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Once Upon a Time, the End - Prologue

 

03-22-14 01:39 PM
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Once Upon a Time, the End


Prologue: I Died Yesterday


Hello. Technically speaking, I should

be saying goodbye, but you’re not life, so I don’t need to. I said goodbye to
life yesterday because I died. You’re a person, though, so that means I never
left you. I’m watching over all of you right now, in fact. But I forgot what it
was like to see, touch, smell, hear, taste, and breathe. It’s fine, though. I
can always check with one of you guys to remind me of what things like
breathing feel like. Being dead isn’t all that bad, actually. Not as bad as it
sounds, at least. Well, this was a little informal, so I guess I better
introduce myself before telling you the story of how I died.

My name was Catherine Miller, and I led

the typical boring life of a fourteen year old girl in a small, damp flat in
Washington, D.C. My accomplishments included breathing and passing through
every grade with a C. Not bad is what the failures would say. The final year of
my life, ninth grade, was way too hard to pass with a final average of C. No
way, JosCalibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;
mso-bidi-font-family:Arial;mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:
EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">é
. Or in this case, Joseph. Joe was the definition of moron, and with
everything ninth grade threw at me, including him, school was not going to be
one of the things I would leave with a smile on my face. Even that, however,
was the least of my worries.


In short, ninth grade, also known as the

fourteenth year of my life, the year World War III started and ended, and 2041,
was a blast. A literal blast. I spent my last few moments making my way through
the mounds of scattered corpses on the battlefield in lifeless London, and
turned around to see the Big Ben, my final obstacle, and an action that would
motivate my final move to end the war, along with my life. To make it brief, my
sudden death was sort of essential to the future existence of the world.


Being dead is quite amusing, I must

say. I can now watch all living beings and see into their darkest and brightest
thoughts. Also, I can observe what’s changed since I died. Not much different has been
going on since 2041, from what I can see. It’s only been a day, though. Yes, I
died on New Year’s Eve. Well, nothing’s changed except for the end of the
short-lived yet brutal war. Oh, and I think a statue of myself is scheduled to
be carved pretty soon.

Once Upon a Time, the End


Prologue: I Died Yesterday


Hello. Technically speaking, I should

be saying goodbye, but you’re not life, so I don’t need to. I said goodbye to
life yesterday because I died. You’re a person, though, so that means I never
left you. I’m watching over all of you right now, in fact. But I forgot what it
was like to see, touch, smell, hear, taste, and breathe. It’s fine, though. I
can always check with one of you guys to remind me of what things like
breathing feel like. Being dead isn’t all that bad, actually. Not as bad as it
sounds, at least. Well, this was a little informal, so I guess I better
introduce myself before telling you the story of how I died.

My name was Catherine Miller, and I led

the typical boring life of a fourteen year old girl in a small, damp flat in
Washington, D.C. My accomplishments included breathing and passing through
every grade with a C. Not bad is what the failures would say. The final year of
my life, ninth grade, was way too hard to pass with a final average of C. No
way, JosCalibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;
mso-bidi-font-family:Arial;mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:
EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">é
. Or in this case, Joseph. Joe was the definition of moron, and with
everything ninth grade threw at me, including him, school was not going to be
one of the things I would leave with a smile on my face. Even that, however,
was the least of my worries.


In short, ninth grade, also known as the

fourteenth year of my life, the year World War III started and ended, and 2041,
was a blast. A literal blast. I spent my last few moments making my way through
the mounds of scattered corpses on the battlefield in lifeless London, and
turned around to see the Big Ben, my final obstacle, and an action that would
motivate my final move to end the war, along with my life. To make it brief, my
sudden death was sort of essential to the future existence of the world.


Being dead is quite amusing, I must

say. I can now watch all living beings and see into their darkest and brightest
thoughts. Also, I can observe what’s changed since I died. Not much different has been
going on since 2041, from what I can see. It’s only been a day, though. Yes, I
died on New Year’s Eve. Well, nothing’s changed except for the end of the
short-lived yet brutal war. Oh, and I think a statue of myself is scheduled to
be carved pretty soon.

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(edited by NintendoFanKimmy on 03-22-14 02:50 PM)     Post Rating: 2   Liked By: deggle, Mangepic,

03-22-14 01:42 PM
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NintendoFanKimmy : omg "once upon a time, the end!" i wanted to use that sentence in my story XD! so catherine miller always gets a C huh? well great job on this chapter kimmeh ^^! it was funny that you died in new year's eve
NintendoFanKimmy : omg "once upon a time, the end!" i wanted to use that sentence in my story XD! so catherine miller always gets a C huh? well great job on this chapter kimmeh ^^! it was funny that you died in new year's eve
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Pretty cool story idea.
Are you taking character applications? I could come up with a unique character that Catherine could watch over and become infatuated with or something.
Pretty cool story idea.
Are you taking character applications? I could come up with a unique character that Catherine could watch over and become infatuated with or something.
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What a weird name for a story. Well anyways, it's good and I like how you wrote it. Will there be more?
What a weird name for a story. Well anyways, it's good and I like how you wrote it. Will there be more?
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