My 3th Review! Enjoy Reading! This time about Pokémon Light Platinum!

First the Graphics: The games looks okay, the Houses are okay, and the Trainers as well.
The Female Character is ugly because she had ugly clothes and long hair, I don't like that, that's why I choose the Male! 
The Male Character is okay because he has okay clothes and I like his cap!
The Male and Female Main Characters could be better Designed!
Pokémon Sprites are Small, they could be Bigger!
In the game I've found a lot of Glitches, I don't like all but it's okay!
The Graphics are okay, I'll give a 7

Second the Sound: I like and love the R/S/E Sound and this Game has the same Sound! Yay!
The Battle Scenes Music is good and the Music of the Towns, I like the Sound.
And some Pokémon Cry's are wrong! I don't like that! (Most of the Gen 4 and 5 Pokémon)
I'll give a 9, Overall the Sound is good!

Third the Addictiveness: I like this Game!
You can catch all Pokémon from Gen 1 to Gen 5, that's a lot!
This Game is fun, you can catch really a lot of Pokémon! And you can Create more Teams!
And you can catch almost every Legendary Pokémon, that's cool!
Also you can get a lot of Pokémon from People in Towns, almost in every town one! (Including Starter Pokémon!) Really amazing!  
I'll give a 9, it's really good!

Fourth the Story: The Story very good!
It's very long, and there's a lot to do!
You can defeat 16 Gyms and the Elite Four + The Evil Team, Team Steam.
Also you can catch a lot of Pokémon of course!
You can travel a lot in 2 Regions Zherry and Lauren! < This Game is not boring trough that!
I'll give a 9.

Fifth the Depth: You can do a lot in this Game, it's very long!
The Creator of this Game made a lot of things to do, that's very good!
I like it, that a Game is very long, that's making the Game more fun!
I'll give a 10. 

Sixth Difficulty: The game is sometimes Hard!
Almost all Trainers are using a lot of Pokémon like 5 Pokémon even in the Begin when you only have one Pokémon! < That's not easy to beat!
The Trainers are using Pokémon from Gen 1 to Gen 5. That's good, I like to fight with different Pokémon!
Also the Elite Four and the Champion are very tough! (I could beat them not easy!)
I'll give a 7.

Overall: This Game is fun because you can catch Pokémon from Gen 1 to Gen 5! (Almost all Legendary's too! ) 
With a lot of Glitches, this Game it still fun to play!
Also, it's very fun that the Safari Zone is at Central City, one of the Begin City's 
That says enough that you can catch in the Begin also a lot of Pokémon!
Even the Pokémon that are hard to find like Feebas, you can find and catch the most of them easy!
Well the Game is fun! If I was you, I should play this Game, even with the things that aren't fun! 
This Game deserves a 9!

So this was my 3th Review, I hope you like it!
Note: I edited my Review!

tornado your review is great! Its really good!

Thanks both, I'll edit my Review! (I sometimes forget some things! )

A great review! You commented on many aspects of the game, however, I agree with Likki's point, you should explain why you think certain aspects of the game are 'good' or 'ugly'. Why do you think this? What's 'good' about the battle scene music? etc. But very nice review! I've never played this game before, but because of this review, I might just give it a go! I'd give this review 4.5 / 5!

TornadoMudkip : Very nice review I enjoyed reading it. however I may wanna note there is always a certain way you can expand these categories. Such as what's you're reason for likeing the sound. So In future reviews just saying you can keep that in mind. Overall good work I'll be giving this review a 5/5

Thanks both, I'm not very good in explaining things! (My next one will be better!)

Again, I'd just like to stress the details. Details are what seperates good reviews from great reviews, in my opinion.

For example: "The Female Character is ugly because she had ugly clothes and long hair, I don't like that, that's why I choose the Male!
The Male Character is okay because he has okay clothes and I like his cap!"

What do they look like? Why is the guy's clothes better? Does it just look better on him, or are the clothes nice?

Also, what are the glitches you've noticed? If you just mention that "I've seen a few glitches, like blablabla, and blablabla." That would help convince people that "Yes, this is a good game to try" or "I shouldn't be trying this one, I don't like that glitch." Just those kind of things.