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01-15-14 11:52 PM
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September 11th, 2050, 11:11 A.M.

Hello! My name is Darren D. Drenyl. Yeah, I know, my initials are D.D.D. Anyways, I am 21 years old. At the moment, I am serving the US, my country, by fighting in World War III. South Korea and Iran have decided to team up and conquer the US. Exactly two hours ago, these two countries attacked the White House located in our nation's capitol of Washington D.C. Considering the US contains the most powerful armed forces of any country, we had successfully defended this attack with only 200 guards within less than one hour. Fifty people had been killed. 15 of the casualties had been soldiers and the other 35 had been innocent civilians. I used to work at the White House with the NSA. My duty was to protect the President of the US, Hilary Clinton, but ever since I felt devoted to serve my country, I had decided to resign. Thank God I was late to work or I would have most likely been the 51st person to get killed. At least there are 11,000,000,000 people living on Earth, but still. To be honest, I feel extremely surprised the attack had been nuclear-free. If South Korea and Iran had thought less about their strike, the whole entire world could have most likely been wiped out of the Universe, but let's not wonder about that. Anyways, I would understand why South Korea would attack us, but Iran? Seriously? I mean, come on, we have remained allies with them for more than 25 years. We both had signed a peace treaty and everything and actually tended to maintain it. In the year of 2013 when Barack Obama was the US President, he had trusted Iran. That level of trust had raised after Iran had agreed to allow the US to inspect and reduce their supplies of nuclear weaponry. Though, signs of untrustworthiness of Iran had remained. Unfortunately, I only recall two of those signs, but they remained significant ones at that. The first sign had been the very first war against only Iran. That war had lasted from 2003 all the way to 2008. That was five years! The US knew tension would always remain between them and Iran. The other sign of untrustworthiness that I recall was when Iran held an innocent civilian America against his very own will. An innocent civilian? That just makes me sick! Anyways, he had been imprisoned from the year of 2003, the year the very first war against Iran had begun, all the way to 2020. That is 17 years! Iran charged 500,000,000 dollars for this civilian's release, but the US had been unable to afford because of the War of Terror against Afghanistan. We were too busy worrying about our armed forces and could not worry about anything else. The War of Terror had lasted from 2001 to 2020. After that war, the US was able to pay the 500,000,000 dollars and returned the American straight to his family where he was and felt safe and sound. That was our last war until this World War III. That peaceful break of 30 years of conflicting has finally been broken. Ever since World War III has broken out, life is going to become even harder. I have been away from my... family and I am also risking my very own life. I am certain my family misses me back up there within the state of Maine, but I had felt too dedicated to serve my country. The General is calling for me. I shall return later on. Bye!
September 11th, 2050, 11:11 A.M.

Hello! My name is Darren D. Drenyl. Yeah, I know, my initials are D.D.D. Anyways, I am 21 years old. At the moment, I am serving the US, my country, by fighting in World War III. South Korea and Iran have decided to team up and conquer the US. Exactly two hours ago, these two countries attacked the White House located in our nation's capitol of Washington D.C. Considering the US contains the most powerful armed forces of any country, we had successfully defended this attack with only 200 guards within less than one hour. Fifty people had been killed. 15 of the casualties had been soldiers and the other 35 had been innocent civilians. I used to work at the White House with the NSA. My duty was to protect the President of the US, Hilary Clinton, but ever since I felt devoted to serve my country, I had decided to resign. Thank God I was late to work or I would have most likely been the 51st person to get killed. At least there are 11,000,000,000 people living on Earth, but still. To be honest, I feel extremely surprised the attack had been nuclear-free. If South Korea and Iran had thought less about their strike, the whole entire world could have most likely been wiped out of the Universe, but let's not wonder about that. Anyways, I would understand why South Korea would attack us, but Iran? Seriously? I mean, come on, we have remained allies with them for more than 25 years. We both had signed a peace treaty and everything and actually tended to maintain it. In the year of 2013 when Barack Obama was the US President, he had trusted Iran. That level of trust had raised after Iran had agreed to allow the US to inspect and reduce their supplies of nuclear weaponry. Though, signs of untrustworthiness of Iran had remained. Unfortunately, I only recall two of those signs, but they remained significant ones at that. The first sign had been the very first war against only Iran. That war had lasted from 2003 all the way to 2008. That was five years! The US knew tension would always remain between them and Iran. The other sign of untrustworthiness that I recall was when Iran held an innocent civilian America against his very own will. An innocent civilian? That just makes me sick! Anyways, he had been imprisoned from the year of 2003, the year the very first war against Iran had begun, all the way to 2020. That is 17 years! Iran charged 500,000,000 dollars for this civilian's release, but the US had been unable to afford because of the War of Terror against Afghanistan. We were too busy worrying about our armed forces and could not worry about anything else. The War of Terror had lasted from 2001 to 2020. After that war, the US was able to pay the 500,000,000 dollars and returned the American straight to his family where he was and felt safe and sound. That was our last war until this World War III. That peaceful break of 30 years of conflicting has finally been broken. Ever since World War III has broken out, life is going to become even harder. I have been away from my... family and I am also risking my very own life. I am certain my family misses me back up there within the state of Maine, but I had felt too dedicated to serve my country. The General is calling for me. I shall return later on. Bye!
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Excellent chapter, Denz! I am already looking forward the the next installment of this story in suspense. This is a great first chapter to kick off a story that obviously has some potential. You've got story writing talent! Keep it up . And I find it creative how you set it to take place in the future. Nice job!
Excellent chapter, Denz! I am already looking forward the the next installment of this story in suspense. This is a great first chapter to kick off a story that obviously has some potential. You've got story writing talent! Keep it up . And I find it creative how you set it to take place in the future. Nice job!
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I really like your writing, Denz! It was an enjoyable read for sure!
I can't wait to see the next installment. I can't wait to learn more about the attack and what will be done to stop it.
Keep writing!
I really like your writing, Denz! It was an enjoyable read for sure!
I can't wait to see the next installment. I can't wait to learn more about the attack and what will be done to stop it.
Keep writing!
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Sounds good! You can really build up the suspense, and it's interesting to hear how the things in the future are.
Sounds good! You can really build up the suspense, and it's interesting to hear how the things in the future are.
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