I am only posting the Prologue.. because I am not sure how much of it would be okay to post <.< So..I guess just tell me if anyone wants to read the rest..
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Prologue

Have you ever wondered, what it was like to walk on the ground? To step upon the sands of white beach’s on sunny islands? To climb trees and dance threw fields of flowers... Flowers that were not man made but occurred naturally threw pollination? Perhaps you have. Then again. By the time you read this, things may have changed.

In the year 4030 the Earth had acquired so much pollution and damage from its people, Humans, that it was now beyond repair. With the Earth dieing rapidly and unable to support the large numbers of people still covering its surface, the governments of the world, Headed by the United States and Japan, activated a project that had long been in the making...

The creation of a new and clean planet, titled simply: Earth Beta. Said to be new beginning for mankind!

In the year 4032 the EB project was launched.

A lucky one million people were allowed to travel to the new planet. How they were chosen has never been disclosed, but many say it involved the passing of money.

The people of Earth Beta lived prosperous lives on they're new home.

Until the year 4042.

On May 4, 4042, the Izan attacked. No one knows for sure why they attacked, or why they choose to do so to the new planet, but the alien force soon had the fledgling plant in its grasp, the weak Human race stood no chance against the powerful enemy.

One Thousand years later, the Human race has been enslaved, only a small rebel force stands between the Izan and the complete domination of Earth Beta and the eradication of Human history.

This is they're story.

Oh wow! I am already interested in how this story is going to play out. What all could the readers be in for when reading this? Action? Romance? ... Um, backstabbing --no so much the physical kind?

There are some grammatical errors (using threw instead of through for example), but otherwise it was short and to the point. It seemed more like the laying out of a premise than a real prologue, but I have to say that the idea for the story sounds really awesome. So yeah... tell us a bit about the plot... or perhaps post the first chapter?

Wow I really liked that alot. I love reading and watching on tv about stuff like this. Very Interesting and I will give you a thumbs up!

Tell us more about the plot though I think it would be really great to read.

cool nice story it actually kinda reminds me of Avatar

Here is chapter 1.. since people where interested in the layout..

Chapter 1.


'May!...may!...'

May let out a long groan and turned over on her cot. Her matted red hair clung to her head, a cold sweat from another nightmare had made it nearly impossible for her to stay warm under the thin rags allowed to her by her master. Not that it would have made much of a difference. She never got a good nights sleep. Even after years of sleeping on the cot, most of the time she ended up just moving on to the hay that was stored not to far from her. It was a lot more comfortable then the bump riddled sorry excuse for a bed, even if she did have to deal with fleas.

'May!.. bring her back!' The sounds of crying echoed.



Suddenly May sat up. Her soul piercing green eyes glaring at the stone wall in front of her. Of course, she had that dream again. When did she not? She threw her dirt covered legs over the side of the cot and pushed herself to her feet. Shivering a moment as her feet hit the cold stone floor. The bottoms of her feet would go numb soon enough from the days work so she wouldn’t feel it for much longer. She really only felt it now on rear days when it was warm, though the ground was never really warm, the man made sun kept everything at a temperature best suited for maintaining life, no lower, no higher.

She walked to the small window and standing on her tip toes gazed out at the large mansion. She would have to get out there soon, master would be awake any moment. She wasn’t allowed to sleep in the mansion, that was for Izan, not humans like herself. She was however permitted to sleep in the barn, which was a really nice thing of her master to have allowed. Many human slaves got much less. From what she heard, some slaves where not even allowed to ware cloths! She could not image such a horrible thing as that.

Turning away from the window and heading for the door she attempted to make herself look more presentable by dragging her nails threw her matted hair. It of course, did nothing but cause her pain, so she allowed it to fall around her head as she always did before quickly making her way up the stone walkway to the main house. This was the time of day she never vary much enjoyed...

As she slipped threw the back door she suddenly heard someone screaming for her. "Girl! Girl!" It was vary annoying hearing something like 'Girl' yelled all the time, but masters never used the name of they're servants, those servants that had names anyway. Names were a privilege to beings born above servitude, and May had only been given one because she happened to have been born of a couple rebellious people.

But there was a reason servants were not named, it was a way of keeping them in they're rightful place. In this world, names created identity, and an identity other then what you were given by your master, was not allowed. Which was why she was kept so closely watched, as an infant her parents had named her. May. She was not at all sure why, but it caused some of the masters friends to flinch when she served them. Which was why he had begun to call her girl, she was used to it now, it was really all she ever heard, she'd not heard anyone call her May, or even had a reason to say her own name since she was a young girl, even the other servants called her girl.

"Yes master?" May asked as she pushed open the door of the old Izan's bedroom. The old man resembled a creature of ancient lore, his features were almost dragon like, his skin like leather, with some occasional scales found across the chest and stomach to protect vital organs. Or at least that's what she was told, she couldn’t be sure. After all she was only human. But what she did know, was that despite her masters vary reptilian appearance he was built much like a human, his race stood on two legs, they gave birth to live young, and she had even seen them bleed, though they're blood appeared to be more of a purple color then the red that ran threw her own veins.

"Ah here you are." The old Izan said as he pushed himself to his feet, he was clad in what must have been Izan uniform, a long ankle length black jacket, and pants of navy blue, his metals obviously placed in order on his breast. "We have a visitor coming. Be on your best behavior, and when they ask your name do not say May!" He snapped at her his snack like eyes seeming to flash. "Yes master." She stated in an even tone, diverting her eyes, just as she had been trained to do. He always gave her this warning when someone was coming by, and by the attitude he was using it must have been a vary high ranking official. She almost smiled at that thought, she'd been around this old coot so long she was starting to think in military terms!

A bell rang loudly. "Get the door!" The master yelled causing May to jump slightly before she rushed threw the massive mansion. She’d lost herself in her own thoughts again. That could be dangerous, she thought as she paused at the door. May adjust her rags so she looked a bit less like a homeless child and opened the door before bowing her body low. “Good morning sir, please come inside, the master is expect----” However her normal greeting was cut off as she looked up at the man in the door way. He .. he was...human?

Well at least he looked human....

Well he resembled one anyway. His features were all human, except for color. His hair was a dark green, his eyes a startling gold of the Izan and his skin was a soft sky blue. She almost wanted to reach out and see if he was real. What was this man? What sort of twisted fate had crated this boy? She wondered. As she looked up at his face she realized there was no way he was much older then her.. maybe.. nineteen or twenty? And there was even something stranger about him, she couldn’t really place it.. but she knew him from somewhere.

The humanoid smiled from the doorway. "Well, you must be May." He said taking a step foreword and placing a hand under her chin. forcing her to look up at him. "So its true.." "Yes." Said a voice from behind her as her master grabbed hold of her arms and pushed her towards the green haired man. "She is human." "And a cute one." The new male said with a smile causing May to try and shirk away, though her master, being right behind her kept her from moving.

"Whats going on?!" The red head managed to squeak out as she was pushed threw the door way, mostly by the will of her much stronger master. The blue skinned man tugged her along to his waiting transporter, what she assumed had brought him here.. Not that she had much time to think about cars or any of the sort. "I am Aim Aidea and you have just been recruited."

“Re...recruited?!” She asked with wide eyes as she was suddenly pushed in to the back of the transport. The golden eyed man who was apparently named Aim grinned in at her. “Yup, now be quite, we have a long drive ahead of us.” As the door slammed and there was muffled talking out side of the vehicle, May found herself straining to hear what was being said, but clearly this car had been made with more then motion in mind, she couldn't pick up a single word! She felt around for a latch, she couldn't find one.. clearly they did not want her to leave.


Finally May gave in and sat back, pulled her dirt covered knees to her chest and wraped her arms around them. What the hell had she just been pulled in to? She wondered as she stared in to the blackness and uncertainty in front of her.

Ohhh wow!! THat was really great! I really enjoyed that..! It was very interesting and I just wanted to keep reading more and more. Keep up the good work.

Woah! Very nice story, well played out =) Keep going!