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The Awakening of a New Soldier (Chapter 11)
01-23-14 11:22 PM
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Hey guys. Heh. I'm starting to get a little tired of making these stories nearly everyday. I hope I don't slack off too much this time. I'm not sure if I'll start having a break from making stories everyday yet or not. We'll see. Anyways, we are now at chapter 11 of this story. Please be sure to read the previous chapters of this story before moving on. I also don't really like it when users reply to my stories without reading it. Just makes me feel like as if I wasted some of my time. And for those of you who are lazy to find the chapters yourself: The Prologue of this story can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309 Chapters 1-3 of this story can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71409 Chapters 4-5 of this story can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71449 Chapter 6 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71489 Chapter 7 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71532 Chapter 8 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71582 Chapter 9 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71627 And chapter 10 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71669 And that list continues to grow. I wonder how much bigger it can get. XD Now, let us continue typing up the story: Chapter 11: End of the Meeting Tom and Bob continued to sit inside the vent and continued to hear what the men were saying in the classroom. One of the men then walked out of the classroom and then said to Jeff, "Yo, Jeff. We need you inside for a second." Jeff then said, "Hmph. Okay." Jeff then followed the man and entered the classroom. Jeff did not seem very surprised at the amount of military men in the classroom. Then Jeff said, "Whats up? You guys need me for your plans?" The leader then said, "Yes, indeed. We need to make a plan to make all the students enter one classroom at the end of the day." Jeff then said, "Well, you guys need to be more considerate before attempting to capture all of the students. Depending on the student you capture, some of them can be some use to you and some of them can just be useless and I don't think you guys would want any crying wimps with you." The men then went silent for a few moments realizing what he is saying is true. Tom and Bob got even more curious to know what their plans with the students were. Tom then said, "I'm guessing they are gonna capture the students to use them for something? What would the military possibly use students for?" Bob then said, "Hmm... Maybe they would use the students as some type of source for their weapons or maybe even use the students as soldiers? Or they are just gonna abuse us or possibly try to get some of the students killed?" Tom then shivered and said, "Ehh... I hope not." Tom and Bob then turned back to the window to continue hearing what they are saying. One of the men in the class said, "Maybe we should only take the older kids since the younger ones are definitely of no use to us. Maybe we should only take the ones in 7th grade or higher." Tom and Bob got even more afraid because they were both in 8th grade. Then one of the men said, "You are partially correct, however, I suggest that we actually wait until we do the plan to capture the students. Maybe we should wait a day or 2 and watch the students to see what students seem of use to us and what students are useless so we don't accidentally capture the worthless ones." When Tom heard him say "the worthless ones", Tom then wondered what he meant by that. Tom then said to Bob, "What can he possibly mean by the worthless ones?" Bob then said, "Dude, you're asking me once again? I have no idea. I'm assuming that they possibly just don't want the weak and small students and they probably only want the stronger ones. Maybe?" Tom then said, "Well, all we know now is that these men are planning to bring us and all the students into one room and then capture them with the use of Bob then said, "Uhh... Will your parents actually allow you to bring me into your house all of a sudden?" Tom then said, "Yep. Definitely, as long as they know that it's a friend of mine from school, then they will always allow guests in. Don't you know me, Bob?" Bob then said, "Alright, sounds cool." Tom and Bob then turned back to the window to hear what the men are saying in the classroom. Another man said, "Alright. So here is a plan, we will wait for 2 school days and we will visit the school and look like normal visitors to watch the students. We will observe how their schedule works and how the students are like whether they are weak or strong. We will try to see what grade contains the most strongest students and we will then the next day, arrange a period where the students will come to a certain classrooms at the end of the day, we will lock the doors on them without their attention and immediately spray them all with The leader then stood up and said, "Sounds good but one thing, don't you think the people outside will be creeped out and they will suspect something if they see us come out of the school carrying All the men were talking and laughing and what not and they were now walking out of the classroom and walking out of the school. Tom and Bob seemed like they were slightly relieved because they couldn't stand sitting in the vent anymore. Tom then said, "Well, looks like it is time we make our leave and go home man. Let's get out of here and come over to my house to make some counter plans." Bob then said, "Alright. Sounds awesome! I want to finally get out of this vent already. I just can't stand it." Tom then said, "Ok, now lets retrace our steps in this vent and turn around back to the bathroom then we will leave from there." Bob then said, "Wait a sec, but the bathroom door is locked from the inside! So we will get trapped in the bathroom if we go back there again!" Tom stood silent for a few moments realizing what Bob just pointed out. Tom then said, "Oh boy. I wish I thought about that earlier. It looks like we must find another path out of this vent ourselves instead of retracing our steps. This will be one heck of a challenge man." Will Tom and Bob ever be able to find an alternate path out of the vent? Will they be able to make a counter plan and help save the students in their school? Find out in the next upcoming chapters! Thank you very much for reading and have an awesome vizzed day everyone! Any constructive feedback is always appreciated! The Prologue of this story can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71309 Chapters 1-3 of this story can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71409 Chapters 4-5 of this story can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71449 Chapter 6 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71489 Chapter 7 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71532 Chapter 8 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71582 Chapter 9 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71627 And chapter 10 can be found here: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=71669 And that list continues to grow. I wonder how much bigger it can get. XD Now, let us continue typing up the story: Chapter 11: End of the Meeting Tom and Bob continued to sit inside the vent and continued to hear what the men were saying in the classroom. One of the men then walked out of the classroom and then said to Jeff, "Yo, Jeff. We need you inside for a second." Jeff then said, "Hmph. Okay." Jeff then followed the man and entered the classroom. Jeff did not seem very surprised at the amount of military men in the classroom. Then Jeff said, "Whats up? You guys need me for your plans?" The leader then said, "Yes, indeed. We need to make a plan to make all the students enter one classroom at the end of the day." Jeff then said, "Well, you guys need to be more considerate before attempting to capture all of the students. Depending on the student you capture, some of them can be some use to you and some of them can just be useless and I don't think you guys would want any crying wimps with you." The men then went silent for a few moments realizing what he is saying is true. Tom and Bob got even more curious to know what their plans with the students were. Tom then said, "I'm guessing they are gonna capture the students to use them for something? What would the military possibly use students for?" Bob then said, "Hmm... Maybe they would use the students as some type of source for their weapons or maybe even use the students as soldiers? Or they are just gonna abuse us or possibly try to get some of the students killed?" Tom then shivered and said, "Ehh... I hope not." Tom and Bob then turned back to the window to continue hearing what they are saying. One of the men in the class said, "Maybe we should only take the older kids since the younger ones are definitely of no use to us. Maybe we should only take the ones in 7th grade or higher." Tom and Bob got even more afraid because they were both in 8th grade. Then one of the men said, "You are partially correct, however, I suggest that we actually wait until we do the plan to capture the students. Maybe we should wait a day or 2 and watch the students to see what students seem of use to us and what students are useless so we don't accidentally capture the worthless ones." When Tom heard him say "the worthless ones", Tom then wondered what he meant by that. Tom then said to Bob, "What can he possibly mean by the worthless ones?" Bob then said, "Dude, you're asking me once again? I have no idea. I'm assuming that they possibly just don't want the weak and small students and they probably only want the stronger ones. Maybe?" Tom then said, "Well, all we know now is that these men are planning to bring us and all the students into one room and then capture them with the use of Bob then said, "Uhh... Will your parents actually allow you to bring me into your house all of a sudden?" Tom then said, "Yep. Definitely, as long as they know that it's a friend of mine from school, then they will always allow guests in. Don't you know me, Bob?" Bob then said, "Alright, sounds cool." Tom and Bob then turned back to the window to hear what the men are saying in the classroom. Another man said, "Alright. So here is a plan, we will wait for 2 school days and we will visit the school and look like normal visitors to watch the students. We will observe how their schedule works and how the students are like whether they are weak or strong. We will try to see what grade contains the most strongest students and we will then the next day, arrange a period where the students will come to a certain classrooms at the end of the day, we will lock the doors on them without their attention and immediately spray them all with The leader then stood up and said, "Sounds good but one thing, don't you think the people outside will be creeped out and they will suspect something if they see us come out of the school carrying All the men were talking and laughing and what not and they were now walking out of the classroom and walking out of the school. Tom and Bob seemed like they were slightly relieved because they couldn't stand sitting in the vent anymore. Tom then said, "Well, looks like it is time we make our leave and go home man. Let's get out of here and come over to my house to make some counter plans." Bob then said, "Alright. Sounds awesome! I want to finally get out of this vent already. I just can't stand it." Tom then said, "Ok, now lets retrace our steps in this vent and turn around back to the bathroom then we will leave from there." Bob then said, "Wait a sec, but the bathroom door is locked from the inside! So we will get trapped in the bathroom if we go back there again!" Tom stood silent for a few moments realizing what Bob just pointed out. Tom then said, "Oh boy. I wish I thought about that earlier. It looks like we must find another path out of this vent ourselves instead of retracing our steps. This will be one heck of a challenge man." Will Tom and Bob ever be able to find an alternate path out of the vent? Will they be able to make a counter plan and help save the students in their school? Find out in the next upcoming chapters! Thank you very much for reading and have an awesome vizzed day everyone! Any constructive feedback is always appreciated! |
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Interesting. Seems like it could be suspense What are the troops going to use the students for. Also what are the students going to do. This story gives me the impression that is a suspense. |
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I probably should have read the previous chapters before jumping right into this one, but I was being impatient.
Nice work, man! I'm enjoying what I've seen so far, and I plan to be following it now. Maybe you could consider not making yourself post a chapter everyday? It would probably let you be more particular about what happens in every chapter, as well as not requiring you to rush the chapters. I don't know, just a thought. Anyway, nice story and keep up the good work. Nice work, man! I'm enjoying what I've seen so far, and I plan to be following it now. Maybe you could consider not making yourself post a chapter everyday? It would probably let you be more particular about what happens in every chapter, as well as not requiring you to rush the chapters. I don't know, just a thought. Anyway, nice story and keep up the good work. |
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