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Dragon ball Elniër chapter 18 setting the stage
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Potanto - sup last time Elric died and Goku and I went into the HTC, enjoy. Chapter 18 setting the stage 1 hour later, Earth Everyone was waiting for Lavender to come. When will he be here? Roshi asked. Any second. Goten said. Lavender appeared. You, You're the 1 that killed Elric! Yellow said as her aura turned form silver to red. How is she doing that? Vegeta asked. Elniërs aura changes at their emotions, so this little girl is mad because I killed the other Elniër Lavender said. YOU MONSTER! Yellow screamed. Yellow shot Ki blasts at him but Lavender knocked every blast away. GRR, EJL BEAM! Yellow screamed. Lavender knocked the attack upwards. Could you please stop little girl, I want to keep a promise. Lavender said. Yellow tried to punch him. Lavender charged up, knocking Yellow, and the weak z fighters against the ground. Yellow rushed at Lavender again. Lavender grabbed Yellows tail and punched her, breaking her left arm before throwing her at the others. Now someone tell that girl to stop trying to fight me. Lavender said. Yellow stop fighting. Gohan said. Yellow glared at Lavender. Now then, I will give you a warning, I’m after these guys Vegeta Shellana and Goku, anyone of you others try to defeat me and I will be forced to put you down. Lavender said. Well I’m first. Vegeta said. Well what are you waiting for. Lavender said. Vegeta went ssj2 and kicked Lavender. Lavender punched Vegeta. GARLICK GUN! Vegeta screamed. Lavender blocked the attack. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack hit Vegeta. Urgh, BIG BANG ATTACK! Vegeta screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Good job, you got your big bang attack to hit. Lavender said. There’s more where that came from Vegeta said. Vegeta punched Lavender rapidly and kicked him away. FINAL FLASH! Vegeta screamed. Lavender blocked the attack. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked Vegeta out. Lavender punched through Vegeta. FATHER! Trunks screamed as he went ssj2. KAMEHAMEHA! Trunks screamed. Lavender dodged the attack. Trunks punched Lavender and kicked him away. Trunks shot Ki blasts at Lavender, most hitting. Lavender kicked Trunks and punched him away. KAMEHAMEHA Trunks screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Lavender kicked Trunks. TRI BEAM Tien screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Tien punched Lavender rapidly. Lavender kicked Tien and blasted him to the ground. Tien no Chiaotzu said. Chiaotzu grabbed Lavender and blew up. CHIAOTZU Tien screamed. Meanwhile.. Elric punched the ground. I have to do something! Elric said. You're not allowed to go into the world of the living. King Kai said. But I can't just sit here like a, a idiot. Elric said. Just be patient. King Kai said, Urgh fine whatever, but if they die it's your fault. Elric said. Meanwhile. Lavender threw a Ki blast at Dende but Mr. Popo got in the way and died. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack killed Dende. What, no! Gohan said. Dende. Piccolo said. Why did you do that, you said that you wouldn’t harm others! Yellow said. I know, but you would have used those dragon balls, I also blew Namek up. Lavender said. WHAT! Gohan said. Do you hear that Elric? Krillin said. Yeah, I can hear and see everything. Elric said. SPECIAL BEAM CANNON! Piccolo screamed. Lavender got hit. MASENKO! Gohan screamed. The attack hit Lavender. KAMEHAMEHA! Goten and Trunks screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Lavender kicked Goten and punched Trunks. Gohan kicked lavender away. Hey sis how about we help. 17 said. Sure but we will be forced to do one thing. 18 said. I think there’s no other choice. 17 said. FUSION HAH! 17 and 18 said as they fused. Hey over here. the fusion said. How do we call you? Yamcha asked. Call me 35! the fusion said. What. Lavender said. 35 kicked Lavender and punched him away. 35 started shooting Ki blasts at Lavender, most hitting. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack hit 35. 35 kicked Lavender rapidly. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked out 35 who defused. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked Piccolo out. MASENKO! Gohan screamed of anger. The attack hit Lavender. Lavender kicked Gohan rapidly. Lavender kicked Gohan in the back of the head, knocking him out. EJL BEAM! Yellow screamed as she fired with her 1 hand. How long did you know that attack? Trunks asked. She can only do that when she is angry Elric explained. Lavender blocked it. Yamcha, Tien distract him! Krillin said. Alright, SPIRIT BALL! Yamcha screamed. TRI BEAM! Tien screamed. Both attacks hit Lavender. DESTRUCTO DISK! Krillin screamed. Lavender dodged in the nick of time. I knew that attack was coming. Lavender said. Gohan, Trunks and Goten got up. Hey think you can stop this. Gohan said. Challenge accepted. Lavender said. KAMEHAMEHA! Gohan and Goten screamed. KAMEHAMEHA! Trunks helped. KAMEHAMEHA! Tien, Yamcha and Krillin screamed. KAMEHAMEHA! Roshi screamed as well. All the attacks hit Lavender. Yeah, we did it. Goten said, Suddenly a bunch of Ki blasts appeared out of the smoke that knocked Goten and Trunks out. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked Gohan out. Buu angry, Buu make mean man dead. Buu said. Hmm? Lavender said. Buu shot a Ki blast at Lavender. The attack hit Lavender. CHOCOLATE BEAM! Buu screamed. Lavender dodged. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack killed Buu. BUU NO! Hercule screamed. What was that monster? Lavender said. YOU’RE GONNA PAY! Hercule screamed. Hercule punched Lavender. Lavender kicked Hercule, knocking him out. And where are Kakarott and Potanto! Lavender said. They will come, and then they will defeat you! Yellow said shaking with anger an pain. Alright then, I will wait. Lavender said. Author - how will this fight turn out, and who will win? find out in the next chapter. imamonster : greenluigi : juuldude : Chapter 18 setting the stage 1 hour later, Earth Everyone was waiting for Lavender to come. When will he be here? Roshi asked. Any second. Goten said. Lavender appeared. You, You're the 1 that killed Elric! Yellow said as her aura turned form silver to red. How is she doing that? Vegeta asked. Elniërs aura changes at their emotions, so this little girl is mad because I killed the other Elniër Lavender said. YOU MONSTER! Yellow screamed. Yellow shot Ki blasts at him but Lavender knocked every blast away. GRR, EJL BEAM! Yellow screamed. Lavender knocked the attack upwards. Could you please stop little girl, I want to keep a promise. Lavender said. Yellow tried to punch him. Lavender charged up, knocking Yellow, and the weak z fighters against the ground. Yellow rushed at Lavender again. Lavender grabbed Yellows tail and punched her, breaking her left arm before throwing her at the others. Now someone tell that girl to stop trying to fight me. Lavender said. Yellow stop fighting. Gohan said. Yellow glared at Lavender. Now then, I will give you a warning, I’m after these guys Vegeta Shellana and Goku, anyone of you others try to defeat me and I will be forced to put you down. Lavender said. Well I’m first. Vegeta said. Well what are you waiting for. Lavender said. Vegeta went ssj2 and kicked Lavender. Lavender punched Vegeta. GARLICK GUN! Vegeta screamed. Lavender blocked the attack. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack hit Vegeta. Urgh, BIG BANG ATTACK! Vegeta screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Good job, you got your big bang attack to hit. Lavender said. There’s more where that came from Vegeta said. Vegeta punched Lavender rapidly and kicked him away. FINAL FLASH! Vegeta screamed. Lavender blocked the attack. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked Vegeta out. Lavender punched through Vegeta. FATHER! Trunks screamed as he went ssj2. KAMEHAMEHA! Trunks screamed. Lavender dodged the attack. Trunks punched Lavender and kicked him away. Trunks shot Ki blasts at Lavender, most hitting. Lavender kicked Trunks and punched him away. KAMEHAMEHA Trunks screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Lavender kicked Trunks. TRI BEAM Tien screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Tien punched Lavender rapidly. Lavender kicked Tien and blasted him to the ground. Tien no Chiaotzu said. Chiaotzu grabbed Lavender and blew up. CHIAOTZU Tien screamed. Meanwhile.. Elric punched the ground. I have to do something! Elric said. You're not allowed to go into the world of the living. King Kai said. But I can't just sit here like a, a idiot. Elric said. Just be patient. King Kai said, Urgh fine whatever, but if they die it's your fault. Elric said. Meanwhile. Lavender threw a Ki blast at Dende but Mr. Popo got in the way and died. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack killed Dende. What, no! Gohan said. Dende. Piccolo said. Why did you do that, you said that you wouldn’t harm others! Yellow said. I know, but you would have used those dragon balls, I also blew Namek up. Lavender said. WHAT! Gohan said. Do you hear that Elric? Krillin said. Yeah, I can hear and see everything. Elric said. SPECIAL BEAM CANNON! Piccolo screamed. Lavender got hit. MASENKO! Gohan screamed. The attack hit Lavender. KAMEHAMEHA! Goten and Trunks screamed. The attack hit Lavender. Lavender kicked Goten and punched Trunks. Gohan kicked lavender away. Hey sis how about we help. 17 said. Sure but we will be forced to do one thing. 18 said. I think there’s no other choice. 17 said. FUSION HAH! 17 and 18 said as they fused. Hey over here. the fusion said. How do we call you? Yamcha asked. Call me 35! the fusion said. What. Lavender said. 35 kicked Lavender and punched him away. 35 started shooting Ki blasts at Lavender, most hitting. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack hit 35. 35 kicked Lavender rapidly. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked out 35 who defused. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked Piccolo out. MASENKO! Gohan screamed of anger. The attack hit Lavender. Lavender kicked Gohan rapidly. Lavender kicked Gohan in the back of the head, knocking him out. EJL BEAM! Yellow screamed as she fired with her 1 hand. How long did you know that attack? Trunks asked. She can only do that when she is angry Elric explained. Lavender blocked it. Yamcha, Tien distract him! Krillin said. Alright, SPIRIT BALL! Yamcha screamed. TRI BEAM! Tien screamed. Both attacks hit Lavender. DESTRUCTO DISK! Krillin screamed. Lavender dodged in the nick of time. I knew that attack was coming. Lavender said. Gohan, Trunks and Goten got up. Hey think you can stop this. Gohan said. Challenge accepted. Lavender said. KAMEHAMEHA! Gohan and Goten screamed. KAMEHAMEHA! Trunks helped. KAMEHAMEHA! Tien, Yamcha and Krillin screamed. KAMEHAMEHA! Roshi screamed as well. All the attacks hit Lavender. Yeah, we did it. Goten said, Suddenly a bunch of Ki blasts appeared out of the smoke that knocked Goten and Trunks out. ARIATO! Lavender screamed. The attack knocked Gohan out. Buu angry, Buu make mean man dead. Buu said. Hmm? Lavender said. Buu shot a Ki blast at Lavender. The attack hit Lavender. CHOCOLATE BEAM! Buu screamed. Lavender dodged. SINENKO! Lavender screamed. The attack killed Buu. BUU NO! Hercule screamed. What was that monster? Lavender said. YOU’RE GONNA PAY! Hercule screamed. Hercule punched Lavender. Lavender kicked Hercule, knocking him out. And where are Kakarott and Potanto! Lavender said. They will come, and then they will defeat you! Yellow said shaking with anger an pain. Alright then, I will wait. Lavender said. Author - how will this fight turn out, and who will win? find out in the next chapter. imamonster : greenluigi : juuldude : |
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Great chapter, appel! It was longer than normal, I am also excited to see how this fight turns out! Good job. You are really improving |
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imamonster : yeah I am The funny thing was that originally it was 200 words shorter but I decide to include things like the discussion between Elric and King Kai Because I felt it wasn't like Elric to do nothing. I also made some words by already existing things. The funny thing was that originally it was 200 words shorter but I decide to include things like the discussion between Elric and King Kai Because I felt it wasn't like Elric to do nothing. I also made some words by already existing things. |
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