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Dragon Ball Elniër chapter 23 the second and third dragonball

 

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Yellow - hello, last time we got our first dragonball, please enjoy.

Chapter 23 the second and third Dragonball

10 hours later, Weaponia

"Hey dad, can we rest here?" Goten asked.

"Sure son." Goku said.

"Alright it’s getting dark." Potanto said.

"There is just one problem." Blade said.

"What is it?" Yellow asked.

"Those guys are still out there, we have to make night watches." Blade said.

"Alright Blade takes the first watch, I will do the second and Potanto does the third." Piccolo said.

"Deal." Blade said.

Later in the night.

Yellow looked at the stars.

"What are you thinking about?" Blade asked.

"About the first time my brother turned ssj." Yellow said.

"When was that?" Blade asked.
 
"About 11 years ago, I was 3 at the time and he was 7, there was a adult Kionki that attacked me, Elric saw it and was so angry that he turned into a ssj." Yellow explained.

"He sounds like a caring brother." Blade said.

"He is, I wish I was more like him." Yellow said.

"How do you mean that?" Blade asked.

"I wish I was what stronger." Yellow said.

Yellow yawned.

"Well, go back to sleep now, you’re going to need all the rest you can get." Blade said.

"Right." Yellow said as she laid down again.

The next morning.

"Guys wake up." Potanto said.

Everybody except Goten woke up.

"Let me handle this." Blade said.

"TRAINING BEGINS GOTEN, SIAN." Blade screamed.

Goten jumped up, expecting an actual attack.

"Good job Blade." Yellow said.

They ate breakfast and walked on until they saw a Saiyan, a Kionki and a Akaian having a Dragon ball.

"Hey Colores, where is the 4th Dragon ball?" the Kionki asked the Saiyan.

"I don’t know Steel, what about you Seaono?" Colores said.

"I’m in the dark as well." Seaono said.

"Hey kid, do you have the Dragon ball?" Seaono asked.

"Hey it’s an Elniër, let’s kill her." Steel said.

"I would like to kill something." Colores said.

"That is not an option." Potanto said.

"Oh yeah, we will see." Steel said.

Colores went Great ape and Seaono went Agua Akaian.

Potanto went Oceana Akaian.

Goku went ssj1.

Blade kicked Steel and blasted him away.

Goku dodged every attack from Colores and punched him in the face.
 
Seaono blocked a punch from Potanto but was then kicked.

"SIAN!" Blade screamed.

The attack killed Steel.

Goku knocked Colores out and blasted his tail off.

"SUPER SUISHIO BLAST!" Potanto screamed.

The attack killed Seaono.

"Damn rebels." Potanto said.

Yellow went to their supplies and grabbed the 7-star Dragon ball.

"I have the second one." Yellow said.

"Alright let’s continue." Potanto said.

"Good job kid." Blade said.

Meanwhile.

"What actually happens if they lose the race for the dragon balls?" Shellana asked.

"We stay dead then." Vegeta said.

"Don't worry, I've already done something." Elric said.

Back with the z fighters.

They got to a village.

"Hi I’m Hatchet, the leader of this town." Hatchet said.

"Hi I’m Blade and my group wants to do the challenge for the Dragon ball." Blade said.

"Alright, the test is an race with our fastest member." Hatchet said.

Hatchet looked at 18.

"Don't even think about it!" 18 said.

"Aah." Hatchet said.

"Ok Goku takes this challenge." Potanto said.

"Alright, it’s my turn." Goku said.

Goku went to the course.

"ALRIGHT RACE BEGIN!" Hatchet yelled.

Both flew away.

Goku went ssj3.

Goku was on his way back when he saw the advantage the Weaponian had.

Yellow tried to make a mind-connection but failed.

Goku was flying as fast as he could.

"Kakarott, just use your cursed instant transmission." Vegeta said.

"Ok, thanks Vegeta." Goku said.

Goku teleported right for the finish line and went over it.

"THE WINNER IS GOKU!" Hatchet screamed.

Hatchet handed the 5-star dragon ball over to Yellow.

"Good job Goku, let’s continue." Potanto said.

Potanto blinked as weird voices started to talk around him.

Author - and that is the end of the chapter.

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Yellow - hello, last time we got our first dragonball, please enjoy.

Chapter 23 the second and third Dragonball

10 hours later, Weaponia

"Hey dad, can we rest here?" Goten asked.

"Sure son." Goku said.

"Alright it’s getting dark." Potanto said.

"There is just one problem." Blade said.

"What is it?" Yellow asked.

"Those guys are still out there, we have to make night watches." Blade said.

"Alright Blade takes the first watch, I will do the second and Potanto does the third." Piccolo said.

"Deal." Blade said.

Later in the night.

Yellow looked at the stars.

"What are you thinking about?" Blade asked.

"About the first time my brother turned ssj." Yellow said.

"When was that?" Blade asked.
 
"About 11 years ago, I was 3 at the time and he was 7, there was a adult Kionki that attacked me, Elric saw it and was so angry that he turned into a ssj." Yellow explained.

"He sounds like a caring brother." Blade said.

"He is, I wish I was more like him." Yellow said.

"How do you mean that?" Blade asked.

"I wish I was what stronger." Yellow said.

Yellow yawned.

"Well, go back to sleep now, you’re going to need all the rest you can get." Blade said.

"Right." Yellow said as she laid down again.

The next morning.

"Guys wake up." Potanto said.

Everybody except Goten woke up.

"Let me handle this." Blade said.

"TRAINING BEGINS GOTEN, SIAN." Blade screamed.

Goten jumped up, expecting an actual attack.

"Good job Blade." Yellow said.

They ate breakfast and walked on until they saw a Saiyan, a Kionki and a Akaian having a Dragon ball.

"Hey Colores, where is the 4th Dragon ball?" the Kionki asked the Saiyan.

"I don’t know Steel, what about you Seaono?" Colores said.

"I’m in the dark as well." Seaono said.

"Hey kid, do you have the Dragon ball?" Seaono asked.

"Hey it’s an Elniër, let’s kill her." Steel said.

"I would like to kill something." Colores said.

"That is not an option." Potanto said.

"Oh yeah, we will see." Steel said.

Colores went Great ape and Seaono went Agua Akaian.

Potanto went Oceana Akaian.

Goku went ssj1.

Blade kicked Steel and blasted him away.

Goku dodged every attack from Colores and punched him in the face.
 
Seaono blocked a punch from Potanto but was then kicked.

"SIAN!" Blade screamed.

The attack killed Steel.

Goku knocked Colores out and blasted his tail off.

"SUPER SUISHIO BLAST!" Potanto screamed.

The attack killed Seaono.

"Damn rebels." Potanto said.

Yellow went to their supplies and grabbed the 7-star Dragon ball.

"I have the second one." Yellow said.

"Alright let’s continue." Potanto said.

"Good job kid." Blade said.

Meanwhile.

"What actually happens if they lose the race for the dragon balls?" Shellana asked.

"We stay dead then." Vegeta said.

"Don't worry, I've already done something." Elric said.

Back with the z fighters.

They got to a village.

"Hi I’m Hatchet, the leader of this town." Hatchet said.

"Hi I’m Blade and my group wants to do the challenge for the Dragon ball." Blade said.

"Alright, the test is an race with our fastest member." Hatchet said.

Hatchet looked at 18.

"Don't even think about it!" 18 said.

"Aah." Hatchet said.

"Ok Goku takes this challenge." Potanto said.

"Alright, it’s my turn." Goku said.

Goku went to the course.

"ALRIGHT RACE BEGIN!" Hatchet yelled.

Both flew away.

Goku went ssj3.

Goku was on his way back when he saw the advantage the Weaponian had.

Yellow tried to make a mind-connection but failed.

Goku was flying as fast as he could.

"Kakarott, just use your cursed instant transmission." Vegeta said.

"Ok, thanks Vegeta." Goku said.

Goku teleported right for the finish line and went over it.

"THE WINNER IS GOKU!" Hatchet screamed.

Hatchet handed the 5-star dragon ball over to Yellow.

"Good job Goku, let’s continue." Potanto said.

Potanto blinked as weird voices started to talk around him.

Author - and that is the end of the chapter.

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This was one of the more story driven chapters! I like these. Anyway good job on this new chapter, I want to see more, dude! You already have all of those chapters on your PC post more
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