I probably wouldn't have ended with dime but I was out of words and I wanted to finish it. I don't know if Vizzed is getting more creative but there sure are many people here who are very creative and the people who aren't are good in other things
apeman : Thanks, it's sure hard to find the right words that sound catchy and have to rhyme. You wrote Mister Misunderstood for All of Us right? Good job on that

rebelyell : Thanks and yeah, it was a first for me too

happiness7 : Lol, if I had more time I probably wouldn't have ended with dime but I was out of words and I wanted to finish it. I don't know if Vizzed is getting more creative but there sure are many people here who are very creative and the people who aren't are good in other things
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