Now, this is one of the very first Kirby games I got my hands on, aside from seeing one of my relatives play Kirby Super Star.
And It's safe to say this is the game that got me into the series.

Graphics: 7
The graphical style for this game works pretty well for a Kirby game, the visuals are bright and colorful, and almost every area looks different. The reason I didn't rate this higher is because the same kind of art style was used for Kirby and the Amazing Mirror, and Kirby: Squeak Squad. If not for that fact, I would rate it higher.

Sound: 8
All the music tracks that you know and love from Kirby's Adventure have been remade with the same spirit as the original, but newer. The sound effects have also been remade in the same way. Again, though, most of the music tracks/sound effects have been used in other games, so it's not rated as high as it could be.

Addictiveness: 9
I don't know why, but I keep coming back to this game again and again. It just has so many good things about it, and with that classic Kirby charm, it's quite addictive.

Story: 6
The story for this game is actually pretty simple, as with most Kirby games. King DeDeDe has stolen and broken apart the Star Rod, an item that, when placed atop the Fountain of Dreams, allows the citizens of Dreamland to dream at night. Kirby notices the dreams are gone, and sets off to get the Star Rod back. Pretty basic.

Depth: 10
Now, I usually wouldn't put this that high on a Kirby game, but the depth of this game is amazing. Beat story mode? Boss rush. 100% story mode? Extra mode. 100% extra mode? Another full-length game mode presents itself. I have yet to see a Kirby game that can rival that amount of depth. Maybe Kirby's Return to Dreamland, but it's a stretch.

Difficulty: 5
Kirby games aren't really that difficult. What can I say? The series was made for folks new to video games.

Overall Rating: 9.4
Although this game may appear simple at first glance, but it's got quite a bit of content to offer. Colorful levels, catchy and upbeat music, silly characters, simple controls that anyone can get into, and because of the fact that it's handheld, you can take it pretty much anywhere. This has always been one of my favorite Kirby titles, and It just has something that makes me keep coming back to it.

I think you did a good job with this review. It was somewhat well detailed and well organized. It was interesting and informative. I think you could add a little bit more to it, though. Also, what's with the big space at the bottom? Anyway, this review was decent.