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03-23-11 10:16 PM
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as i sit at the dock and look around all i see is blue everywhere

blue skies'blue water and the blue dock.

blue shorts' blue shoes' and a blue hat

and as i look behind me the blue dissapers

and out comes a new color the color green.

the trees sway in the autumn breeze.

and away goes the color green.
as i sit at the dock and look around all i see is blue everywhere

blue skies'blue water and the blue dock.

blue shorts' blue shoes' and a blue hat

and as i look behind me the blue dissapers

and out comes a new color the color green.

the trees sway in the autumn breeze.

and away goes the color green.
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03-23-11 10:18 PM
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hey great poem, but it could use a little more flow. maybe more rhymes? Maybe I'll try at it and post a poem so everyone can see how bad it turns out (unlike urs )
hey great poem, but it could use a little more flow. maybe more rhymes? Maybe I'll try at it and post a poem so everyone can see how bad it turns out (unlike urs )
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05-16-11 07:02 AM
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not a bad poem i personaly like the color blue and think that that is a nice poem enough said





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not a bad poem i personaly like the color blue and think that that is a nice poem enough said





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05-22-11 11:34 PM
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Heyyy thats a really great poem I give you a rating Of 10 and a Thumbs up keep at it
Heyyy thats a really great poem I give you a rating Of 10 and a Thumbs up keep at it
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