I love the Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time. I didn't grow up in the SNES and N64 era, so I didn't get to play it until the remake on the 3DS. I loved it, and behind Kid Icarus: Uprising, it was my all time favorite 3DS game. A few days ago, I decided to revisit it on Vizzed.com, and I still love it just as much. I gave the game a 9.5 because no game is absolutely perfect (except for Skyrim and Uncharted 2), but it is still ultra-fun, and almost defines "classic game". Now I gave the game a 7 for graphics because while the graphics are slightly better than the Mario games, you could still find better graphics on other N64 games like Banjo-Kazooie and Conker. I gave the sound a 6 since there are some dungeons that have some pretty crappy music, and there is the infamous BEEP-BEEP, BEEP-BEEP when you are low on health, but otherwise the music is good. This game got a 9 for addictiveness since the replay value is average, but I spent entire afternoons working on some of the dungeons (but I still hate the water temple). The story is a 10 because the overall story is good, and also there are a bunch of mini-stories mixed in that are great and don't come close to ruining the overall experience. The depth is 10, because, just like Fallout 3, the world is huge and there is new things to explore everywhere. Finally, the difficulty is 4  since you don't exactly blow through the game, but it is still pretty easy. I going to say, if you haven't played this game, you definitely should.

link965 : Not bad here  but a few tips i can possibly give   try spacing out to make your reviews easier and read have grammer and punctation . And try breaking down categories some more.but for a beginnger review nice work. keep on trying and you ll eventually get the hang of it

The Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time is one of the best games I have ever played.  Even though I am not very good at it, it still is a very fun game.  The graphics alone just bring you in to the great gameplay this masterpiece has.  I have the actual game and I always pop this one into my black N64 any day.  The remake for the 3DS was great also.  In my opinion, I think that this games is the best Zelda game ever created.  

A bit short but okay for a newbie.
You should try to put a structure to your review and separate it up into sections or categories
such as graphics, sound, addictiveness and so on.

link965 : Great review , I also love the legend of Zelda : OOT to , its the greatest game in the whole world , you can't ask more from this game except the fact they made a remark for the 3DS .

Good review overall but I think that you should have spaced it out more and put it into paragraphs. That may have made it a lot easyer to read. Good job. Could use some more detail.

Like everyone else said, I think it was a pretty good review for a 12-year-old newbie's first post, but you should have broken it down into paragraphs and maybe added a section for each rating (gameplay, soundtrack, depth, etc.). But, still, I have to say that it's a pretty good review for your first as a Vizzed user.