Hey Guys,I'm here to review a great game called Sonic Battle!

Graphics-8
The graphics are great for the GBA!It's kind of like Paper Mario too,where you have a 3d level with 2d sprites!The graphics Are great!

Sound-9
The music is great!And the sounds!But Amy Rose And Cream the Rabbit's voice can get annoying sometimes.

Addictiveness-8 You will always find your self coming back to this game!Maybe not for the story mode,but the battle mode is super cool!You get to play as who ever you want,pick who you want to fight,pick a level and boom!

Story-7
I'm gonna try to say the story without any spoiling,but here it goes!Dr.Robotnik (Or Eggman) Dumps a robot known by the name of Giziod,
Sonic finds the Gizoid,and later meets up with Tails,they name him Emerl And Try to teach him fighting skills while collecting the chaos emeralds.Overrall,the story is pretty good.

Difficulty-6
This game can be hard at times but not a lot of the time.

Overall-This game is great and you should give it a try!

WaysideFan2002 : Hello there! How are you? . . . I'm great! ..

Okay. Thanks for making this review, it was interesting to read! Thanks for letting us know at the start of the review what game you were going to be reviewing.

You divided your review into different sections, so it was organised and structured well; this made it easier to read your review, thank you! You were enthusiastic in your review with your exclamation marks; this kept me hooked into your review! It excites me when a reviewer uses enthusiasm in their reviews.

I think you could have added a lot more detail in your reviews. Some sentences were very valid but needed more detail, and really they would have benefited from this detail.

For Example:  "The music is great!And the sounds!" Firstly, you need to space out your sentences. Secondly, you could have really developed that sentence! This is what you could have said:

"The sounds in this game were great; they really appealed to my senses and made me really get into the music in a sense. The sounds were very similar to that of the music; they were cheery and extremely fun to listen to!"

See? I turned less than half of a sentence into almost two full sentences within the space of 5 seconds! That's all it takes to develop a point.

Thanks for writing this review, work on what I said and you will improve!

Good Luck!

This is pretty good, you had some great descriptions and your review was short and to the point. I like that and I think you did a great job of keeping it simple, organized and easy to read. However I think you could've said  a little more about each of the topics, like you could say more about a topic to further prove your point, if you explain what makes that specific part contribute to the game being good for each of the categories, word count shouldn't be a problem.


If you give evidence that supports your point on the game and reflects your scores it will be a longer more in depth review. Just keep practicing! I like this review because of the neatness and its simplicity. You could just elaborate by saying why parts of the game are great like saying "The graphics were great and they looked realistic and they were sharp and they are a big improvement from prior games" If you extend your sentence , it will further prove your point you are trying to make and it will make your review more descriptive and much more detailed.


I hope that this helps you with your future reviews, but keep up the good work and keep making more reviews! Remember, practice makes perfect, and with a little more practice, your reviews will get more detailed and longer. Just keep working hard and keep practicing and you will eventually get in the habit of making awesome reviews, keep it up!

First off hello I am linkmaster99, and I will tell you for your first ever review, you did amazing. I won't pressure you to much on the detail because then again this is your first one. I enjoyed reading it, and I also have to say, I agree with everything you told us. I used to have Sonic Battle on the original Game Boy Advance. I really enjoyed it, and it always kept me surprised every story, I went to. My favorite story of all in this game was the final chapter. I like Emerl's story. It was fun how you finish up getting things that would take you forever to do on a original sonic characters story so there you have it. Nice work, and I would really appreciate if you made more reviews. I believe every time you make one you will gain a level, and be a expert reviewer .

Great Review,Nice One you have made it proffesional,great job!Very great Job as a review.I Belive your gonna do reviews perfectly,I love this review very awesome-ly