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Could It Be?.... It Can't be! Say That It Isn't So! Can It Be Possible, That There Is Another Heroine?! Chapter 8


On Planet Speed Leggy preparations was made to blow up some other planets.

"Rayine." Said Leggy

"Yes my lord.  and how may I serve you?" said Rayine.

"I need you to hostile two children on earth please. I have received some information about those two children as they are not normal. They are special and rare. And their powers can be a good service to us. Now do anything that is necessary to get them. Even if it means to kill people who will stand in your way ok?" said Leggy.

Rayine smiled evilly and said

"Ok, and it shall be done at once my lord"

She left the throne room to go and do the job.

"Starrite and Muavil" said Leggy.

And they both said "Yes sire?"

"I need for the both of you to find out if there are anymore new sailor scouts, that I not know of. If they find Sailor Ceres and join up with her, they will be an unstoppable force to be dealt with." Said Leggy.

And they said "Yes lord Leggy!"

"We will both bring valuable information to you." said Muavil.

"You better do." Said Leggy.

"But sire. Why did she have to go to earth? Its my life long dream to go there and avenge someone!" said Starrite.

And Leggy said "Do as you are told Starrite. You will get your chance soon enough."

They both left with that, leggy was alone in the throne room and he said.

"I can not believe such a thing has happened, she must be destroyed. I will not allow anyone to stand in the way of my plans. Including that girl and her cat. I still can not believe that, this is happening. I am not going to let a group of powderpuff heroines stop my plans, I will not allow it at all."

Meanwhile back on earth, Luana and Amor had just finished having their breakfast.

"Wowee! That was great breakfast thanks Luana!" Said Amor.

And Luana replied back saying

"Anytime. And I have a question to ask Amor"

"Ask away!" said Amor.

"Well....I've been thinking. Are there any other new sailor scouts like me?" asked Luana.

And Amor said "I dunno....it could be possible. If we were to find them then we can fight together!"  

"Yes that is true. The sad part is that it can be any girl around me age. So we wouldn't know the right places to look for them. Do you think that they would want to appear to help me out fight the elites of evil?" said Luana.

Amor replied back saying "I am sure that they would want too....or some of them are not ready to be seen just yet...."

"Its just sad thinking about it that way...." said Luana.

"Aww....come on now, stay positive! I am sure that they will appear to help you when they feel that they are ready!" said Amor.

"Your right Amor. I shouldn't worry so much about it. Oh... I forgot. Its nearly the end of the summer holidays!" said Luana.

"And this means that, you are going back to school right?" asked Amor.

"Yeah...." said Luana.

"I mean it won't be so bad now right?"
said Amor

"Right! You've helped me changed Amor...and because of that. I know that I'll be able to make some good friends now" said Luana smiling.

Meanwhile in space Rayine thought

"Now....I wonder why lord Leggy wants me to find two little girls for.....there must be a reason behind it. I shall not fail like Megabyte did it’s a good thing that he is now dead. I can see planet earth. If I can remember correctly he said they are in an orphanage home..."

With Raiyne now close to earth. Will Luana be ready to face this new foe? Back at Luana's house.

"What are you doing Luana?" Asked Amor.

Luana replied back saying "I am ironing my new school uniform"

"It looks nice!" said Amor.

"Thanks. It looks a bit like my heroine clothes lol" said Luana.

"It sure does!" said Amor

Raiyne is now on earth.

"Hmmm....where to start looking for them? Maybe the schools as children go there" said Rayine.

She started to fly slowly. Then she saw a school, with children playing and running around inside the playground. So Rayine landed in front of the school. Then she used one of her blast attack to knock down the school gates. Some children saw, and started to scream. The teachers that were on duty escorted the children, safely back inside the school. And then the head teacher came out, as Rayine walked in. And the head teacher asked

"How can I help you?...."

"I am looking for two children who come from an orphanage home. Does any of the children that you have in this school come from that place" said Rayine.

"Why no.....all of the children from here come from a good home. So sorry. I can not help you." said the head teacher.

Rayine went up close to the head teacher and grabbed her neck tightly and said

"Are you lying to me?!"

Struggling to fight back she said "No I am not lying! Now please let me go!"

Rayine dropped the head teacher on the ground. And that head teacher coughed from that choke.

"Tsk. This is not going to be an easy job" said Rayine.

She flew up in the air, and continued on her search. Back in Luanas house Amor was watching tv, and then the news came on. The broadcaster stated that a school was attacked.

And Amor said "Luana quick, come and see what's on the news!"

Luana came rushing out from her bedroom and said

"What's the matter?!"

"A local school was attacked! Do you think that it was Megabyte? Because it look as if it was a blast attack...." said Amor.

"Lets go and investigate" said Luana.

Amor and Luana head on out to the school to see what happened. Meanwhile Rayine flew to places that has children in it, and causing destruction wherever she went. She was getting annoyed and said

"Where can those brats be?!"


She kept on flying until she came to a theme park just for children and she said

"This is a good place, they must be in here!"

As for Amor and Luana. They asked questions to the people who were victims of the damaged places.

"Now where did he go?" askes Luana

"I dunno but, he seems to be looking for something.....that's because any places with children in it, got damaged..." said amor.

Not so far off in the distance, Amor and Luana heard a huge explosion.

"Whoa.....what power!" said Amor.

"It must be coming from the children's theme park!" said Luana.

"Ok Lets go!" said Amor

In the children's theme park area, children, parents and other people were screaming. And also running away.

"Hmm......they must be around here." said Rayine.

She looked around and people gathered and they asked

"Who are you?! What do you want?! And what are you doing this?!"

"I am looking for two special children from the orphanage home. And anyone who dares to stand in my way of my mission, will be eliminated! Not unless you know where they are?" said Rayine

What Rayine does not know is that, in some kind of close corner place. Two odd children were in there hiding. Could they be the ones? Meanwhile Luana and Amor rushed to the scene and went into a hiding place.

"So its not Megabyte after all....." said Amor.

"Yeah....its a different person who is she Amor?" asked Luana.

"Her name is Rayine. She is the third elite in power. She is much more stronger than Megabyte. So be careful. Like some others, she is very smart of how she attacks. And she is not as reckless as Megabyte. Time to transform!"
said Amor

"Ceres power make up!"

"Speak you earthlings! Do you know where I can find an orphanage home or not?!" said Rayine who was getting inpatient.

"Well there is one around" said one woman.

"Tell me now then!" shouted Rayine.

"It isn't very polite to yell when asking for something" said someone behind the crowd.

"And so what?" said Rayine.

"And so. Then I will have to teach you some manners then" said the voice among the crowd.

Some people were trying to find this person. Someone spotted her and said

"Hey.....look who it is....make way for her!"

The crowd in one area started to move away. Until this person revealed herself as Sailor Ceres!

"So....you are Sailor Ceres." said Rayine

"Trying to hurt innocent children, people. Wherever you go, and as you please....That's unforgivable! In the name of Ceres I will flourish you!" said Sailor Ceres.

"Haha. I have been waiting for a chance to kill you myself. Today is my lucky day."
said Rayine

"I will stop you at all costs!" said Sailor Ceres, as she walked forward. She got her crescent wand out.

"Oh. So you are going to try use that blast on me, as you did with megabyte? I am a lot more stronger than he is. Go ahead and try I dare you." said Rayine.

"Love heartbeat flash!" said Sailor Ceres.

Rayine stood firm and blocked the attack. With her hand she crossed chopped cut off as if it was nothing.

"No....." said Sailor Ceres.

Rayine came with fast speed. And attack Sailor Ceres right in the stomach, which made her to fall down in pain

"Ha! I told you." said Rayine.

one man said "Oh no, Sailor Ceres needs help!"

Amor tried a surprise attack with her claws. But, Rayine saw this coming and slapped her hard onto the ground.

"Meowww...." said Amor in pain. 

"No Amor!" screamed Sailor Ceres.

Rayine laughed out loud so evilly and someone said

"You won't be laughing for long!"

"Who dares to say that?!" said Rayine

Caught off guard the person said

"Mysterious pulse attack!"

This made Rayine to fall some step backwards, and away from Sailor Ceres. This attack made Rayine to be confused as well due to the attack. Annoyed that happened she asked

"How dare you do that?! I demand to know! Who the hell are you?!"

Sailor Ceres still on the floor weakly in pain. Saw a figure like in front of her. This young girl had ginger hair and was wearing a white and green sailor uniform.

And this person said

"My name is Sailor Kaneko defender of earth! May the unknown light cleanse your sins!"


Wow another heroine?! What will she do next time?! Better stayed tuned to chapter 9!



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Could It Be?.... It Can't be! Say That It Isn't So! Can It Be Possible, That There Is Another Heroine?! Chapter 8


On Planet Speed Leggy preparations was made to blow up some other planets.

"Rayine." Said Leggy

"Yes my lord.  and how may I serve you?" said Rayine.

"I need you to hostile two children on earth please. I have received some information about those two children as they are not normal. They are special and rare. And their powers can be a good service to us. Now do anything that is necessary to get them. Even if it means to kill people who will stand in your way ok?" said Leggy.

Rayine smiled evilly and said

"Ok, and it shall be done at once my lord"

She left the throne room to go and do the job.

"Starrite and Muavil" said Leggy.

And they both said "Yes sire?"

"I need for the both of you to find out if there are anymore new sailor scouts, that I not know of. If they find Sailor Ceres and join up with her, they will be an unstoppable force to be dealt with." Said Leggy.

And they said "Yes lord Leggy!"

"We will both bring valuable information to you." said Muavil.

"You better do." Said Leggy.

"But sire. Why did she have to go to earth? Its my life long dream to go there and avenge someone!" said Starrite.

And Leggy said "Do as you are told Starrite. You will get your chance soon enough."

They both left with that, leggy was alone in the throne room and he said.

"I can not believe such a thing has happened, she must be destroyed. I will not allow anyone to stand in the way of my plans. Including that girl and her cat. I still can not believe that, this is happening. I am not going to let a group of powderpuff heroines stop my plans, I will not allow it at all."

Meanwhile back on earth, Luana and Amor had just finished having their breakfast.

"Wowee! That was great breakfast thanks Luana!" Said Amor.

And Luana replied back saying

"Anytime. And I have a question to ask Amor"

"Ask away!" said Amor.

"Well....I've been thinking. Are there any other new sailor scouts like me?" asked Luana.

And Amor said "I dunno....it could be possible. If we were to find them then we can fight together!"  

"Yes that is true. The sad part is that it can be any girl around me age. So we wouldn't know the right places to look for them. Do you think that they would want to appear to help me out fight the elites of evil?" said Luana.

Amor replied back saying "I am sure that they would want too....or some of them are not ready to be seen just yet...."

"Its just sad thinking about it that way...." said Luana.

"Aww....come on now, stay positive! I am sure that they will appear to help you when they feel that they are ready!" said Amor.

"Your right Amor. I shouldn't worry so much about it. Oh... I forgot. Its nearly the end of the summer holidays!" said Luana.

"And this means that, you are going back to school right?" asked Amor.

"Yeah...." said Luana.

"I mean it won't be so bad now right?"
said Amor

"Right! You've helped me changed Amor...and because of that. I know that I'll be able to make some good friends now" said Luana smiling.

Meanwhile in space Rayine thought

"Now....I wonder why lord Leggy wants me to find two little girls for.....there must be a reason behind it. I shall not fail like Megabyte did it’s a good thing that he is now dead. I can see planet earth. If I can remember correctly he said they are in an orphanage home..."

With Raiyne now close to earth. Will Luana be ready to face this new foe? Back at Luana's house.

"What are you doing Luana?" Asked Amor.

Luana replied back saying "I am ironing my new school uniform"

"It looks nice!" said Amor.

"Thanks. It looks a bit like my heroine clothes lol" said Luana.

"It sure does!" said Amor

Raiyne is now on earth.

"Hmmm....where to start looking for them? Maybe the schools as children go there" said Rayine.

She started to fly slowly. Then she saw a school, with children playing and running around inside the playground. So Rayine landed in front of the school. Then she used one of her blast attack to knock down the school gates. Some children saw, and started to scream. The teachers that were on duty escorted the children, safely back inside the school. And then the head teacher came out, as Rayine walked in. And the head teacher asked

"How can I help you?...."

"I am looking for two children who come from an orphanage home. Does any of the children that you have in this school come from that place" said Rayine.

"Why no.....all of the children from here come from a good home. So sorry. I can not help you." said the head teacher.

Rayine went up close to the head teacher and grabbed her neck tightly and said

"Are you lying to me?!"

Struggling to fight back she said "No I am not lying! Now please let me go!"

Rayine dropped the head teacher on the ground. And that head teacher coughed from that choke.

"Tsk. This is not going to be an easy job" said Rayine.

She flew up in the air, and continued on her search. Back in Luanas house Amor was watching tv, and then the news came on. The broadcaster stated that a school was attacked.

And Amor said "Luana quick, come and see what's on the news!"

Luana came rushing out from her bedroom and said

"What's the matter?!"

"A local school was attacked! Do you think that it was Megabyte? Because it look as if it was a blast attack...." said Amor.

"Lets go and investigate" said Luana.

Amor and Luana head on out to the school to see what happened. Meanwhile Rayine flew to places that has children in it, and causing destruction wherever she went. She was getting annoyed and said

"Where can those brats be?!"


She kept on flying until she came to a theme park just for children and she said

"This is a good place, they must be in here!"

As for Amor and Luana. They asked questions to the people who were victims of the damaged places.

"Now where did he go?" askes Luana

"I dunno but, he seems to be looking for something.....that's because any places with children in it, got damaged..." said amor.

Not so far off in the distance, Amor and Luana heard a huge explosion.

"Whoa.....what power!" said Amor.

"It must be coming from the children's theme park!" said Luana.

"Ok Lets go!" said Amor

In the children's theme park area, children, parents and other people were screaming. And also running away.

"Hmm......they must be around here." said Rayine.

She looked around and people gathered and they asked

"Who are you?! What do you want?! And what are you doing this?!"

"I am looking for two special children from the orphanage home. And anyone who dares to stand in my way of my mission, will be eliminated! Not unless you know where they are?" said Rayine

What Rayine does not know is that, in some kind of close corner place. Two odd children were in there hiding. Could they be the ones? Meanwhile Luana and Amor rushed to the scene and went into a hiding place.

"So its not Megabyte after all....." said Amor.

"Yeah....its a different person who is she Amor?" asked Luana.

"Her name is Rayine. She is the third elite in power. She is much more stronger than Megabyte. So be careful. Like some others, she is very smart of how she attacks. And she is not as reckless as Megabyte. Time to transform!"
said Amor

"Ceres power make up!"

"Speak you earthlings! Do you know where I can find an orphanage home or not?!" said Rayine who was getting inpatient.

"Well there is one around" said one woman.

"Tell me now then!" shouted Rayine.

"It isn't very polite to yell when asking for something" said someone behind the crowd.

"And so what?" said Rayine.

"And so. Then I will have to teach you some manners then" said the voice among the crowd.

Some people were trying to find this person. Someone spotted her and said

"Hey.....look who it is....make way for her!"

The crowd in one area started to move away. Until this person revealed herself as Sailor Ceres!

"So....you are Sailor Ceres." said Rayine

"Trying to hurt innocent children, people. Wherever you go, and as you please....That's unforgivable! In the name of Ceres I will flourish you!" said Sailor Ceres.

"Haha. I have been waiting for a chance to kill you myself. Today is my lucky day."
said Rayine

"I will stop you at all costs!" said Sailor Ceres, as she walked forward. She got her crescent wand out.

"Oh. So you are going to try use that blast on me, as you did with megabyte? I am a lot more stronger than he is. Go ahead and try I dare you." said Rayine.

"Love heartbeat flash!" said Sailor Ceres.

Rayine stood firm and blocked the attack. With her hand she crossed chopped cut off as if it was nothing.

"No....." said Sailor Ceres.

Rayine came with fast speed. And attack Sailor Ceres right in the stomach, which made her to fall down in pain

"Ha! I told you." said Rayine.

one man said "Oh no, Sailor Ceres needs help!"

Amor tried a surprise attack with her claws. But, Rayine saw this coming and slapped her hard onto the ground.

"Meowww...." said Amor in pain. 

"No Amor!" screamed Sailor Ceres.

Rayine laughed out loud so evilly and someone said

"You won't be laughing for long!"

"Who dares to say that?!" said Rayine

Caught off guard the person said

"Mysterious pulse attack!"

This made Rayine to fall some step backwards, and away from Sailor Ceres. This attack made Rayine to be confused as well due to the attack. Annoyed that happened she asked

"How dare you do that?! I demand to know! Who the hell are you?!"

Sailor Ceres still on the floor weakly in pain. Saw a figure like in front of her. This young girl had ginger hair and was wearing a white and green sailor uniform.

And this person said

"My name is Sailor Kaneko defender of earth! May the unknown light cleanse your sins!"


Wow another heroine?! What will she do next time?! Better stayed tuned to chapter 9!



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I wonder who that is... though Raiyne was awesome in this chapter! I hope she doesn't end up like Megabyte...
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This is getting exciting! x3 Good work as usual, Enii.
This is getting exciting! x3 Good work as usual, Enii.
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