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Dragonball ElniërS2 chapter 6 Elrics third war

 

07-13-15 09:51 AM
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Chapter 6 Elrics third war

1 day later, Kurastian prison

An 11 year old girl was looking through the bars.

“How long ago was it since I saw daylight?” the girl thought.

Suddenly a guard came dragging a man that was as bruised as she was, maybe even worse. “

And that’s what you get for killing that minion.” The guard said as he kicked the man inside.

The girl looked and saw that it was Elric.

“What would a man of about 20 do here.” The girl thought.

The guard kicked Elric again and then left.

“Hey, are you alright?” The girl asked.

“I’ll be fine, what’s your name?” Elric asked.

"Time for a small Zenkai." Elric thought.

“My name is Enia, what is your name?” Enia asked.

“My name is Elric, do you have a brother named Jarin?” Elric asked.

Enia gasped.

“Jarin, is he hurt?” Enia asked.

“No, he isn’t.” Elric said as he sat up.

Elric grabbed a senzu bean and was about to eat it when he saw Enia’s current state.

“Here eat this, it’ll make you feel better.” Elric said.

Enia looked confused at Elric.

“Eat it, they heal you, trust me.” Elric said.

Enia didn’t trust Elric but she was to hungry to resist and she ate it.

Enia completely healed.

“Wow, it’s like I was never hurt.” Enia said.

Elric grabbed another senzu bean and ate it himself.

Elric stood up and smiled at Enia.

“Well then, time to get us out of this mole house.” Elric said.

“What do you mean, the bars are electrified and there isn’t another way to escape.” Enia said.

“I do.” Elric said.

Elric turned into his Elniër form.

“Wh-What are you p-planning?” Enia asked.

Elric shot a Ki wave, destroying the bars.

“Impossible.” Enia said.

Elric walked out of the cell and shot more Ki blasts, destroying all prison doors.

The guards came with their blasters.

“Darn, I can’t let anyone else get hit.” Elric thought.

Elric moved to the first group and killed them before anyone knew what had happened or that he had moved.

Elric shot a Ki wave and killed the second group.

The third group looked at Elric in fear.

One of the guards shot his blaster.

Elric grabbed the Ki blast and destroyed it.

“I’ll give you guys a chance, get off this planet and I’ll let you live, if you do not, I’ll kill you too.” Elric threatened.

The group ran away in fear.

“How do you know they won’t come back with more?” Enia asked.

“Because I have 2 friends, one of which is just a tad bit weaker than me, the other certainly not weak either, destroying their weapons as we speak.” Elric said.

Elric saw a fourth group coming and killed them with a Ki wave.

“Now then, you can all leave, have a happy live once me and three people I call my friends have saved your world.” Elric said.

The crowd cheered and ran away.

Elric shot a Ki wave, destroying the outside wall.

The people went outside and ran away. The master of the place came.

“Who is destroying stuff here.” The master said.

“Oh that’s me, how are you today.” Elric said.

“You’ll be the first to die today by me.” The master said.

“Great, let’s go then.” Elric said.

Elric rapidly punched The master.

Meanwhile.

Potanto, Shellana and Tsunam landed on Elnië.

“Finally were here.” Tsunam said.

“So, where are they?” Potanto said.

“Just have patience you 2.” Shellana said as she glared at the 2.

Yellow, Goten, Blue and Lavender came.

“Hey guys, how is it going?” Goten said.

“Did you have a nice trip.” Yellow said.

“It was alright.” Potanto said.

“Great to hear.” Blue and Yellow said.

“Yeah, Yeah, I hoped that you Akaians had a bad ride that hurt a lot, right demi-brat.” Lavender said.

“Still as nice as ever huh.” Potanto said.

Lavender grunted.

“Hey Yellow, where’s Red.” Tsunam said.

“He’s training, why?” Yellow asked.

“So I can fight him again.” Tsunam said.

Suddenly Goku landed.

“Hey guys, how are you.” Goku asked.

“Hey Goku, what are you doing here?” Yellow asked.

Goku explained everything.

“That does sound like a problem.” Blue said.

“Pff, I bet I can beat him with ease.” Potanto and Lavender said at the same time.

They glared at each other. “Hahaha, you 2 really didn’t change.” Goku said.

Red came flying in.

“Who are you, you have a strong power.” Red said.

“I’m Goku, and who are you?” Goku asked.

“Oh you are Goku, my name is Red.” Red said.

“Hmm your power feels familiar.” Goku said.

“Oh yeah Goku, Red is my son, and Elric is the father.” Blue said.

“What, why didn’t any of you tell us sooner?” Goku asked.

“Dodge.” Lavender said.

Potanto and the others felt it too.

Everyone dodged some Ki blasts.

Potanto looked in the direction where it came from.

A guy stood there.

Goku turned ssj3, Potanto turned into an Oceana Akaian and Lavender turned into a demon Elniër.

“Guys don’t worry, we 3 will take care of it, we’ll be back soon, Red, Tsunam, don’t follow us, I mean it.” Potanto said.

“My name is Graziano, come and catch me if you can.” Graziano said as he flew off.

Potanto, Lavender and Goku followed him.

Author - will they win this fight, hope you enjoyed.

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Chapter 6 Elrics third war

1 day later, Kurastian prison

An 11 year old girl was looking through the bars.

“How long ago was it since I saw daylight?” the girl thought.

Suddenly a guard came dragging a man that was as bruised as she was, maybe even worse. “

And that’s what you get for killing that minion.” The guard said as he kicked the man inside.

The girl looked and saw that it was Elric.

“What would a man of about 20 do here.” The girl thought.

The guard kicked Elric again and then left.

“Hey, are you alright?” The girl asked.

“I’ll be fine, what’s your name?” Elric asked.

"Time for a small Zenkai." Elric thought.

“My name is Enia, what is your name?” Enia asked.

“My name is Elric, do you have a brother named Jarin?” Elric asked.

Enia gasped.

“Jarin, is he hurt?” Enia asked.

“No, he isn’t.” Elric said as he sat up.

Elric grabbed a senzu bean and was about to eat it when he saw Enia’s current state.

“Here eat this, it’ll make you feel better.” Elric said.

Enia looked confused at Elric.

“Eat it, they heal you, trust me.” Elric said.

Enia didn’t trust Elric but she was to hungry to resist and she ate it.

Enia completely healed.

“Wow, it’s like I was never hurt.” Enia said.

Elric grabbed another senzu bean and ate it himself.

Elric stood up and smiled at Enia.

“Well then, time to get us out of this mole house.” Elric said.

“What do you mean, the bars are electrified and there isn’t another way to escape.” Enia said.

“I do.” Elric said.

Elric turned into his Elniër form.

“Wh-What are you p-planning?” Enia asked.

Elric shot a Ki wave, destroying the bars.

“Impossible.” Enia said.

Elric walked out of the cell and shot more Ki blasts, destroying all prison doors.

The guards came with their blasters.

“Darn, I can’t let anyone else get hit.” Elric thought.

Elric moved to the first group and killed them before anyone knew what had happened or that he had moved.

Elric shot a Ki wave and killed the second group.

The third group looked at Elric in fear.

One of the guards shot his blaster.

Elric grabbed the Ki blast and destroyed it.

“I’ll give you guys a chance, get off this planet and I’ll let you live, if you do not, I’ll kill you too.” Elric threatened.

The group ran away in fear.

“How do you know they won’t come back with more?” Enia asked.

“Because I have 2 friends, one of which is just a tad bit weaker than me, the other certainly not weak either, destroying their weapons as we speak.” Elric said.

Elric saw a fourth group coming and killed them with a Ki wave.

“Now then, you can all leave, have a happy live once me and three people I call my friends have saved your world.” Elric said.

The crowd cheered and ran away.

Elric shot a Ki wave, destroying the outside wall.

The people went outside and ran away. The master of the place came.

“Who is destroying stuff here.” The master said.

“Oh that’s me, how are you today.” Elric said.

“You’ll be the first to die today by me.” The master said.

“Great, let’s go then.” Elric said.

Elric rapidly punched The master.

Meanwhile.

Potanto, Shellana and Tsunam landed on Elnië.

“Finally were here.” Tsunam said.

“So, where are they?” Potanto said.

“Just have patience you 2.” Shellana said as she glared at the 2.

Yellow, Goten, Blue and Lavender came.

“Hey guys, how is it going?” Goten said.

“Did you have a nice trip.” Yellow said.

“It was alright.” Potanto said.

“Great to hear.” Blue and Yellow said.

“Yeah, Yeah, I hoped that you Akaians had a bad ride that hurt a lot, right demi-brat.” Lavender said.

“Still as nice as ever huh.” Potanto said.

Lavender grunted.

“Hey Yellow, where’s Red.” Tsunam said.

“He’s training, why?” Yellow asked.

“So I can fight him again.” Tsunam said.

Suddenly Goku landed.

“Hey guys, how are you.” Goku asked.

“Hey Goku, what are you doing here?” Yellow asked.

Goku explained everything.

“That does sound like a problem.” Blue said.

“Pff, I bet I can beat him with ease.” Potanto and Lavender said at the same time.

They glared at each other. “Hahaha, you 2 really didn’t change.” Goku said.

Red came flying in.

“Who are you, you have a strong power.” Red said.

“I’m Goku, and who are you?” Goku asked.

“Oh you are Goku, my name is Red.” Red said.

“Hmm your power feels familiar.” Goku said.

“Oh yeah Goku, Red is my son, and Elric is the father.” Blue said.

“What, why didn’t any of you tell us sooner?” Goku asked.

“Dodge.” Lavender said.

Potanto and the others felt it too.

Everyone dodged some Ki blasts.

Potanto looked in the direction where it came from.

A guy stood there.

Goku turned ssj3, Potanto turned into an Oceana Akaian and Lavender turned into a demon Elniër.

“Guys don’t worry, we 3 will take care of it, we’ll be back soon, Red, Tsunam, don’t follow us, I mean it.” Potanto said.

“My name is Graziano, come and catch me if you can.” Graziano said as he flew off.

Potanto, Lavender and Goku followed him.

Author - will they win this fight, hope you enjoyed.

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Fun, Fun chapter. Exactly what I was wanting to read this evening with a cup of tea.

Btw, I love the name Graziano, sounds like he's the brother of Gepetto (the guy who made Pinocchio) Maybe I probably thought of that because I watched Pinocchio today, but whatever.

Or for us dutch folks, Pinokkio.
Fun, Fun chapter. Exactly what I was wanting to read this evening with a cup of tea.

Btw, I love the name Graziano, sounds like he's the brother of Gepetto (the guy who made Pinocchio) Maybe I probably thought of that because I watched Pinocchio today, but whatever.

Or for us dutch folks, Pinokkio.
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