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My Own Paper Mario Thousand Year Door 2 Script (closed beta PART 1)

 

03-07-14 11:31 PM
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Hello Everyone I just wanted to say I've been working on this since 2012 and it's become a standstill and I haven't worked on it at all recently because of this. I wanted to see what others may have thought of this and if anyone would leave some
suggestions or anything it'd be helpful, also if you read this please look at the original game first because the story
won't make sense otherwise.


                                                                                          Paper Mario The X-Nauts Revenge

                                                                                                      *Introduction*


Mario had successfully defeated the X-Nauts and their leader Grodus as well as the evil shadow queen
that was resurrected by Grodus himself using Princess Peach as the vessel for the shadow queen.
Soon after Mario and Peach left Rougeport and returned back to the Mushroom Kingdom. Their
adventure was over Mario and Peach will now live in peace......... or so they thought.
                                               

                                                                                                      *CAST*
                                 
                                                                                                        Mario                                                                                              
                                                                                                        Luigi                                                                                            
                                                                                                   Goombella                                                                                  
                                                                                                        Koops                                                                                      
                                                                                                       Bobbery                                                                                      
                                                                                                       Lady Bow                                                                                    
                                                                                                        Vivian                                                                                        
                                                                                                      Yoshi (Scrap)                                                                        
                                                                                                       Flurrie                                                                                  
                                                                                                Princess Peach                                                              
                                                                                                     Lord Crump                                                                          
                                                                                                      Grodus                                                                      
                                                                                                Professor Frankly                                                                    
                                                                                                     Lakilester 
   


                                                                                                ***Prologue Part 1***


(Parakarry) Mail Call!

(Luigi) *Opens mailbox to receive letter*

(Luigi) *Opens house door* Hey Bro you got a letter here from Rougeport.

(Mario) *Walks into living room*

(Luigi) I’ll let you read it.

(Mario) *Opens and reads letter*

(Mario) OHHHH

(Luigi) What’s wrong bro?

(Mario) *Secretly talks*

(Luigi) You mean those people you fought before are back again bent on world domination?

(Mario) Mm-hm

(Luigi) Well you better get a boat ready so you can head over there again right bro.

(Mario) oh yes
                                     
                                                                                             *A few minutes later*


(Toadstool) So you have to leave to Rougeport once again?

(Mario) Mm-hm

(Princess Peach) Have a good trip this time Mario!

(Boat Conductor) Sorry for the delay, let’s head out now so we can reach our
destination

(Mario) *Jumps onto boat*
(Boat Conductor) Heading out, next destination is Rougeport, Rougeport!
(Mario)


                                                            *Waves Princess Peach good-bye*


(Mario) *Lies down and falls asleep*
   


                                                                                                *Prologue Part 2*
                                                                                          Mario’s Rougeport Welcome



(Boat Conductor) Sir...........Sir.............

(Boat Conductor) Sir please get up the town of Rougeport is just up ahead so be
prepared to disembark!

(Mario) *Opens eyes*

(Boat Conductor) I still have no clue to why you would want to come back to this place
anyway but that’s just me

(Boat Conductor) *Boat leaves port*

(Goombella) Mario! It’s been a long time since we last saw each other

(Goombella) But we can talk about that later right now we should head to professor
frankly’s place so he can discuss the situation with you

(Mario) Ok

(Mario and Goombella) *Enters doorway*

(Professor Frankly) Goombella what is it that you need, and who is with you

(Goombella) C’mon Professor Frankly you remember the letter we sent Mario telling him about
the X-Nauts

(Professor Frankly)
Ah yes now I remember excuse my memory but my old mind ain’t like it used to be

(Professor Frankly) Now Marty umm I mean Mario like we describe in the letter the X-Nauts
plan to take over the world again how they plan on doing this we do not know yet but I think
it would be wise to visit the places you went to the last time you were in Rougeport starting
with Petalburg

(Mario) Yes

(Goombella) Alright Mario I guess we’re a team again
                                 
                                                                                    *Goombella joined your party*


(Goombella) Alright I guess we better head through the tunnels again

(Mario) You’re a right

(Goombella) While we are down there we should probably get that spell from Merluvlee

(Mario) Yes

(Mario) *Enters warp pipe*

(Mario) *Enters door*

(Merluvlee) Hello what spell may I adjust you with today?

Cheap Course -------- 20 Coins
Normal Course -------- 35 Coins
Special Course -------- 50 Coins

(Merluvlee) Ahh the Special Course that’s fine

(Merluvlee) *Activates spell*

(Merluvlee) Now fighting in battle will be a breeze, as my spell helps against all enemies

(Merluvlee) Come back anytime

(Mario) *Exits house*

(Mario) *Enters warp pipe*

(Mario) *Exits warp pipe*

(Goombella) Alright let’s move forward

(Mario) Yes

(Mario) *Enters warp pipe*

(Mario) *Exits warp Pipe*

(Goomba) Hey it’s that same mustache guy from before and he’s with that same girl again

(Goombella) Hey it’s those same guy’s that made wanna barf last time

(Spiked Goomba) Yep it’s definitely the same Goomba from before

(Paragoomba) Let’s Attack
                                               
                                                                                                                  *FIGHT*


(Mario) *Stats* 10Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 10Hp/5fp

(Goomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(Paragoomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(SpikedGoomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(Mario) *Attacks with hammer* 2 damage given to Goomba

(Goombella) *Attacks with headbonk* 2 damage given to Paragoomba*

(Spiked Goomba) *Attacks using headbonk* 2 damage given to Mario

(Paragoomba) *Attacks with flying headbonk* 0 damage given to Goombella

(Goomba) *Attacks using headbonk* 1 damage given to Mario

(Mario) *Stats* 7Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 10Hp/5fp

(Goomba) *Stats* 1Hp

(Paragoomba) *Stats* 1Hp

(Spiked Goomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(Mario) *Attacks Spiked Goomba with hammer* 2 damage given

(Goombella) *Attacks Goomba with headbonk* 2 damage given

(Spiked Goomba) *Attacks Goombella with headbonk* 2 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* 8Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 8Hp/5fp

(Spiked Goomba) *Stats* 1Hp

(Mario) Game over Goomba’s

(Mario) *Attacks with hammer* 2 damage given

                                                                                                          *26 Star Points*

(Spiked Goomba) Ahh we got nailed hard..... AGAIN

(Paragoomba) LET’S GET OUTTA HERE

(Goombella) If you guys appear down here again we’ll give you another good whooping again

(Goombella) Nice moves Mario but let’s move on now

(Mario) Mh-hm

(Mario) *Enters pathway*

(Goombella) Oh great not this enemy again

(Mario) *Jumps on enemy’s tentacle*

(Blooper) BLOOOOOOOOOOOP
                                               

                                                                                                      *FIGHT*



(Blooper) Blooop -who dares defy my sleep-

(Mario) *Stands guard*

(Blooper) Bloop Bloooop BLOOOOOOOOP -Hey it’s that same mustache from before and that same
female Goomba time for pain-

(Mario) *Stats* 10Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 10Hp/5fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 28Hp

(Mario) *Charges hammer attack*

(Goombella) *Uses headbonk attack* 2 damage given

(Blooper)
Bloop, Blooooooop Bloop -I’ve improved my attack power from last time we fought
prepare to fall-

(Blooper) *Attacks with ink spray* 3 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* 7Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 7Hp/5fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 26Hp

(Mario) *Uses hammer* 6 damage given

(Goombella) *Charges attack*

(Blooper) *Attacks with tentacle slap* 2 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* *Danger* 5Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* *Danger* 5Hp/3Fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 20Hp

(Mario) *Attacks with jump* 6 damage given

(Goombella) *Attacks with headbonk* 5 damage given

(Blooper) *Uses ink spray* 3 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* *Danger* 2Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* *Danger* 2Hp/3Fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 9Hp

(Goombella) Mario.... huh huh huh..... I don’t think I can take much more damage

(Mario) *Uses jump attack* 6 damage given

(Goombella) *Attacks with headbonk* 4 damage given

(Blooper) BLOOOOOOOPEEEEEEER (NO I CAN’T LOSE AGAIN)
                                     
                                                                                             *38 Star Points*

(Goombella) Why do we keep fighting the same bosses as before?

(Mario) Hmmmm...

(Goombella) *Looks at TV Screen* Don't you just love it when that happen?

(Mario) *Enters pipe*
         
                                                                                          *Continued In next chapter*
Hello Everyone I just wanted to say I've been working on this since 2012 and it's become a standstill and I haven't worked on it at all recently because of this. I wanted to see what others may have thought of this and if anyone would leave some
suggestions or anything it'd be helpful, also if you read this please look at the original game first because the story
won't make sense otherwise.


                                                                                          Paper Mario The X-Nauts Revenge

                                                                                                      *Introduction*


Mario had successfully defeated the X-Nauts and their leader Grodus as well as the evil shadow queen
that was resurrected by Grodus himself using Princess Peach as the vessel for the shadow queen.
Soon after Mario and Peach left Rougeport and returned back to the Mushroom Kingdom. Their
adventure was over Mario and Peach will now live in peace......... or so they thought.
                                               

                                                                                                      *CAST*
                                 
                                                                                                        Mario                                                                                              
                                                                                                        Luigi                                                                                            
                                                                                                   Goombella                                                                                  
                                                                                                        Koops                                                                                      
                                                                                                       Bobbery                                                                                      
                                                                                                       Lady Bow                                                                                    
                                                                                                        Vivian                                                                                        
                                                                                                      Yoshi (Scrap)                                                                        
                                                                                                       Flurrie                                                                                  
                                                                                                Princess Peach                                                              
                                                                                                     Lord Crump                                                                          
                                                                                                      Grodus                                                                      
                                                                                                Professor Frankly                                                                    
                                                                                                     Lakilester 
   


                                                                                                ***Prologue Part 1***


(Parakarry) Mail Call!

(Luigi) *Opens mailbox to receive letter*

(Luigi) *Opens house door* Hey Bro you got a letter here from Rougeport.

(Mario) *Walks into living room*

(Luigi) I’ll let you read it.

(Mario) *Opens and reads letter*

(Mario) OHHHH

(Luigi) What’s wrong bro?

(Mario) *Secretly talks*

(Luigi) You mean those people you fought before are back again bent on world domination?

(Mario) Mm-hm

(Luigi) Well you better get a boat ready so you can head over there again right bro.

(Mario) oh yes
                                     
                                                                                             *A few minutes later*


(Toadstool) So you have to leave to Rougeport once again?

(Mario) Mm-hm

(Princess Peach) Have a good trip this time Mario!

(Boat Conductor) Sorry for the delay, let’s head out now so we can reach our
destination

(Mario) *Jumps onto boat*
(Boat Conductor) Heading out, next destination is Rougeport, Rougeport!
(Mario)


                                                            *Waves Princess Peach good-bye*


(Mario) *Lies down and falls asleep*
   


                                                                                                *Prologue Part 2*
                                                                                          Mario’s Rougeport Welcome



(Boat Conductor) Sir...........Sir.............

(Boat Conductor) Sir please get up the town of Rougeport is just up ahead so be
prepared to disembark!

(Mario) *Opens eyes*

(Boat Conductor) I still have no clue to why you would want to come back to this place
anyway but that’s just me

(Boat Conductor) *Boat leaves port*

(Goombella) Mario! It’s been a long time since we last saw each other

(Goombella) But we can talk about that later right now we should head to professor
frankly’s place so he can discuss the situation with you

(Mario) Ok

(Mario and Goombella) *Enters doorway*

(Professor Frankly) Goombella what is it that you need, and who is with you

(Goombella) C’mon Professor Frankly you remember the letter we sent Mario telling him about
the X-Nauts

(Professor Frankly)
Ah yes now I remember excuse my memory but my old mind ain’t like it used to be

(Professor Frankly) Now Marty umm I mean Mario like we describe in the letter the X-Nauts
plan to take over the world again how they plan on doing this we do not know yet but I think
it would be wise to visit the places you went to the last time you were in Rougeport starting
with Petalburg

(Mario) Yes

(Goombella) Alright Mario I guess we’re a team again
                                 
                                                                                    *Goombella joined your party*


(Goombella) Alright I guess we better head through the tunnels again

(Mario) You’re a right

(Goombella) While we are down there we should probably get that spell from Merluvlee

(Mario) Yes

(Mario) *Enters warp pipe*

(Mario) *Enters door*

(Merluvlee) Hello what spell may I adjust you with today?

Cheap Course -------- 20 Coins
Normal Course -------- 35 Coins
Special Course -------- 50 Coins

(Merluvlee) Ahh the Special Course that’s fine

(Merluvlee) *Activates spell*

(Merluvlee) Now fighting in battle will be a breeze, as my spell helps against all enemies

(Merluvlee) Come back anytime

(Mario) *Exits house*

(Mario) *Enters warp pipe*

(Mario) *Exits warp pipe*

(Goombella) Alright let’s move forward

(Mario) Yes

(Mario) *Enters warp pipe*

(Mario) *Exits warp Pipe*

(Goomba) Hey it’s that same mustache guy from before and he’s with that same girl again

(Goombella) Hey it’s those same guy’s that made wanna barf last time

(Spiked Goomba) Yep it’s definitely the same Goomba from before

(Paragoomba) Let’s Attack
                                               
                                                                                                                  *FIGHT*


(Mario) *Stats* 10Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 10Hp/5fp

(Goomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(Paragoomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(SpikedGoomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(Mario) *Attacks with hammer* 2 damage given to Goomba

(Goombella) *Attacks with headbonk* 2 damage given to Paragoomba*

(Spiked Goomba) *Attacks using headbonk* 2 damage given to Mario

(Paragoomba) *Attacks with flying headbonk* 0 damage given to Goombella

(Goomba) *Attacks using headbonk* 1 damage given to Mario

(Mario) *Stats* 7Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 10Hp/5fp

(Goomba) *Stats* 1Hp

(Paragoomba) *Stats* 1Hp

(Spiked Goomba) *Stats* 3Hp

(Mario) *Attacks Spiked Goomba with hammer* 2 damage given

(Goombella) *Attacks Goomba with headbonk* 2 damage given

(Spiked Goomba) *Attacks Goombella with headbonk* 2 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* 8Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 8Hp/5fp

(Spiked Goomba) *Stats* 1Hp

(Mario) Game over Goomba’s

(Mario) *Attacks with hammer* 2 damage given

                                                                                                          *26 Star Points*

(Spiked Goomba) Ahh we got nailed hard..... AGAIN

(Paragoomba) LET’S GET OUTTA HERE

(Goombella) If you guys appear down here again we’ll give you another good whooping again

(Goombella) Nice moves Mario but let’s move on now

(Mario) Mh-hm

(Mario) *Enters pathway*

(Goombella) Oh great not this enemy again

(Mario) *Jumps on enemy’s tentacle*

(Blooper) BLOOOOOOOOOOOP
                                               

                                                                                                      *FIGHT*



(Blooper) Blooop -who dares defy my sleep-

(Mario) *Stands guard*

(Blooper) Bloop Bloooop BLOOOOOOOOP -Hey it’s that same mustache from before and that same
female Goomba time for pain-

(Mario) *Stats* 10Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 10Hp/5fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 28Hp

(Mario) *Charges hammer attack*

(Goombella) *Uses headbonk attack* 2 damage given

(Blooper)
Bloop, Blooooooop Bloop -I’ve improved my attack power from last time we fought
prepare to fall-

(Blooper) *Attacks with ink spray* 3 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* 7Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* 7Hp/5fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 26Hp

(Mario) *Uses hammer* 6 damage given

(Goombella) *Charges attack*

(Blooper) *Attacks with tentacle slap* 2 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* *Danger* 5Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* *Danger* 5Hp/3Fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 20Hp

(Mario) *Attacks with jump* 6 damage given

(Goombella) *Attacks with headbonk* 5 damage given

(Blooper) *Uses ink spray* 3 damage given

(Mario) *Stats* *Danger* 2Hp/5Fp

(Goombella) *Stats* *Danger* 2Hp/3Fp

(Blooper) *Stats* 9Hp

(Goombella) Mario.... huh huh huh..... I don’t think I can take much more damage

(Mario) *Uses jump attack* 6 damage given

(Goombella) *Attacks with headbonk* 4 damage given

(Blooper) BLOOOOOOOPEEEEEEER (NO I CAN’T LOSE AGAIN)
                                     
                                                                                             *38 Star Points*

(Goombella) Why do we keep fighting the same bosses as before?

(Mario) Hmmmm...

(Goombella) *Looks at TV Screen* Don't you just love it when that happen?

(Mario) *Enters pipe*
         
                                                                                          *Continued In next chapter*
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