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Leviathan: A Sonnet
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So I decided to try my hand at doing a sonnet, a surprisingly strict form of poetry that I had fun doing, and I was doing some research on the Leviathan at the same time, so I wrote this, and then I thought I would look for some feedback, so if you wanna provide that I'd be very pleased


Scales bounced away arrows, and teeth sunk ships.
With eyes: tiny suns, and smoke pour'd from snout,
Leviathan, who take Jordan in lips,
And brake the backs of mountains in his spout.

The depths flow past the scaly serpent thing:
The mighty strength of master's majesty.
The grace and power of their lord, they sing:
"We have strength, and are clad in dignity!"

But the strength of the serpent he did see,
And in fear of others slew the female.
Now he searches 'round the world, as it be:
Searching for his love, the wind in his sail.

Bane of the deep, Leviathan: mourner,
Only lonely; curs'd and bless'd destroyer.


I'll let you try and figure out the meaning of the poem on your own. Try and be open-minded!

Question everything.
So I decided to try my hand at doing a sonnet, a surprisingly strict form of poetry that I had fun doing, and I was doing some research on the Leviathan at the same time, so I wrote this, and then I thought I would look for some feedback, so if you wanna provide that I'd be very pleased


Scales bounced away arrows, and teeth sunk ships.
With eyes: tiny suns, and smoke pour'd from snout,
Leviathan, who take Jordan in lips,
And brake the backs of mountains in his spout.

The depths flow past the scaly serpent thing:
The mighty strength of master's majesty.
The grace and power of their lord, they sing:
"We have strength, and are clad in dignity!"

But the strength of the serpent he did see,
And in fear of others slew the female.
Now he searches 'round the world, as it be:
Searching for his love, the wind in his sail.

Bane of the deep, Leviathan: mourner,
Only lonely; curs'd and bless'd destroyer.


I'll let you try and figure out the meaning of the poem on your own. Try and be open-minded!

Question everything.
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