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12-29-15 12:56 PM
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This story is about a girl named Mia. She was blonde, kind, but could also be a bit pushy. She was about to be the best student of the entire school. She took part of a competition, which is about making tests and succeed in it. However, she's not here today. Nobody knows where she is......

Mia was in her house, somewhere in England. They say she lived in a place where mostly the fresh smell of manure is hanging around there because of the farms...
Mia: "My god, it's another peaceful friday morning."
She stretched.

Mia: "Yawn! Maybe i should check what's on the news."

She turned the radio on, and took a seat on her couch.
Man on the radio: "And now you get the weather from our beloved Ellie. Hello, Ellie!"
Ellie on the radio: "Hello, Sam! So, today is gonna be a sunny summerday: It's gonna be..."

The phone rang. Mia picked up the phone. "Hello?"
???: "Mia! I-it's me, Paul! I'm now on that island y-you heard about. R-remember?"
Mia: "Oh yeah, that island you had to check if it's 'dangerous'. Haha! Well, what was it, dad?"
Dad: "Well, it turned out to be disaster! I'll send you a picture of a random view, but the whole island is terribly dangerous!!! The volcano there turned out to be active, and just erupted!!"
Mia: "What?!"
Dad: "I'm not sure if i'll be able to see you again... But if i'll die here, you have to go to your uncle right after you heard that!"
Mia: "D-dad... You're not telling me that... *sniff*"
CLICK! BEEP! BEEP!
Her dad hung up. Mia was sad and worried. She was walking around in circles, thinking about what she could do for her father. She suddenly got an idea.

Mia ran to her suitcase, laying down under her bed. It wasn't used for a while. She picked it up, and lay it down on her bed. She quickly packed her stuff, and ran outside the house, closing the door. Mia: "God, my father's in trouble now..."

She forgot one thing, though: Her car keys. She had to run inside the house, picked up her keys and ran again towards her car.
???: "Hey, Mia!"
Mia: "*gasp*"
It was a bully from school. He seemed to be in a funny mood. His name was John.
John: "Look what's in my hand!"
She looked at his hand, then he slapped her in the face.
Mia, while laying down on the ground, said: "John... Ow... Why do you always do this?"
John: "Because newbies aren't supposed to be here. Now get the (***) out of here, before i kick you away!"
Mia, while standing up and attempting to go away, said: "weirdo..."
John grabbed her long, blonde hair and pulled her back.
John: "What did you just said? You twit!" He punched her hardly, released her, then walked away.
Mia with a bleeding cheek: "Ow... I'd better hurry up..."

Later, at the island Paul spoke of...


The island Paul spoke of first was a tropical resort. Now it's like a haunted forest: Scary and eerie. A boat came up to the island. It was Mia. She seemed to hired a boat, and went to the island. Once she was there, she hopped out of the boat.

Mia: "DAAAAAD!?"
No answer.
Mia: "DAAAAAD?! Come on, i know you're here!"
Parrots were yelling.
Mia: "DAAAAAA-..."
An arm dashed out of the sand. It was an arm with ripped clothing and a grey skin. Basically it wasn't a human.
Mia: "AAAAAAGH!! H-HELP!"
A whole grey body with ripped clothes came out of the sand. And he wasn't alone... There were more of them hidden in the sand. They seemed to be undead people. Zombies? You can say so.
Mia: "AAAGH! SHOO! BAD Z-ZOMBIES!"
She fell into the water, because she didn't knew she was going backwards and struggled. The zombies were getting closer. One of them even grabbed Mia's arm...
That zombie was being hit by a bullet of a gun. He and his friends were shot down, but were half-'alive'. But when all the zombies were shot down by Paul, it was too late. Mia seemed to be turning in a zombie too, and was accidentally shot down too.
Paul went back to England, To tell the school about his story. However, nobody believed him. So they thought HE killed his own daughter...

To be continued...
This story is about a girl named Mia. She was blonde, kind, but could also be a bit pushy. She was about to be the best student of the entire school. She took part of a competition, which is about making tests and succeed in it. However, she's not here today. Nobody knows where she is......

Mia was in her house, somewhere in England. They say she lived in a place where mostly the fresh smell of manure is hanging around there because of the farms...
Mia: "My god, it's another peaceful friday morning."
She stretched.

Mia: "Yawn! Maybe i should check what's on the news."

She turned the radio on, and took a seat on her couch.
Man on the radio: "And now you get the weather from our beloved Ellie. Hello, Ellie!"
Ellie on the radio: "Hello, Sam! So, today is gonna be a sunny summerday: It's gonna be..."

The phone rang. Mia picked up the phone. "Hello?"
???: "Mia! I-it's me, Paul! I'm now on that island y-you heard about. R-remember?"
Mia: "Oh yeah, that island you had to check if it's 'dangerous'. Haha! Well, what was it, dad?"
Dad: "Well, it turned out to be disaster! I'll send you a picture of a random view, but the whole island is terribly dangerous!!! The volcano there turned out to be active, and just erupted!!"
Mia: "What?!"
Dad: "I'm not sure if i'll be able to see you again... But if i'll die here, you have to go to your uncle right after you heard that!"
Mia: "D-dad... You're not telling me that... *sniff*"
CLICK! BEEP! BEEP!
Her dad hung up. Mia was sad and worried. She was walking around in circles, thinking about what she could do for her father. She suddenly got an idea.

Mia ran to her suitcase, laying down under her bed. It wasn't used for a while. She picked it up, and lay it down on her bed. She quickly packed her stuff, and ran outside the house, closing the door. Mia: "God, my father's in trouble now..."

She forgot one thing, though: Her car keys. She had to run inside the house, picked up her keys and ran again towards her car.
???: "Hey, Mia!"
Mia: "*gasp*"
It was a bully from school. He seemed to be in a funny mood. His name was John.
John: "Look what's in my hand!"
She looked at his hand, then he slapped her in the face.
Mia, while laying down on the ground, said: "John... Ow... Why do you always do this?"
John: "Because newbies aren't supposed to be here. Now get the (***) out of here, before i kick you away!"
Mia, while standing up and attempting to go away, said: "weirdo..."
John grabbed her long, blonde hair and pulled her back.
John: "What did you just said? You twit!" He punched her hardly, released her, then walked away.
Mia with a bleeding cheek: "Ow... I'd better hurry up..."

Later, at the island Paul spoke of...


The island Paul spoke of first was a tropical resort. Now it's like a haunted forest: Scary and eerie. A boat came up to the island. It was Mia. She seemed to hired a boat, and went to the island. Once she was there, she hopped out of the boat.

Mia: "DAAAAAD!?"
No answer.
Mia: "DAAAAAD?! Come on, i know you're here!"
Parrots were yelling.
Mia: "DAAAAAA-..."
An arm dashed out of the sand. It was an arm with ripped clothing and a grey skin. Basically it wasn't a human.
Mia: "AAAAAAGH!! H-HELP!"
A whole grey body with ripped clothes came out of the sand. And he wasn't alone... There were more of them hidden in the sand. They seemed to be undead people. Zombies? You can say so.
Mia: "AAAGH! SHOO! BAD Z-ZOMBIES!"
She fell into the water, because she didn't knew she was going backwards and struggled. The zombies were getting closer. One of them even grabbed Mia's arm...
That zombie was being hit by a bullet of a gun. He and his friends were shot down, but were half-'alive'. But when all the zombies were shot down by Paul, it was too late. Mia seemed to be turning in a zombie too, and was accidentally shot down too.
Paul went back to England, To tell the school about his story. However, nobody believed him. So they thought HE killed his own daughter...

To be continued...
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(edited by Eirinn on 01-02-16 03:13 AM)    

12-29-15 01:51 PM
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Another great story here. I like how the plot is. I hope to see more chapters.
Another great story here. I like how the plot is. I hope to see more chapters.
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Nice job buddy.  Keep it up!
I'm waiting to read more chapters.
Nice job buddy.  Keep it up!
I'm waiting to read more chapters.
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Awesome story! Looking forward to it!
Awesome story! Looking forward to it!
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Fascinating story! I look forward to reading future chapters. Great job my man!
Fascinating story! I look forward to reading future chapters. Great job my man!
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