(Warning there's spoilers) this isn't a bad hack but it does need a beta 2. I really like the plot, but I think it'll be cooler if at first you actually take eeve for a walk like she/he follows you around. I like the change of front color but the gray is super hard to read.I like the whole go to this town and you get paid but I don't like having to buy running shoes, but it's not a big deal. Also, I feel like you don't get paid enough for winning battles. I would also like to have a option to choose between a boy or a girl character. 

Glad to hear that you liked the game!

Anyways, what I can suggest for you to make longer reviews to is categorize it and talk about the graphics, gameplay, sound, story... etc Just try to make your review like at least 500-1000 words.

anyhow, nice job and keep it up!

I think you are off to a good start with reviewing, I agree though, the best way to review is to categorize it and break it down and by doing that you can make your reviews longer and more detailed. I think you had some good details in your review and I am glad you at least met the word requirement which believe it or not, not everyone does. 

So here are some tips for reviewing: 

1. Break it down into categories and go from there with explaining and talking about the game.

2. Space it out and keep it organized so it looks professional.

3. Be honest about the game and give reasons for your scores, if one part of the game wasn't that good, let your scores reflect that. 


I hope this bit of advice helps you if you continue reviewing. The best way to master it is through repetition. Keep up the good work an keep making more reviews! 

this should be in game disscusion instead of reviews. because you need more description on every subject and split them into catergorie go read play4funs's thread on how to make a good review

 Thank very much for all your advice I'll remember that for next time

I think you are off to a good start in reviews. Try to break it down into more categories and add alot more detail.. it is a great second step to start making better reviews. Everyone starts somewhere you know. I still haven't attempted to make a review yet but maybe I will one day.. advice always helps!