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A Vizzed Love Story - Chapter 9

 

02-14-16 10:02 PM
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This series is just a joke. Don't get your Viz in a knot.

LAST TIME ON A VIZZED LOVE STORY - STUFF

The rest of the group wakes up. User wakes up with part of a brain lying next to him. He screams likes a girl and has his back against the wall. "There's no time for playing around. We gotta go, and quickly. Furret will fire his weapon soon, and when he does, everything as we know it will end." Gal said.

Let's turn our attention to Leggy and Furret for just a bit. "Sir, the weapon is ready." Leggy says. "You think I don't know that, fool? I'm waiting. I want them all to witness their world burn." Furret says. "You're right. That will be quite enjoyable to watch." Leggy says. "Too bad you won't get to watch..." Furret says as a wicked smile comes across his face. Furret lifts Leggy up into the air and pops him just as he did with Patar and Deg. "You are of no use to me anymore. Goodbye."

The remaining members of the group (Gal, Maka, User, Yoshi, GB, Moss) reach the room that Furret resides in. "It appears that mine and Leggy's calculations were incorrect. The weapon needs 10 more minutes to fire. No matter. Now that you fools are finally here, I can finally obtain the satisfaction that I've been longing for ever since you came aboard the ship. Prepare to die!" Furret yells.

*Battle Music* - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OuCZsYPiQp0

Gal extends his arm to grab Furret, while at the same time User jumps up and tries to kick Furret in an attempt to distract him. The kick from User does not hit Furret, he dodges it instead. However, Gal's arm ends up hitting Furret hit in the face, leaving him open for another kick from User. The second kick from User manages to hit Furret, but after he gets hit, he holds User in place with his psychic abilities. "Guys.....-" Furret explodes User before he could finish.

"You monster! I loved him...." Moss says. "Wat." Yoshi says in confusion. Moss charges up to Furret, while Yoshi screams. "Moss, no!" Furret explodes Moss as well. Right in front of his brother.

"No...no!!!" Yoshi screams, and his anger overcomes him. Yoshi runs towards Furret, while Furret has a wicked smile on his face. "I'm going to kill you!" Yoshi screams as he charges towards Furret. Furret creates an arrow made out of electricity and swings it around him, slicing both Yoshi and GB, as GB jumped behind Furret in an attempt to hit him. GB's wound was too severe, and he slowly bled to death on the floor. Yoshi's left arm and leg is injured.

Furret uses this opportunity to pick up Yoshi with his psychic powers and explode him as well. "Look at you pathetic fools! Only two left. A mere girl and an alien who barely has any power left." Furret says.

Maka throws a kunai that she found lying on the floor at Furret, but Furret simply blocks it using a reflective shield of energy, sending the kunai back at Maka, and stabbing her in the arm. Gal uses this opportunity to grab Furret with his extended arm and smash him repeatedly into the floor.

Right before Gal is about to smash Furret into the floor again, Furret fires an electrical spear through Gal's chest, and Gal falls to the floor. Maka runs over to Gal as she screams.

"Don't do this. Please! Don't die on me!!!" Maka screams. Gal uses the rest of the energy he has left to say his final words. "It's all up to you now, Maka. Don't let him win. Don't...-" Gal explodes before he could finish, thanks to Furret's ability. Blood is splattered all over Maka's face, and she shows an expression of pure horror.

Furret laughs wickedly. "One left. This will be easy..."

Furret throws and electrical arrow headed straight for Maka's head, but suddenly, a huge amount of energy is released from Maka, as she screams. She flies towards Furret and hits him multiple times with incredible speed, sending him flying all over the place.

Furret manages to use a reflective shield, stopping Maka right in front of him, as he fires a giant laser beam right in front of her face, knocking her back several feet. "Impressive. You're stronger than I thought. But there's no way to avoid....this!" Furret yells as he uses his well-known ability to hold Maka in place.

"Oh, look at this. Pitiful. And not only that, but the weapon is ready. I'm going to let you watch your world burn...consider it a gift." Furret says.

*Music for dramatic effect* - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbIa49eIWoM

Maka starts screaming with tears in her eyes. "Stop this! Stop this now! Stooooop!!!"

Furret presses the button to fire the weapon. A voice talks over the speaker. "Weapon firing in 10..."

Maka starts crying. The camera scrolls over the bodies of all of her friends while the voice is counting down. "9..."

Maka thinks about all of her friends that have died... "8...."

User, Deg, Kimmy... "7...."

Zlinq, Yoshi, Moss, SUX, GB... "6..."

Wanderer, Panzer, Paper... "5..."

ZT, Green... "4..."

GB... "3..."

.....Gal.... "2..."

Souls seem to be coming out of each of the bodies of her friends, and they surround Maka, circling around her... "1..."

Maka screams, as the souls circle around her faster and faster... "It's time!!!" Furret yells.

"...Fire...."

The weapon fires, and at the same time, a bright light emerges from Maka, and it fills the entire sky. It redirects the weapon's attack towards the ship, and the ship explodes and is destroyed.

Both Maka and Furret land on the ground, surviving. Furret's face is filled with disbelief. "How did you....how....everything was going according to plan. It's done. And it's all because of you!!!" Furret throws an arrow made of electricity and it goes through Maka's chest. When it hits her, another bright light emerges from her, so bright, that it can rival the light of the sun itself. The light covers the entire city, and it overwhelms Furret.

"Stop. STOP!!! STOP THIS RIGHT NOW!!! YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING! GAHHHHHH!" Furret screams, as darkness releases from him, and covers the area. Half light, half dark. The darkness and the light react with each other, pushing each other away, trying to become the superior force.

And eventually, darkness overcomes the land. Maka and Furret both scream as light and dark release from them both. The souls of Maka's friends fly near the ground, and the souls resurrect all of her friends, however they are all still unconscious. Furret falls to the ground as the darkness that was released from him forms into a figure....

You could almost say...


It was a Godly figure....


To be Concluded.....







This series is just a joke. Don't get your Viz in a knot.

LAST TIME ON A VIZZED LOVE STORY - STUFF

The rest of the group wakes up. User wakes up with part of a brain lying next to him. He screams likes a girl and has his back against the wall. "There's no time for playing around. We gotta go, and quickly. Furret will fire his weapon soon, and when he does, everything as we know it will end." Gal said.

Let's turn our attention to Leggy and Furret for just a bit. "Sir, the weapon is ready." Leggy says. "You think I don't know that, fool? I'm waiting. I want them all to witness their world burn." Furret says. "You're right. That will be quite enjoyable to watch." Leggy says. "Too bad you won't get to watch..." Furret says as a wicked smile comes across his face. Furret lifts Leggy up into the air and pops him just as he did with Patar and Deg. "You are of no use to me anymore. Goodbye."

The remaining members of the group (Gal, Maka, User, Yoshi, GB, Moss) reach the room that Furret resides in. "It appears that mine and Leggy's calculations were incorrect. The weapon needs 10 more minutes to fire. No matter. Now that you fools are finally here, I can finally obtain the satisfaction that I've been longing for ever since you came aboard the ship. Prepare to die!" Furret yells.

*Battle Music* - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OuCZsYPiQp0

Gal extends his arm to grab Furret, while at the same time User jumps up and tries to kick Furret in an attempt to distract him. The kick from User does not hit Furret, he dodges it instead. However, Gal's arm ends up hitting Furret hit in the face, leaving him open for another kick from User. The second kick from User manages to hit Furret, but after he gets hit, he holds User in place with his psychic abilities. "Guys.....-" Furret explodes User before he could finish.

"You monster! I loved him...." Moss says. "Wat." Yoshi says in confusion. Moss charges up to Furret, while Yoshi screams. "Moss, no!" Furret explodes Moss as well. Right in front of his brother.

"No...no!!!" Yoshi screams, and his anger overcomes him. Yoshi runs towards Furret, while Furret has a wicked smile on his face. "I'm going to kill you!" Yoshi screams as he charges towards Furret. Furret creates an arrow made out of electricity and swings it around him, slicing both Yoshi and GB, as GB jumped behind Furret in an attempt to hit him. GB's wound was too severe, and he slowly bled to death on the floor. Yoshi's left arm and leg is injured.

Furret uses this opportunity to pick up Yoshi with his psychic powers and explode him as well. "Look at you pathetic fools! Only two left. A mere girl and an alien who barely has any power left." Furret says.

Maka throws a kunai that she found lying on the floor at Furret, but Furret simply blocks it using a reflective shield of energy, sending the kunai back at Maka, and stabbing her in the arm. Gal uses this opportunity to grab Furret with his extended arm and smash him repeatedly into the floor.

Right before Gal is about to smash Furret into the floor again, Furret fires an electrical spear through Gal's chest, and Gal falls to the floor. Maka runs over to Gal as she screams.

"Don't do this. Please! Don't die on me!!!" Maka screams. Gal uses the rest of the energy he has left to say his final words. "It's all up to you now, Maka. Don't let him win. Don't...-" Gal explodes before he could finish, thanks to Furret's ability. Blood is splattered all over Maka's face, and she shows an expression of pure horror.

Furret laughs wickedly. "One left. This will be easy..."

Furret throws and electrical arrow headed straight for Maka's head, but suddenly, a huge amount of energy is released from Maka, as she screams. She flies towards Furret and hits him multiple times with incredible speed, sending him flying all over the place.

Furret manages to use a reflective shield, stopping Maka right in front of him, as he fires a giant laser beam right in front of her face, knocking her back several feet. "Impressive. You're stronger than I thought. But there's no way to avoid....this!" Furret yells as he uses his well-known ability to hold Maka in place.

"Oh, look at this. Pitiful. And not only that, but the weapon is ready. I'm going to let you watch your world burn...consider it a gift." Furret says.

*Music for dramatic effect* - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbIa49eIWoM

Maka starts screaming with tears in her eyes. "Stop this! Stop this now! Stooooop!!!"

Furret presses the button to fire the weapon. A voice talks over the speaker. "Weapon firing in 10..."

Maka starts crying. The camera scrolls over the bodies of all of her friends while the voice is counting down. "9..."

Maka thinks about all of her friends that have died... "8...."

User, Deg, Kimmy... "7...."

Zlinq, Yoshi, Moss, SUX, GB... "6..."

Wanderer, Panzer, Paper... "5..."

ZT, Green... "4..."

GB... "3..."

.....Gal.... "2..."

Souls seem to be coming out of each of the bodies of her friends, and they surround Maka, circling around her... "1..."

Maka screams, as the souls circle around her faster and faster... "It's time!!!" Furret yells.

"...Fire...."

The weapon fires, and at the same time, a bright light emerges from Maka, and it fills the entire sky. It redirects the weapon's attack towards the ship, and the ship explodes and is destroyed.

Both Maka and Furret land on the ground, surviving. Furret's face is filled with disbelief. "How did you....how....everything was going according to plan. It's done. And it's all because of you!!!" Furret throws an arrow made of electricity and it goes through Maka's chest. When it hits her, another bright light emerges from her, so bright, that it can rival the light of the sun itself. The light covers the entire city, and it overwhelms Furret.

"Stop. STOP!!! STOP THIS RIGHT NOW!!! YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING! GAHHHHHH!" Furret screams, as darkness releases from him, and covers the area. Half light, half dark. The darkness and the light react with each other, pushing each other away, trying to become the superior force.

And eventually, darkness overcomes the land. Maka and Furret both scream as light and dark release from them both. The souls of Maka's friends fly near the ground, and the souls resurrect all of her friends, however they are all still unconscious. Furret falls to the ground as the darkness that was released from him forms into a figure....

You could almost say...


It was a Godly figure....


To be Concluded.....







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Awesome... Just awesome... I should spend more time in writing stories... You, sir, opened my eyes.
Awesome... Just awesome... I should spend more time in writing stories... You, sir, opened my eyes.
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why me and furret??!?!?!  furret's my homie. sorry furret. i personally would love it if the world were to end.
why me and furret??!?!?!  furret's my homie. sorry furret. i personally would love it if the world were to end.
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Makalya : No hard feelings Makayla.

At least I saved the best for last ; )
(even though it didn't work out in the end lol)

oh and I killed legacyme3, along with like 7 other people. Best villain ever.
Makalya : No hard feelings Makayla.

At least I saved the best for last ; )
(even though it didn't work out in the end lol)

oh and I killed legacyme3, along with like 7 other people. Best villain ever.
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