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So Basically guys I am bored and I wanted to take out the time to write out a story for you
all to read It's been a while sense I have done this so bare with me!
                                    REVENGE OF THE STARS!
Once upon a time there was a girl and her name was Rebecca. She had grown up to love the spot
light! Things were hard for her family though because financially they were struggling.. and I mean
really struggling!

She did many plays at school.. even sung in the plays.. had as much as fun as she could and
eventually gained a reputation for best singing and actress in the state.

One day she recieved a letter in the mail, it was from American Idol.. they had seen her talent
and wanted her to premire in a live show with them.

She was so excited she couldn't stand it but the first thing her parents did was say we don't
have the money to take you. Rebecca kept reading on down the letter and at the bottom it said
all expensies covered by us.. your hotel stay and all costs.. all you will need is a suit case and a
big smile!

They were all so excited! They packed their bags and headed off to New York since that was
where American Idol was airing the show. The show was devoted to her and for people to see
how talented she was!

When she got there, there were already many stars there to compete. She got very confused
because the paper said that she was supposed to be the star; not her and several other contestants.
She was still excited about showing her talent but was pretty confused as to why there were all these
other so called stars there to show their talent as well.

Things were okay but her heart was beating fast because she never thought she would get the chance to
compete in front of all of America. She was pretty happy how things were going thus far.
She had made a couple of aquaintences with some other stars that were there and was talking
to them before the show.

Things were going good...They called contestant after contestant and her and
her three friends were still in the back waiting to be called.

Rebecca found out that her aquaintience's were also struggling with money. They were all
sisters and she over heard a conversation that they were having with their parents about it.

She was like, " Okay at least I'm not the only one here who isn't rich." A few hours had passed but
her and the three sisters were still not called.

A few minutes later after Rebecca noticed how long it
was taking.. the host said "This is all for tonights stars, hope you enjoyed the talent"!

Rebecca was SO confused at this point and so were the 3 sisters. She went and talked with the host
after he came backstage and he said to her, " Who are you and how did you get back here?"

She said, "I am REBECCA.. you mailed me a letter saying that you have seen my talent and that
you wanted to see me perform." "You said this show was devoted to me in the letter. How come
I didn't even get to sing?"

He looked at her with a puzzled face and said, "I don't know what your talking about..
"SECURITY".. escort this girl and her possy out of here!" Her and the 3 sisters plus their parents
were thrown out of the building.

Out side there was police waiting for them. The police approched the famillies and said, " You owe
money for costs that you took from this corporation. Costs included plane tickets, food, expenses
and anything else you bought that was not payed for.

The famillies were already in tears. They didn't know what was going on and why this was happening
to them.

Rebecca said, " Now wait just a minute I have a letter here showing PROOF that all expenses were
covered by this coperation." She asked the 3 sisters, " Do you still have your letter?"
The girls replyed, " Yes it's in our bag. Rebecca said, " Get it out please so I can hand
it to this cop."

She handed the cop the letters and he read over them. He then said, " You guys have been
SCAMMED by a FAKE corporation..this is not the same place American Idol aired. I DON'T KNOW
but I do know that we need some answers and some fast.

The police officer said, " Come with me.. I need to take you in for questioning." So the families
had no choice but to go into the station and answer questions.
After the cop had questioned both families he came to a conclusion that they were
truly innocent.

"I'm sorry but there is nothing I can do.. and there is no paper work or actual
address coming from these paper copies you recieved in the mail.", he said sadly.

The families knew they were going to seek revenge so they said, "Okay thank's for you time."
"Were not sure how we will get home since we are all broke and have no money."
The cop said, " The state will cover your expenses to get home and I'm sorry for what has happened
to you all."

Their flight wasn't leaving until next Tuesday since all the other flights had been canceled
due to storms.

The families stayed the night in a offered hotel covered by the state of New York. They then
set out a plan on how they would get back at the people who wronged them.

They knew that it was the same show that threw them out but how could they prove it?
One of the younger sisters of the 3 sisters noticed some type of writing smeered into the end
of both letters that were mailed.

They turned it upside down and it was a signiture. It was Henry the evil judge of the show
american idol who had sent out the letters!

The familys knew that they could seek revenge now but Rebecca's parents suggested let's not
do this on our own. We should go back to the police. They were all still wondering how the police
could have missed this kind of evidence.

Since it was the right thing to do they went back to the police.. the cop said, " Wow HOW in the
world did we miss this.. it's proof that Henry did this to you.

The cops then informed the family to get a lawyer.. didn't say why but the family's already knew
that it was the perfect idea especially since they would be sueing him and sueing him long and
hard!

Both rebecca's family and the 3 sister's family did just that and both gained 3 millon dollars each
for the pain and loss that he had put them through.

Henry didn't recieve time since the judge thought the money he had to spare was enough but did
put him on different services and revoked his license to work anymore in the industry of Stardom!

Rebecca was so happy that they got spared the trouble that he caused them and was so happy
that her family wasn't struggling anymore financially!

Everything was shaping up for her things were pretty good and nothing stood in her way.
She then headed off to Hollywood.. and got a spot as a lead actress in a show called "Revenge of
the Stars" A true story. She gained fame money and hapiness all within one year!

Who could of thought that a girl from middle east Virgina would recieve all this! It's a mystery but
things like this do happen and things change for people in a heart beat.
She learned to control things more easily and her parents taught her to do the right thing.

Who could ask for more than that?

- This story is fictional and was just written for fun! I hope you enjoyed it, I may make more in
the future but I am very unsure.

Bintsy<33
So Basically guys I am bored and I wanted to take out the time to write out a story for you
all to read It's been a while sense I have done this so bare with me!
                                    REVENGE OF THE STARS!
Once upon a time there was a girl and her name was Rebecca. She had grown up to love the spot
light! Things were hard for her family though because financially they were struggling.. and I mean
really struggling!

She did many plays at school.. even sung in the plays.. had as much as fun as she could and
eventually gained a reputation for best singing and actress in the state.

One day she recieved a letter in the mail, it was from American Idol.. they had seen her talent
and wanted her to premire in a live show with them.

She was so excited she couldn't stand it but the first thing her parents did was say we don't
have the money to take you. Rebecca kept reading on down the letter and at the bottom it said
all expensies covered by us.. your hotel stay and all costs.. all you will need is a suit case and a
big smile!

They were all so excited! They packed their bags and headed off to New York since that was
where American Idol was airing the show. The show was devoted to her and for people to see
how talented she was!

When she got there, there were already many stars there to compete. She got very confused
because the paper said that she was supposed to be the star; not her and several other contestants.
She was still excited about showing her talent but was pretty confused as to why there were all these
other so called stars there to show their talent as well.

Things were okay but her heart was beating fast because she never thought she would get the chance to
compete in front of all of America. She was pretty happy how things were going thus far.
She had made a couple of aquaintences with some other stars that were there and was talking
to them before the show.

Things were going good...They called contestant after contestant and her and
her three friends were still in the back waiting to be called.

Rebecca found out that her aquaintience's were also struggling with money. They were all
sisters and she over heard a conversation that they were having with their parents about it.

She was like, " Okay at least I'm not the only one here who isn't rich." A few hours had passed but
her and the three sisters were still not called.

A few minutes later after Rebecca noticed how long it
was taking.. the host said "This is all for tonights stars, hope you enjoyed the talent"!

Rebecca was SO confused at this point and so were the 3 sisters. She went and talked with the host
after he came backstage and he said to her, " Who are you and how did you get back here?"

She said, "I am REBECCA.. you mailed me a letter saying that you have seen my talent and that
you wanted to see me perform." "You said this show was devoted to me in the letter. How come
I didn't even get to sing?"

He looked at her with a puzzled face and said, "I don't know what your talking about..
"SECURITY".. escort this girl and her possy out of here!" Her and the 3 sisters plus their parents
were thrown out of the building.

Out side there was police waiting for them. The police approched the famillies and said, " You owe
money for costs that you took from this corporation. Costs included plane tickets, food, expenses
and anything else you bought that was not payed for.

The famillies were already in tears. They didn't know what was going on and why this was happening
to them.

Rebecca said, " Now wait just a minute I have a letter here showing PROOF that all expenses were
covered by this coperation." She asked the 3 sisters, " Do you still have your letter?"
The girls replyed, " Yes it's in our bag. Rebecca said, " Get it out please so I can hand
it to this cop."

She handed the cop the letters and he read over them. He then said, " You guys have been
SCAMMED by a FAKE corporation..this is not the same place American Idol aired. I DON'T KNOW
but I do know that we need some answers and some fast.

The police officer said, " Come with me.. I need to take you in for questioning." So the families
had no choice but to go into the station and answer questions.
After the cop had questioned both families he came to a conclusion that they were
truly innocent.

"I'm sorry but there is nothing I can do.. and there is no paper work or actual
address coming from these paper copies you recieved in the mail.", he said sadly.

The families knew they were going to seek revenge so they said, "Okay thank's for you time."
"Were not sure how we will get home since we are all broke and have no money."
The cop said, " The state will cover your expenses to get home and I'm sorry for what has happened
to you all."

Their flight wasn't leaving until next Tuesday since all the other flights had been canceled
due to storms.

The families stayed the night in a offered hotel covered by the state of New York. They then
set out a plan on how they would get back at the people who wronged them.

They knew that it was the same show that threw them out but how could they prove it?
One of the younger sisters of the 3 sisters noticed some type of writing smeered into the end
of both letters that were mailed.

They turned it upside down and it was a signiture. It was Henry the evil judge of the show
american idol who had sent out the letters!

The familys knew that they could seek revenge now but Rebecca's parents suggested let's not
do this on our own. We should go back to the police. They were all still wondering how the police
could have missed this kind of evidence.

Since it was the right thing to do they went back to the police.. the cop said, " Wow HOW in the
world did we miss this.. it's proof that Henry did this to you.

The cops then informed the family to get a lawyer.. didn't say why but the family's already knew
that it was the perfect idea especially since they would be sueing him and sueing him long and
hard!

Both rebecca's family and the 3 sister's family did just that and both gained 3 millon dollars each
for the pain and loss that he had put them through.

Henry didn't recieve time since the judge thought the money he had to spare was enough but did
put him on different services and revoked his license to work anymore in the industry of Stardom!

Rebecca was so happy that they got spared the trouble that he caused them and was so happy
that her family wasn't struggling anymore financially!

Everything was shaping up for her things were pretty good and nothing stood in her way.
She then headed off to Hollywood.. and got a spot as a lead actress in a show called "Revenge of
the Stars" A true story. She gained fame money and hapiness all within one year!

Who could of thought that a girl from middle east Virgina would recieve all this! It's a mystery but
things like this do happen and things change for people in a heart beat.
She learned to control things more easily and her parents taught her to do the right thing.

Who could ask for more than that?

- This story is fictional and was just written for fun! I hope you enjoyed it, I may make more in
the future but I am very unsure.

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Very nice story. I like it how she ended up coming on top despite being scammed and almost having her dream taken away from her. Scams are prevalent in society today so I can actually see something like this happening. Turn on the news and there is always a scam going on. Nicely done  
Very nice story. I like it how she ended up coming on top despite being scammed and almost having her dream taken away from her. Scams are prevalent in society today so I can actually see something like this happening. Turn on the news and there is always a scam going on. Nicely done  
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nice story binny I'm really happy that I took my time to read the nice story you wrote
nice story binny I'm really happy that I took my time to read the nice story you wrote
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Easiest 3 million dollars they'll ever make ha ha. I wouldn't rely on the NYPD if something ever happens to me. Seeing as how they weren't able to spot a signature that was upside down :p. Just one thing...what exactly did Henry get out of scamming them?
Easiest 3 million dollars they'll ever make ha ha. I wouldn't rely on the NYPD if something ever happens to me. Seeing as how they weren't able to spot a signature that was upside down :p. Just one thing...what exactly did Henry get out of scamming them?
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