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Legend of greenluigi Zoro's Mask chapter 3
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Legend of greenluigi Zoro’s Mask chapter 3: the ultimate sheikah tribe. It was night and everyone was still open but he is in his bed. Kimmy:”green Why you are still awake?” green:”because I love rain, rain is awesome and I miss our vizzed friends, what about you?” kimmy:”I missed them too anyway let’s have fun tomorrow, besides we’re having a vacation so let’s have fun! Anyway let’s go to The next day… green woke up before kimmy. He starts playing his magic flute of wind and he plays a song which he remembers his past battles against the previous villains. Kimmy woke up and she said:”green nice song you’re playing!” green:”thx! It’s a song in which I remember about those past battles…” kimmy:”Awesome! Anyway let’s go outside!” kimmy and green went outside. They see a little girl crying. Green asks:”what’s the matter little girl?” the little girl:”first of all my name is cicily and I’m crying because my big brother is missing.” Kimmy:”okay but first what is your big brother’s name?” cicily:”his name is Ashmo. The last thing he ever said to me was:”im going to take a walk around the forest. I’ll be back soon! But stay calm during my absent!” and also ashmo was suppose to be during the carnival! And he was ALSO supposed to compete the ‘sword competition’ and most of the time he plays his ‘harp of time’. He has like a group of music. The group music did not compete to the carnival because ashmo was missing!” green:”is that so? Don’t worry I’m sure he will come back!” cicily:”well okay I’ll just wait for his return…” kimmy:”I feel sorry for that girl but anyway let’s visit master no hands! Because I want to know more about ‘the god of destruction’!” kimmeh and green visits Whis. Whis:”well hello vizzed heroes! What brings you here?” kimmeh:”well I just want to know more about ‘the god of destruction’ can we?” whis:”well this story is sure is complicated to tell you. I don’t know if it’s time to tell you at you age but anyway should I show you my secret treasure?” green:”YEAH I LOVE TREASURES!” whis shows them the ‘secret treasure’. It was a small orange star ball. Green:”that’s the treasure!? A small orange star ball?!” whis:”it’s not an ordinary ball it’s a dragon ball! If you have seven of these you can summon the legendary dragon! You can grant a wish!” kimmeh:”Awesome!” Suddenly the elephant bandits steal the dragon ball very fast. Green:”not this time elephant bandits!” the elephant bandits:”we just heard that if we get seven of those we can grant a wish! THIS WILL BE PERFECT FOR OUR ‘BOSS’!” kimmeh:”boss?! Who is your boss!?” elephant bandits:”that’s not of your business!” green:”whis get out we will handle them!” whis:”okay if you say so…” suddenly a shadow steals the dragon ball from the elephant bandits. Kimmy:”Woah thx green you little cutie!” green:”I didn’t do anything kimmy and DON’T CALL ME LITTLE CUTIE!” the shadow then disappears. The shadow:”yes that’s what we need! We are… THE ULTIMATE SHEIKAH TRIBE!” the shadow revealed itself. It was a young man wearing a blue mask. Green:”now what!? Elephant bandits, ultimate sheikah tribe!?” one of the ultimate sheikah tribe called impa said:”just try and stop us! Try to take care our ninja ninjis!” the ninja ninjis are small purple and black ninja with sharp teeth easily knocks out the elephant bandits. Kimmy:”oh no this is bad… GO HITMONCHAN! Green you chase the guy wearing the blue mask!” green:”you got it!” green chases the young man wearing the blue mask. Impa has two swords at her hands and she starts to attack hitmonchan and kimmy. Hitmonchan uses close combat at impa but a ninja ninjis saves her. That ninja got damaged instead. Kimmy:”I had enough! Wait a minute why do I have a fire flower in my pocket? Maybe I put in my pocket because we start preparing things before we arrive at clock town.” Kimmy uses the fire flower and she turns into fire kimmy! Impa:”oh no…” Meanwhile with the chase between green and the young man… the young man jumps really high. He jumps into house to house. Green:”you’re good at jumping so do i!” green also starts to jump house to house. Now back with fire kimmy. She knocks out the last remaining ninja ninji. Impa said:”oh man…” she runs away to catch up ‘the young man’. Fire kimmy and hitmonchan chases her. Green:”I HAD ENOUGH! TAKE A YUMMI TASTE OF MY FIRE BALL!” green shoots a fire ball at the ‘young man’. Lucky the young man got saved by his bisharp who used protect. Green:”oh no! I was close!” fire kimmy arrives:”green! Did I miss the show?” green:”well well well congrats kimmy! You turned into fire kimmy for the very first time!” the young man:”I HAD ENOUGH OF THAT GIRL’S FACE!!!” the blue mask shoots a laser at fire kimmy. Kimmy got paralysed. Kimmy:”let me go!” the laser became so strong that it transformed kimmy into a rock!” green:”HEY YOU MEANIE!” the young man:”HA HA HA LOL IT’S SO FUNNY AND HILARIOUS TOO JUST NOW LOOK AT THAT!” the blue mask shoots a laser into the sky. It creates a huge ball face. A huge smiley face. The young man:”perfect that smiley face will crash into clock town and it will destroy the rest of the world! I should give it…. FIVE DAYS! Yes you have five days of fun before it crashes! HAVE FUN MWA HA HA HA!” the young man disappears along with impa. Green:”oh no oh no! the mayor arrived and he said:”WHAT HAPPEN HERE!? AND WHAT’S THAT HUGE SMILEY FACE DOING IN THE SKY!?” green:”I’ll explain now but we have to hurry it will crash in just five days…” To be continued… and how kimmy will regain her true form? Don’t miss the next chapter of Zoro’s Mask! Zoro’s Mask chapter 3: the ultimate sheikah tribe. It was night and everyone was still open but he is in his bed. Kimmy:”green Why you are still awake?” green:”because I love rain, rain is awesome and I miss our vizzed friends, what about you?” kimmy:”I missed them too anyway let’s have fun tomorrow, besides we’re having a vacation so let’s have fun! Anyway let’s go to The next day… green woke up before kimmy. He starts playing his magic flute of wind and he plays a song which he remembers his past battles against the previous villains. Kimmy woke up and she said:”green nice song you’re playing!” green:”thx! It’s a song in which I remember about those past battles…” kimmy:”Awesome! Anyway let’s go outside!” kimmy and green went outside. They see a little girl crying. Green asks:”what’s the matter little girl?” the little girl:”first of all my name is cicily and I’m crying because my big brother is missing.” Kimmy:”okay but first what is your big brother’s name?” cicily:”his name is Ashmo. The last thing he ever said to me was:”im going to take a walk around the forest. I’ll be back soon! But stay calm during my absent!” and also ashmo was suppose to be during the carnival! And he was ALSO supposed to compete the ‘sword competition’ and most of the time he plays his ‘harp of time’. He has like a group of music. The group music did not compete to the carnival because ashmo was missing!” green:”is that so? Don’t worry I’m sure he will come back!” cicily:”well okay I’ll just wait for his return…” kimmy:”I feel sorry for that girl but anyway let’s visit master no hands! Because I want to know more about ‘the god of destruction’!” kimmeh and green visits Whis. Whis:”well hello vizzed heroes! What brings you here?” kimmeh:”well I just want to know more about ‘the god of destruction’ can we?” whis:”well this story is sure is complicated to tell you. I don’t know if it’s time to tell you at you age but anyway should I show you my secret treasure?” green:”YEAH I LOVE TREASURES!” whis shows them the ‘secret treasure’. It was a small orange star ball. Green:”that’s the treasure!? A small orange star ball?!” whis:”it’s not an ordinary ball it’s a dragon ball! If you have seven of these you can summon the legendary dragon! You can grant a wish!” kimmeh:”Awesome!” Suddenly the elephant bandits steal the dragon ball very fast. Green:”not this time elephant bandits!” the elephant bandits:”we just heard that if we get seven of those we can grant a wish! THIS WILL BE PERFECT FOR OUR ‘BOSS’!” kimmeh:”boss?! Who is your boss!?” elephant bandits:”that’s not of your business!” green:”whis get out we will handle them!” whis:”okay if you say so…” suddenly a shadow steals the dragon ball from the elephant bandits. Kimmy:”Woah thx green you little cutie!” green:”I didn’t do anything kimmy and DON’T CALL ME LITTLE CUTIE!” the shadow then disappears. The shadow:”yes that’s what we need! We are… THE ULTIMATE SHEIKAH TRIBE!” the shadow revealed itself. It was a young man wearing a blue mask. Green:”now what!? Elephant bandits, ultimate sheikah tribe!?” one of the ultimate sheikah tribe called impa said:”just try and stop us! Try to take care our ninja ninjis!” the ninja ninjis are small purple and black ninja with sharp teeth easily knocks out the elephant bandits. Kimmy:”oh no this is bad… GO HITMONCHAN! Green you chase the guy wearing the blue mask!” green:”you got it!” green chases the young man wearing the blue mask. Impa has two swords at her hands and she starts to attack hitmonchan and kimmy. Hitmonchan uses close combat at impa but a ninja ninjis saves her. That ninja got damaged instead. Kimmy:”I had enough! Wait a minute why do I have a fire flower in my pocket? Maybe I put in my pocket because we start preparing things before we arrive at clock town.” Kimmy uses the fire flower and she turns into fire kimmy! Impa:”oh no…” Meanwhile with the chase between green and the young man… the young man jumps really high. He jumps into house to house. Green:”you’re good at jumping so do i!” green also starts to jump house to house. Now back with fire kimmy. She knocks out the last remaining ninja ninji. Impa said:”oh man…” she runs away to catch up ‘the young man’. Fire kimmy and hitmonchan chases her. Green:”I HAD ENOUGH! TAKE A YUMMI TASTE OF MY FIRE BALL!” green shoots a fire ball at the ‘young man’. Lucky the young man got saved by his bisharp who used protect. Green:”oh no! I was close!” fire kimmy arrives:”green! Did I miss the show?” green:”well well well congrats kimmy! You turned into fire kimmy for the very first time!” the young man:”I HAD ENOUGH OF THAT GIRL’S FACE!!!” the blue mask shoots a laser at fire kimmy. Kimmy got paralysed. Kimmy:”let me go!” the laser became so strong that it transformed kimmy into a rock!” green:”HEY YOU MEANIE!” the young man:”HA HA HA LOL IT’S SO FUNNY AND HILARIOUS TOO JUST NOW LOOK AT THAT!” the blue mask shoots a laser into the sky. It creates a huge ball face. A huge smiley face. The young man:”perfect that smiley face will crash into clock town and it will destroy the rest of the world! I should give it…. FIVE DAYS! Yes you have five days of fun before it crashes! HAVE FUN MWA HA HA HA!” the young man disappears along with impa. Green:”oh no oh no! the mayor arrived and he said:”WHAT HAPPEN HERE!? AND WHAT’S THAT HUGE SMILEY FACE DOING IN THE SKY!?” green:”I’ll explain now but we have to hurry it will crash in just five days…” To be continued… and how kimmy will regain her true form? Don’t miss the next chapter of Zoro’s Mask! |
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All righty, chapter 3. This one is ginourmous and took me a while to read, but I like a story that is long, and I like what's in this chapter, so congratulations, you passed. So far, I think this is the best of the first 3 chapters. |
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*Jogs from Chapter Two.* *Reaches Chapter Three.* *Huff, puff.* Hello once again, Green! I really loved this chapter, and I found it captivating, so I'll be writing up another quick review to sum up my thoughts and opinions on it! I hope you find this constructive criticism helpful, and please enjoy, cousin! This chapter, above all other things, was fun. Very fun; quite the adventure was held in this chapter, let me tell you! Imagining the scene in which Green chased the blue-masked young man across Clock Town's rooftops was breathtaking, and if this were made into a movie, it would a blockbuster and a smash hit for sure! ...(Is it a bad thing that I imagine Ashmo as R.O.B in his Ancient Minister disguise O_o?)... The Ultimate Sheikah Tribe, huh? That was interesting! It's funny reading Impa here as an antagonist since I'm used to the one from Skyward Sword xD! Nevertheless, their intention on summoning a large, so-called 'smiley' face to destroy Clock Town is interesting, and it really reminds me of the moon from Majora's Mask coming to destroy Termina! That was very well-done, Green! Bravo. ...(I have had enough of Kimmy's face, too xD!)... Anyway, great job, Green, see you around! Never stop writing, or else I will kill you! You have the talent, imagination, and motivation for it, so never give up and always keep aiming for top! Nice work, cousin! *Jogs to Chapter Four.* *Jogs from Chapter Two.* *Reaches Chapter Three.* *Huff, puff.* Hello once again, Green! I really loved this chapter, and I found it captivating, so I'll be writing up another quick review to sum up my thoughts and opinions on it! I hope you find this constructive criticism helpful, and please enjoy, cousin! This chapter, above all other things, was fun. Very fun; quite the adventure was held in this chapter, let me tell you! Imagining the scene in which Green chased the blue-masked young man across Clock Town's rooftops was breathtaking, and if this were made into a movie, it would a blockbuster and a smash hit for sure! ...(Is it a bad thing that I imagine Ashmo as R.O.B in his Ancient Minister disguise O_o?)... The Ultimate Sheikah Tribe, huh? That was interesting! It's funny reading Impa here as an antagonist since I'm used to the one from Skyward Sword xD! Nevertheless, their intention on summoning a large, so-called 'smiley' face to destroy Clock Town is interesting, and it really reminds me of the moon from Majora's Mask coming to destroy Termina! That was very well-done, Green! Bravo. ...(I have had enough of Kimmy's face, too xD!)... Anyway, great job, Green, see you around! Never stop writing, or else I will kill you! You have the talent, imagination, and motivation for it, so never give up and always keep aiming for top! Nice work, cousin! *Jogs to Chapter Four.* |
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