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The story of deg2000 chapter 3
06-23-14 09:22 AM
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Alright guys here we are with chapter 3 glad your still playing/reading in this grand tale. deg- Finally were getting close to the portal it's not going to be much longer guys maybe just another mile or so. Aria- Awesome wait first let me make a quick head check. As she starts counting she notices User isn't there. Aria- User where did you go we have to hurry. User- Hey what do you mean i'm right here. As we see him jumping from house to house and icycle to icycle. Deg- Woah hes pretty agile. Well since all five of us are here then let's move on. Enii's Group Yoshi- By the way Enii just out of curiosity but where did you guys get those sweet weapon things. Enii- Sorry to say I have no idea. But i'm glad they came at the time so we could help you guys out from those weird creatures. Kimmy- Yeah they were odd looking and pretty weak maybe they were grunts or something. Green- Kimmy where do these ideas come from I want to know. Grunts yeah I guess that would seem correct. But like from who? Sux- I don't know but maybe Kimmy is right maybe someone wants Vizzed Ville to go away. As they run as fast as they can portal they can see one user waving at them. Styro- Hey guys over here by the portal come on hurry up. As they run over to the portal where David awaits to tell them of this catastrophe but still needs to wait for Deg's group of users. Deg's group Sadly this group has seem to find a cumbersome situation as they have come to a fork in the road. deg- hmm so if we go this way it would take longer but it seems the easiest as the shorter way look more dangerous it does take half the time off. Aria- Hey let's cast a vote for who wants the faster and more dangerous route to who wants the longer but more careful route. Hands shoot up for both paths but it seems the longer path did win luckily for Sonicmcmuffin's vote. Muffin- Alright let's move out of here quickly now we want be there before David loses his patience. As they run User seems to notice something strange in the road. User- Uh heya guy look at this stuff I found here. deg- What is it? Aria- seems like a puddle from like the rain. bob- Ahem if you guys didn't notice it is like 24 degrees. So why is there a puddle here doesn't that seems suspicious to you? Muffin- Hey guys you might want to check this out it seems a little bit more important then a little puddle As they all want toward where Muffin was standing we could not just stop looking in awe and confusion. At the baffling sight of those weird puddles transforming into weird creatures and a man/woman/it of whatever. Was somehow bringing them to life. deg- What is going on what is this? ???- Hmm oh look we are being watched my friends. Hearing those words with that raspy voice sent shivers down all of our spines. And now knowing he knew we were here watching him scared us more. ???- Too bad only my little babies have to kill you off. Get themmm. Then to our annoyed consent he had to vanish. deg- Loser :/ bob- Totally lame Muffin- That's the best he could think of seriously? Aria- Uh guys you might want to look behind yourselves. As we turn around we see that those weird monsters that weird thing said that it sent them but they were actually coming to actually kill us. deg- Hey guys theres enough for all of us 5 exactly good number. bob- Hmm haven't had a good fist fight in a while this will some fun. User- Talk about it Yeah take this. To our surprise user leaped on one of the house and jumped off to crash into his opponent. deg- Alright User had a great idea jumping and using his weight to counter that thing. Aha I say as I grab a metal pipe that was on the ground and turn around to smash it into my enemy. And was able to see what everyone else was doing. Aria was like throwing things and using a long stick to hit it now then even though it didn't really do a great effect it still helped her. bob of course went all out kicking and punching the thing and at last he picked it up luckily it didn't weigh so much and threw it into Aria's opponent smashing them both. Aria- Thanks a lot for that bob. huff puff bob- sigh* No problem Aria. deg- that takes care of ours now where is Muffin? Muffin- Stay down! He said as he had some sharp knifes and were slashing up and down on the thing as it was laying down trying to block Muffin's attacks until. Muffin kicked it and stabbed it. deg- Well that was very.... Epic Muffin- Yeha it was and can you believe I found some cool dagger like knifes out of nowhere it's they were mean't for me you know. User- Sounds like an awesome mystery but I think we better get out of here fast before more Icers come back. deg- Wait User did you come up with that name your self? User- No I heard him say Icers before he dispeared so you guys better remember the name. Aria- Here I found this book let's put every weird creature name in here starting the page of with Icer. Now as this group starts to near the Portal they start to wonder why this is going on and WHat about that thing in the cloak and about the weird monsters or Icers. Styro- Man you guys sure took a long time didn't you!? deg- Huh I didn't notice we wre that close yet. Bob- About time to I mean really this is getting boring just running around all the place. User- Sorry about that hehe at least were here now right. Muffin- Bootsie!~ your here. As Muffin suddenly Prances over to StyroFoamBoots in her normal School like outfit. Sorry this chapter took so long I will try to make the next chapter soon if I can and that Tribulations will also still be continued. Summons! AriaAngelDream : sop281 : zeross121 : sonicmcmuffin : Eniitan : Gingercream1 : bobq : NintendoFanKimmy : greenluigi : styrofoamboots : A user of this : SUX2BU : yoshirulez! : imamonster : you said you wanted to be summoned when this chapter came out. deg- Finally were getting close to the portal it's not going to be much longer guys maybe just another mile or so. Aria- Awesome wait first let me make a quick head check. As she starts counting she notices User isn't there. Aria- User where did you go we have to hurry. User- Hey what do you mean i'm right here. As we see him jumping from house to house and icycle to icycle. Deg- Woah hes pretty agile. Well since all five of us are here then let's move on. Enii's Group Yoshi- By the way Enii just out of curiosity but where did you guys get those sweet weapon things. Enii- Sorry to say I have no idea. But i'm glad they came at the time so we could help you guys out from those weird creatures. Kimmy- Yeah they were odd looking and pretty weak maybe they were grunts or something. Green- Kimmy where do these ideas come from I want to know. Grunts yeah I guess that would seem correct. But like from who? Sux- I don't know but maybe Kimmy is right maybe someone wants Vizzed Ville to go away. As they run as fast as they can portal they can see one user waving at them. Styro- Hey guys over here by the portal come on hurry up. As they run over to the portal where David awaits to tell them of this catastrophe but still needs to wait for Deg's group of users. Deg's group Sadly this group has seem to find a cumbersome situation as they have come to a fork in the road. deg- hmm so if we go this way it would take longer but it seems the easiest as the shorter way look more dangerous it does take half the time off. Aria- Hey let's cast a vote for who wants the faster and more dangerous route to who wants the longer but more careful route. Hands shoot up for both paths but it seems the longer path did win luckily for Sonicmcmuffin's vote. Muffin- Alright let's move out of here quickly now we want be there before David loses his patience. As they run User seems to notice something strange in the road. User- Uh heya guy look at this stuff I found here. deg- What is it? Aria- seems like a puddle from like the rain. bob- Ahem if you guys didn't notice it is like 24 degrees. So why is there a puddle here doesn't that seems suspicious to you? Muffin- Hey guys you might want to check this out it seems a little bit more important then a little puddle As they all want toward where Muffin was standing we could not just stop looking in awe and confusion. At the baffling sight of those weird puddles transforming into weird creatures and a man/woman/it of whatever. Was somehow bringing them to life. deg- What is going on what is this? ???- Hmm oh look we are being watched my friends. Hearing those words with that raspy voice sent shivers down all of our spines. And now knowing he knew we were here watching him scared us more. ???- Too bad only my little babies have to kill you off. Get themmm. Then to our annoyed consent he had to vanish. deg- Loser :/ bob- Totally lame Muffin- That's the best he could think of seriously? Aria- Uh guys you might want to look behind yourselves. As we turn around we see that those weird monsters that weird thing said that it sent them but they were actually coming to actually kill us. deg- Hey guys theres enough for all of us 5 exactly good number. bob- Hmm haven't had a good fist fight in a while this will some fun. User- Talk about it Yeah take this. To our surprise user leaped on one of the house and jumped off to crash into his opponent. deg- Alright User had a great idea jumping and using his weight to counter that thing. Aha I say as I grab a metal pipe that was on the ground and turn around to smash it into my enemy. And was able to see what everyone else was doing. Aria was like throwing things and using a long stick to hit it now then even though it didn't really do a great effect it still helped her. bob of course went all out kicking and punching the thing and at last he picked it up luckily it didn't weigh so much and threw it into Aria's opponent smashing them both. Aria- Thanks a lot for that bob. huff puff bob- sigh* No problem Aria. deg- that takes care of ours now where is Muffin? Muffin- Stay down! He said as he had some sharp knifes and were slashing up and down on the thing as it was laying down trying to block Muffin's attacks until. Muffin kicked it and stabbed it. deg- Well that was very.... Epic Muffin- Yeha it was and can you believe I found some cool dagger like knifes out of nowhere it's they were mean't for me you know. User- Sounds like an awesome mystery but I think we better get out of here fast before more Icers come back. deg- Wait User did you come up with that name your self? User- No I heard him say Icers before he dispeared so you guys better remember the name. Aria- Here I found this book let's put every weird creature name in here starting the page of with Icer. Now as this group starts to near the Portal they start to wonder why this is going on and WHat about that thing in the cloak and about the weird monsters or Icers. Styro- Man you guys sure took a long time didn't you!? deg- Huh I didn't notice we wre that close yet. Bob- About time to I mean really this is getting boring just running around all the place. User- Sorry about that hehe at least were here now right. Muffin- Bootsie!~ your here. As Muffin suddenly Prances over to StyroFoamBoots in her normal School like outfit. Sorry this chapter took so long I will try to make the next chapter soon if I can and that Tribulations will also still be continued. Summons! AriaAngelDream : sop281 : zeross121 : sonicmcmuffin : Eniitan : Gingercream1 : bobq : NintendoFanKimmy : greenluigi : styrofoamboots : A user of this : SUX2BU : yoshirulez! : imamonster : you said you wanted to be summoned when this chapter came out. |
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06-23-14 09:26 AM
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Very good chapter deg, I really liked it. The storyline is also pretty good, but There are no comma's which makes it look a lot less proffesional. And grammar and use of caps letter also need some work, But besides that it's really good, Keep it up! |
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06-23-14 09:29 AM
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imamonster : Yeah surprising I did forget a lot of letters that did to get capped and commas I do have trouble with doing. And of course I forget the picture again. Image upload: 1032x506 totaling 23 KB's. Image upload: 1032x506 totaling 23 KB's. |
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06-23-14 10:56 AM
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Yay chapter 3! Deg well done. I was wondering when another chapter would come out. I enjoyed reading this please keep on doing more. ^-^ |
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06-23-14 01:34 PM
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It's great, Deg! I can't wait to find out what's next to come! I really like the picture as well, thank you :] |
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umm deg that looks a lot like boots in real life but your missing one thing.. her *cough* daggers *cough* are huge!!! |
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Even though I am not the kind of guy who likes to write many stories I like to read stories now and then, and this is very good. Keep up the good work deg! |
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