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10-06-13 07:49 PM
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Hope you guys enjoy this ocean dance!


A gentle wind blows against me
A specter, I do not see,
Wishes to dance to the waves of the sea
I spin and gracefully dance
Lost and trapped in a trance
As the gentle wind wraps about me
The dance comes to an end and the wind lets me be
I spare the sea a glance
Wondering when I will have a second phantom dance


Hope you guys enjoy this ocean dance!


A gentle wind blows against me
A specter, I do not see,
Wishes to dance to the waves of the sea
I spin and gracefully dance
Lost and trapped in a trance
As the gentle wind wraps about me
The dance comes to an end and the wind lets me be
I spare the sea a glance
Wondering when I will have a second phantom dance


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(edited by luv2game! on 10-08-13 11:48 AM)    

10-07-13 08:53 PM
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luv2game! : That was pretty good!
luv2game! : That was pretty good!
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luv2game! : The story you posted right now looks pretty promising, I'm looking forward on the completed version.
luv2game! : The story you posted right now looks pretty promising, I'm looking forward on the completed version.
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IgorBird122 : Thanks very much. It's finished, so I'm going to update it today. Thanks for reading!
IgorBird122 : Thanks very much. It's finished, so I'm going to update it today. Thanks for reading!
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I like it, it's short and easy to read, but it still holds a lot of meaning. Poems like this can hold a lot of potential, so I hope that you go ahead and decide to do some more becasue I would love to read them.
I like it, it's short and easy to read, but it still holds a lot of meaning. Poems like this can hold a lot of potential, so I hope that you go ahead and decide to do some more becasue I would love to read them.
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zanderlex : Thanks a bunch! I do plan on doing more! Thanks for the kind comment!

@Dragonlord Stephi: Glad you liked it!
zanderlex : Thanks a bunch! I do plan on doing more! Thanks for the kind comment!

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