if you guys saw my devient art version of this, they swore in it alot. so in this one, i've changed the languge so that its a bit approprete. so i hope you guys enjoy. if i missed any words, please let me know
One dark morning, Rachel and Leala went for a walk, at 8:00 am. "Rachel, I'm worried about you and Absolute Zero" "Why? are you afraid OZ (omegaZero) will fused with me while i'm Awakened AZR Again?" "not that. i'm afraid that if soul was destroyed by a blood sonic, You'll rampage!" "Sonic.EXE? HA! that mare AZR-Maverick will die when i use my 'Wings cutting through the night' move, followed by a shadow and blood haDUKEN move!" "Rachel, your so over confitent." "le-OH LOOK! A DOG!" Leala face palmed at Rachel "Rachel, you are such a derp." meanwhile, in the Nightmare relm, a soul called Soul, was resting with NightmareDragon and DarkLugi, ShadowSlasher and AZR's nightmare partners. when suddenly, a demonic voice scared Darklugi and Soul, saying "so, heres the idiots who killed Sanic and his team? i won't forgive anyone of you for that!" "Id-wait...your a maverick! Sonic.EXE! how dare you call the maverick hunters Idiots! i will Stop you!" Sonic.EXE laugh "How can you and your pitty little friends stop me when i have monsters, who drink people's blood, in the true world?" Soul growled and thought 'X, Zero, Axl, Rachel, Leala, if any of you can hear my voice, hide or fight!' meanwhile, in the true world, Rachel and Leala rushed back to the darkness hunter base "Rats, i hope Vatti is ok!" "...leala....i heard soul...we should hide or fight!" "Rachel, we're almost there!" X, Leala's device partner, inturupted "Rachel isn't lying, i heard Soul too. he said Hide or Fight" leala looked at Rachel then at the hunter base. Dashing in, Rachel ran to the medic, Matt, and randomly hugged him. "i need a hug." Rachel said, having a cute kitty smile. "Rachel, Leala" a small pink espeon yelled, "There are vampire like monster out there. You two are the only strong ones who can destroy vampires!" Rachel nodded and ran out the doors, her face was red with embarasment. "Ok, Alea!" leala said, following Rachel.
WHAT HAPPENS TO RACHEL AND LEALA, WILL SONIC.EXE KILL RACHEL OR LEALA? WHAT HAPPENS TO SOUL? TO BE CONTINUED!

RMJEtheReploid : 'Wings cutting through the night' move, followed by a shadow and blood haDUNKEN move!" You missed a space if you are counting grammar.

blue123489 : if your talking about her haduken, its a refrance to Street fighter. shes also a Shadow beast and she sometimes uses blood so thats why Rachel said 'Wings cutting through the night' move, followed by a shadow and blood haDUKEN move!"

RMJEtheReploid : Oh Good story anyway.

blue123489 : chapter 2 is gonna take a wile. after chapter 2 is done, i'll have to finish chapter 3. i hope chapter 3 will be the only one that i DON'T have to edit.

RMJEtheReploid : Maybe proofread chapter 2 and 3 when your done writing them? What date do you think your going to be cone with chapter 2 and 3?

blue123489 : they are already posted. i don't have an idea for chapter 4 yet. but chapter 2 and 3 are out.