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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Surprise (Part Two)
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10-11-15 12:55 PM
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(Continuation from PMD: Explorers of Surprise.)

Butterfree: You two! Hey! Please help me! Please help me right noooooow!!
Bronco: ...Ma'am, with what?
Butterfree: Save my dear little Caterpie! Please! Do it for me! Do it for my baby! He's in the Tiny Woods! Pleease!!! I don't really need to tell you why!
Bronco: Julie. Somebody asked us to do a mission, and that means we have to do it. We can't just rudely decline it.
Julie: Okay.... fine...... Let's go over to the Tiny Woods and save this woman's Caterpie.. whatever they are.. I don't know where the "Tiny Woods" are.
Bronco: Actually, neither do I....
Butterfree: You don't?! Okay, I'm going to take you there!
Butterfree escorts Bronco and Julie to the Tiny Woods entrance.
Butterfree: Here, go save my priority and responsibility because I'm much too lazy to do so anyways!
The Butterfree pushes Bronco and Julie into the Tiny Woods, and covers the door with metal.
Butterfree: Have fun in there!!
Julie: Geez, what's wrong with that? She was rude to just force us in here, and we couldn't just hit her back? Arceus.....
Bronco: So, I think you're new here. Basically, what you do here....
Bronco looks to to the right of himself and sees a Pidgey.
Bronco: If you see somebody you don't know, grab them, and start beating them mercilessly!                            Bronco repeatedly tackles the Pidgey.
Bronco: They don't really have any other purpose other than to just beat them up, so beat them up!
Julie: Umm... No thanks. I'll just go ahead and stay behind you... Do you have any eye patches?
Bronco: Well.. You can just take my two old ones. Here you go.
Bronco lends Julie two of his eyepatches, not knowing what she wants to do with them.
Julie: That's perfect! Now....
Julie takes the two eyepatches and puts them over her eyes.
Julie: I don't have to see anything that you do that scares me!
As Bronco walks around randomly while beating up a lot of Wurmples, he sees a staircase leading to the next floor.
Julie: Excuse me Bronco, but why is there a staircase that goes nowhere?
Bronco: Silly you! Don't you know that you walk up stairs?
Bronco walks up the three stairs, and somehow teleports to the next floor (2F).
Julie: Bronco! Julie puts her arms up and shouts. She falls over and lands on the stairs, teleporting her also to 2F.
Julie: I don't understand physics anymore... Bronco, how did invisible stairs lead to more stairs? You didn't even go anywhere!
Bronco: I don't know why... Magic maybe? And then we go up these stairs.
Bronco walks up those stairs following Julie, transporting him and Julie to 3F.
Julie: And there goes a whole floor that we should've explored..... Caterpie!!! Caterpie!! Where the heck are you? Where exactly are you?!
The Butterfree's Caterpie comes up to them.
Caterpie: Uhmmm.. Mommy... Where is she?
Julie: Bronco, don't beat this one up. Instead... Julie picks up the Caterpie, rushes to the basement floor while going down a lot of stairs, and when they get to the bottom, they run past a monster house quickly and start obnoxiously banging on the metal door. Hey you! That dumb pickle that locked us out of the forest! Open the door! We found your Caterpie!
The Butterfree picks the metal out of the Tiny Woods entrance, then gladly accepting her Caterpie. She gives Julie two oran berries.
Butterfree: Here's two Oran Berries, knowing that I wouldn't have my only child right now if you didn't save him from a scary damp wood infested forest!
Julie: mutters at least we got one thing.. how is something wood infested exactly? *yawn* I'm going to go ahead and go to your house, Bronco, and sleep there... I have nowhere else to sleep....
Bronco: Well.. Okay... I'll find somewhere else to sleep... Cya....
(Will continue it later. Was this poorly made or not? I'm really trying on this little story series I'm making.)
(Continuation from PMD: Explorers of Surprise.)

Butterfree: You two! Hey! Please help me! Please help me right noooooow!!
Bronco: ...Ma'am, with what?
Butterfree: Save my dear little Caterpie! Please! Do it for me! Do it for my baby! He's in the Tiny Woods! Pleease!!! I don't really need to tell you why!
Bronco: Julie. Somebody asked us to do a mission, and that means we have to do it. We can't just rudely decline it.
Julie: Okay.... fine...... Let's go over to the Tiny Woods and save this woman's Caterpie.. whatever they are.. I don't know where the "Tiny Woods" are.
Bronco: Actually, neither do I....
Butterfree: You don't?! Okay, I'm going to take you there!
Butterfree escorts Bronco and Julie to the Tiny Woods entrance.
Butterfree: Here, go save my priority and responsibility because I'm much too lazy to do so anyways!
The Butterfree pushes Bronco and Julie into the Tiny Woods, and covers the door with metal.
Butterfree: Have fun in there!!
Julie: Geez, what's wrong with that? She was rude to just force us in here, and we couldn't just hit her back? Arceus.....
Bronco: So, I think you're new here. Basically, what you do here....
Bronco looks to to the right of himself and sees a Pidgey.
Bronco: If you see somebody you don't know, grab them, and start beating them mercilessly!                            Bronco repeatedly tackles the Pidgey.
Bronco: They don't really have any other purpose other than to just beat them up, so beat them up!
Julie: Umm... No thanks. I'll just go ahead and stay behind you... Do you have any eye patches?
Bronco: Well.. You can just take my two old ones. Here you go.
Bronco lends Julie two of his eyepatches, not knowing what she wants to do with them.
Julie: That's perfect! Now....
Julie takes the two eyepatches and puts them over her eyes.
Julie: I don't have to see anything that you do that scares me!
As Bronco walks around randomly while beating up a lot of Wurmples, he sees a staircase leading to the next floor.
Julie: Excuse me Bronco, but why is there a staircase that goes nowhere?
Bronco: Silly you! Don't you know that you walk up stairs?
Bronco walks up the three stairs, and somehow teleports to the next floor (2F).
Julie: Bronco! Julie puts her arms up and shouts. She falls over and lands on the stairs, teleporting her also to 2F.
Julie: I don't understand physics anymore... Bronco, how did invisible stairs lead to more stairs? You didn't even go anywhere!
Bronco: I don't know why... Magic maybe? And then we go up these stairs.
Bronco walks up those stairs following Julie, transporting him and Julie to 3F.
Julie: And there goes a whole floor that we should've explored..... Caterpie!!! Caterpie!! Where the heck are you? Where exactly are you?!
The Butterfree's Caterpie comes up to them.
Caterpie: Uhmmm.. Mommy... Where is she?
Julie: Bronco, don't beat this one up. Instead... Julie picks up the Caterpie, rushes to the basement floor while going down a lot of stairs, and when they get to the bottom, they run past a monster house quickly and start obnoxiously banging on the metal door. Hey you! That dumb pickle that locked us out of the forest! Open the door! We found your Caterpie!
The Butterfree picks the metal out of the Tiny Woods entrance, then gladly accepting her Caterpie. She gives Julie two oran berries.
Butterfree: Here's two Oran Berries, knowing that I wouldn't have my only child right now if you didn't save him from a scary damp wood infested forest!
Julie: mutters at least we got one thing.. how is something wood infested exactly? *yawn* I'm going to go ahead and go to your house, Bronco, and sleep there... I have nowhere else to sleep....
Bronco: Well.. Okay... I'll find somewhere else to sleep... Cya....
(Will continue it later. Was this poorly made or not? I'm really trying on this little story series I'm making.)
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weeniedog12 :

"Here's 2 oran berries ...  wouldn't have my only child"

This is why we have trust issues! We save Butterfree's only child, and they just leave and think two oran berries are enough for payment. Like stop flying away and pay me a proper reward!
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"Here's 2 oran berries ...  wouldn't have my only child"

This is why we have trust issues! We save Butterfree's only child, and they just leave and think two oran berries are enough for payment. Like stop flying away and pay me a proper reward!
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I'm pretty sure it's like this.
Bronco: Excuse me? Just two Oran Berries? Somebody with a sense of mind would give the people who saved their one and only baby half of their house and money, not just two flimsy berries you could find by just looking to the right...
Julie: Just... Just don't question it. I'm pretty sure these random creatures think they could just find another creature in the wild and call it their baby...
Bronco: But--- They don't! We're actually slightly sensible! We only use our babies!
Julie: You really look dumb enough to think a piece of construction paper colored blue is your baby...
I'm pretty sure it's like this.
Bronco: Excuse me? Just two Oran Berries? Somebody with a sense of mind would give the people who saved their one and only baby half of their house and money, not just two flimsy berries you could find by just looking to the right...
Julie: Just... Just don't question it. I'm pretty sure these random creatures think they could just find another creature in the wild and call it their baby...
Bronco: But--- They don't! We're actually slightly sensible! We only use our babies!
Julie: You really look dumb enough to think a piece of construction paper colored blue is your baby...
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Haha, that reply is actually the true canon This is what really happened, I'm telling you!
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Haha, that reply is actually the true canon This is what really happened, I'm telling you!
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Wait, this actually happens in the game? They question what they get confused? I don't really remember seeing that, I just thought of it after completing Tiny Woods.
Wait, this actually happens in the game? They question what they get confused? I don't really remember seeing that, I just thought of it after completing Tiny Woods.
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