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Legend of greenluigi Zoro’s Mask chapter 1: The carnival and the weird puppet. Meanwhile with the Elephant Bandits… they were making another plan to destroy the vizzed heroes. It was like a giant puppet they created. The elephant bandits:”with this puppet no one will stop us! We should call it…. TITAN DWEEVIL! MWA HA HAAHHAHA!” for no reason they laugh like the old villains but why those villains laugh like that? Well let’s not worry about than anymore how about we see what’s going on in vizzed town? Greenluigi was on a tree playing his magic flute of wind. Davideo7 along with the admins were making vizzed town even better and it had like 1 000 000 000 of people who visit it! The vizzed members were playing with some kokiris in vizzed town. And NintendoFanKimmeh just received a letter! But from whom it was? And she rushes to greenluigi to tell him about the letter. She yelled:”green!” green did not listen. She repeats:”green!” he doesn’t listen and she yells stronger:”GREEN!!!” green falls down from the tree and he said:”HEY what’s wrong with you kimmeh!? Are you nuts?!” kimmy:”well I yelled because you weren’t listening to me! Anyway I just received this letter have a look!” green takes the letter by force. He smells it because to check if there was any bombs, traps etc… he opens the letter and he reads this:”Dear vizzed heroes, we heard that you have destroyed the evil dark force of evil and that’s great news! Not only that because dark bowser is defeated, greenluigi you are now referred as “the legendary sword man”! And nintendofankimmy you are now referred as “the legendary pokemon trainer”! Well I went to ask is… would you like to enjoy some vacations in clock town? It will be great please come please accept! Sincerely, the Mayor Dotour.” Green said:”since when he knew about us!?” kimmy:”what makes you think that I know!? Anyway let’s ask davideo7 if we can have a vacation in clock town!” greenluigi and nintendofankimmy rushes to davideo7 to ask if they can have a vacation. Davideo7 said:”from the mayor dotour?! Well of course you can and also say hi to him from me because we where great young friends!” greenluigi and kimmy prepares every items they have then before they go to clock town mr. zed tells to kimmy this:”guys before you go take this rainbow star just in case if anything happens! But use it wisely!” kimmy:”thx zed!” green and kimmy were walking in the road and they saw some guardians. The guardians said:”WHO ARE YOU!?” green replies:”we are the vizzed heroes! Greenluigi and nintendofankimmy!” and the guardians laughed:”XD XD LOL HA HA HA YOU ARE THE VIZZED HEROES YOU CHUMPS!? WELL PROVE IT!” kimmy showed them the master ball and green showed them the magic flute of wind. Then the leader of the guardians arrived and she said:”hey you guys you shouldn’t judge people by appearance!” one of the guardians said:”but miss…” the leader:”NO BUTS! Anyway vizzed heroes excuse me but you may pass to clock town.” Green and Kimmy arrived in Clock town. They saw like a carnival. Green asked one of the people:”euh excuse me but why is there a carnival?” they replied:”oh because it’s one of the wonderful days! Kafei, the son of the mayor dotour has married Anju few years ago and today they received a baby!” kimmy said:”omg congrats! Wait where we should put our stuff?” they replied:”just put them next to the bulletin board! Kimmeh and green put their stuffs in the bulletin board and green asked kimmy:”now what should we do?” kimmeh said:”we just have to have some fun! Oh green THAT’S A SILLY QUESTION!” oh look there’s a sword competition! Let’s go!” the mayor dotour arrived and he said:”ladies and gentleman I finally became a grandpa and my wife a grandma. Now the sword competition will begin. If somebody wins he or she will be able to hug the baby now GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!” green:”THAT’S THE PRIZE!? THERE’S NO WAY I’LL… kimmy punched green:”oh come on green! Be a gentleman for once!” she took green’s sword of vizzed and she said:”look ha ya! See? You have to do this!” then the mayor dotour saw her and he thought that she was a sword woman and he said:”you’re strong enough so compete!” kimmeh said:”wait my cousin is a sword man not me I was just testing his sword!” the mayor dotour:”NO BUTS! Anyway go to the first round!” green said:”XD LOL KIMMY YOU’RE GOING TO LOSE!” kimmeh said:”BUT MY COUSIN IS 1000X BETTER THAN ME IN SWORD!” green said:”wait a minute kimmy doesn’t know how to use the sword of vizzed! Nobody can master it except me! Well at least this will be fun nierck nierck…” the mayor dotour:”okay first round kimmy vs stingmo! Ready and…. BEGIN!” kimmy was running away because she doesn’t know how to use a sword. Stingmo said:”well give up you coward!” kimmy said:”GREEN CATCH!” she throws the sword of vizzed in the air and green caught it he said:”kimmy this is your fight not mine!” stingmo then charges at greenluigi. Green:”you went me? YOU GOT ME!” he does his tornado sword and he easily beats stingmo. The mayor dotour said on himself:”that green sure has talent I think he will possibly win…” Suddenly a huge puppet with claws appeared. The mayor dotour:”AHH THE COMPETITION WILL BE CANCELLED FROM NOW ON NOW LET’S GET OUT OF HERE!! Kimmeh said:” oh man so big puppet wanna dance? LET’S DANCE!” the elephant bandits from up:”because of the gbckhskbjradar we were able to find the vizzed heroes here so we will control that puppet and destroy them!” kimmeh sends out her scythe and green prepares the sword of vizzed and the shield of vizzed. The giant puppet was about to cut kimmeh’s hair but she falls because she’s good at falling. Falling its good for dodging. Then green comes from behind and he punches the puppet’s face. But it did no damage so he grabs and the puppet uses eyes lasers but green grabs his hand and he says:”how about we get a little serious little man?!” green goes fire greenluigi and he burns the puppet’s hand which cause it no damage… green said:”ma ma mi aim doomed!” but kimmeh saw something that was controlling the puppet and she said:”wait a minute IT’S A PUPPET! Scythe cut the ropes that its controlling it!” scythe cuts the ropes and the puppet is now off. The elephant bandits:” oh uh we’re doomed!” green sees the elephant bandits from up and he jumps in front of them. He says:”looks like somebody is ready to burn…” then one of the elephant bandits took a gun and he shoot it in the sky. Green says:”do you think this will help you to kill me?! Well SAY ADIOS!” he blasts them away with a fire ball. Then kimmy smells something funny it was that clock town was in fire! Because one of the elephant bandits shot in the sky and that little fire thing in the gun did some damage in clock town. Green said:”oh man! NOW WHAT!?” the people returned:”oh no this is horrible! We’re doomed!” kimmeh said:”don’t panic you guys my lugia will use hydro pump to clear the fire! Anju said:”but wait… MY BABY IS ON THE SWORD COMPETITION’S ROOM! MY BABY IS ON DANGER!” green runs to the room he says:”I’LL BRING THE BABY!” kimmy:”green no its too dangerous!” green arrived on the room and he sees a baby crying. He grabs the baby and he flew away before the room destructs itself. Kafei said:”thank you young sword man for saving our baby. Her name is Iris.” Green said:”okay then iris.” Lugia cleared all of the fire. Green throws a 1up mushroom at the damage houses and buildings and of course the competition. The mayor dotour:”now we can finally resume the competition!” the competition is resumed and it looks like green won! Green:”omg I knew it I will win this was so easy like as if I was challenging the elephant bandits.” Kimmeh said:”yay you won green!” green face palmed:”now I have to hug iris : (!” he came and he hugs iris. Iris takes green’s hat green says:”HEY THAT’S MY HAT!” iris starts ruffling green’s hair. Anju starts laughing:”it seems like iris likes you! Its ok if iris keeps that hat for one night? Green screamed like a girl:”FOR ONE NIGHT! ABSOLUTLEY NOT! IM NOTHING WITHOUT MY HAT! IM NOT FABULOUS, AND IM NOT A MAN LIKE THIS!” kimmy punches green:”GREEN! Please don’t cause a drama…” green:”fine you can have it ONLY FOR ONE NIGHT!” anju smiled:”thank you! We promise tomorrow your hat will be just fine.” The mayor dotour said:”now let me show you your house and your bedrooms!” kimmy:”SWEET!” they took their stuffs from the bulletin board and the mayor dotour shows them their houses and their bedrooms. Kimmy and green takes a shower. Kimmy has finished but green not. She said:”strange it’s the first time im done before green.” Then she heard a smoke coming from green’s shower and she screamed:”AHHHH GREEN! YOU….. SMOKE!?!?” green:”yeah do you have a problem?! Kimmeh starts beating greenluigi up. She said:”TELL ME ANOTHER TIME WHEN YOU SMOKED!” he said:”in the kokiri planet after I locked the phantom door I smoked and the battle against giga bowser when he knocked me down, I smocked.” Kimmy:”WHY YOU… well its ok why im mad anyway!?” green faints and he said:”nevermind let’s go to Zoro’s Mask chapter 1: The carnival and the weird puppet. Meanwhile with the Elephant Bandits… they were making another plan to destroy the vizzed heroes. It was like a giant puppet they created. The elephant bandits:”with this puppet no one will stop us! We should call it…. TITAN DWEEVIL! MWA HA HAAHHAHA!” for no reason they laugh like the old villains but why those villains laugh like that? Well let’s not worry about than anymore how about we see what’s going on in vizzed town? Greenluigi was on a tree playing his magic flute of wind. Davideo7 along with the admins were making vizzed town even better and it had like 1 000 000 000 of people who visit it! The vizzed members were playing with some kokiris in vizzed town. And NintendoFanKimmeh just received a letter! But from whom it was? And she rushes to greenluigi to tell him about the letter. She yelled:”green!” green did not listen. She repeats:”green!” he doesn’t listen and she yells stronger:”GREEN!!!” green falls down from the tree and he said:”HEY what’s wrong with you kimmeh!? Are you nuts?!” kimmy:”well I yelled because you weren’t listening to me! Anyway I just received this letter have a look!” green takes the letter by force. He smells it because to check if there was any bombs, traps etc… he opens the letter and he reads this:”Dear vizzed heroes, we heard that you have destroyed the evil dark force of evil and that’s great news! Not only that because dark bowser is defeated, greenluigi you are now referred as “the legendary sword man”! And nintendofankimmy you are now referred as “the legendary pokemon trainer”! Well I went to ask is… would you like to enjoy some vacations in clock town? It will be great please come please accept! Sincerely, the Mayor Dotour.” Green said:”since when he knew about us!?” kimmy:”what makes you think that I know!? Anyway let’s ask davideo7 if we can have a vacation in clock town!” greenluigi and nintendofankimmy rushes to davideo7 to ask if they can have a vacation. Davideo7 said:”from the mayor dotour?! Well of course you can and also say hi to him from me because we where great young friends!” greenluigi and kimmy prepares every items they have then before they go to clock town mr. zed tells to kimmy this:”guys before you go take this rainbow star just in case if anything happens! But use it wisely!” kimmy:”thx zed!” green and kimmy were walking in the road and they saw some guardians. The guardians said:”WHO ARE YOU!?” green replies:”we are the vizzed heroes! Greenluigi and nintendofankimmy!” and the guardians laughed:”XD XD LOL HA HA HA YOU ARE THE VIZZED HEROES YOU CHUMPS!? WELL PROVE IT!” kimmy showed them the master ball and green showed them the magic flute of wind. Then the leader of the guardians arrived and she said:”hey you guys you shouldn’t judge people by appearance!” one of the guardians said:”but miss…” the leader:”NO BUTS! Anyway vizzed heroes excuse me but you may pass to clock town.” Green and Kimmy arrived in Clock town. They saw like a carnival. Green asked one of the people:”euh excuse me but why is there a carnival?” they replied:”oh because it’s one of the wonderful days! Kafei, the son of the mayor dotour has married Anju few years ago and today they received a baby!” kimmy said:”omg congrats! Wait where we should put our stuff?” they replied:”just put them next to the bulletin board! Kimmeh and green put their stuffs in the bulletin board and green asked kimmy:”now what should we do?” kimmeh said:”we just have to have some fun! Oh green THAT’S A SILLY QUESTION!” oh look there’s a sword competition! Let’s go!” the mayor dotour arrived and he said:”ladies and gentleman I finally became a grandpa and my wife a grandma. Now the sword competition will begin. If somebody wins he or she will be able to hug the baby now GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!” green:”THAT’S THE PRIZE!? THERE’S NO WAY I’LL… kimmy punched green:”oh come on green! Be a gentleman for once!” she took green’s sword of vizzed and she said:”look ha ya! See? You have to do this!” then the mayor dotour saw her and he thought that she was a sword woman and he said:”you’re strong enough so compete!” kimmeh said:”wait my cousin is a sword man not me I was just testing his sword!” the mayor dotour:”NO BUTS! Anyway go to the first round!” green said:”XD LOL KIMMY YOU’RE GOING TO LOSE!” kimmeh said:”BUT MY COUSIN IS 1000X BETTER THAN ME IN SWORD!” green said:”wait a minute kimmy doesn’t know how to use the sword of vizzed! Nobody can master it except me! Well at least this will be fun nierck nierck…” the mayor dotour:”okay first round kimmy vs stingmo! Ready and…. BEGIN!” kimmy was running away because she doesn’t know how to use a sword. Stingmo said:”well give up you coward!” kimmy said:”GREEN CATCH!” she throws the sword of vizzed in the air and green caught it he said:”kimmy this is your fight not mine!” stingmo then charges at greenluigi. Green:”you went me? YOU GOT ME!” he does his tornado sword and he easily beats stingmo. The mayor dotour said on himself:”that green sure has talent I think he will possibly win…” Suddenly a huge puppet with claws appeared. The mayor dotour:”AHH THE COMPETITION WILL BE CANCELLED FROM NOW ON NOW LET’S GET OUT OF HERE!! Kimmeh said:” oh man so big puppet wanna dance? LET’S DANCE!” the elephant bandits from up:”because of the gbckhskbjradar we were able to find the vizzed heroes here so we will control that puppet and destroy them!” kimmeh sends out her scythe and green prepares the sword of vizzed and the shield of vizzed. The giant puppet was about to cut kimmeh’s hair but she falls because she’s good at falling. Falling its good for dodging. Then green comes from behind and he punches the puppet’s face. But it did no damage so he grabs and the puppet uses eyes lasers but green grabs his hand and he says:”how about we get a little serious little man?!” green goes fire greenluigi and he burns the puppet’s hand which cause it no damage… green said:”ma ma mi aim doomed!” but kimmeh saw something that was controlling the puppet and she said:”wait a minute IT’S A PUPPET! Scythe cut the ropes that its controlling it!” scythe cuts the ropes and the puppet is now off. The elephant bandits:” oh uh we’re doomed!” green sees the elephant bandits from up and he jumps in front of them. He says:”looks like somebody is ready to burn…” then one of the elephant bandits took a gun and he shoot it in the sky. Green says:”do you think this will help you to kill me?! Well SAY ADIOS!” he blasts them away with a fire ball. Then kimmy smells something funny it was that clock town was in fire! Because one of the elephant bandits shot in the sky and that little fire thing in the gun did some damage in clock town. Green said:”oh man! NOW WHAT!?” the people returned:”oh no this is horrible! We’re doomed!” kimmeh said:”don’t panic you guys my lugia will use hydro pump to clear the fire! Anju said:”but wait… MY BABY IS ON THE SWORD COMPETITION’S ROOM! MY BABY IS ON DANGER!” green runs to the room he says:”I’LL BRING THE BABY!” kimmy:”green no its too dangerous!” green arrived on the room and he sees a baby crying. He grabs the baby and he flew away before the room destructs itself. Kafei said:”thank you young sword man for saving our baby. Her name is Iris.” Green said:”okay then iris.” Lugia cleared all of the fire. Green throws a 1up mushroom at the damage houses and buildings and of course the competition. The mayor dotour:”now we can finally resume the competition!” the competition is resumed and it looks like green won! Green:”omg I knew it I will win this was so easy like as if I was challenging the elephant bandits.” Kimmeh said:”yay you won green!” green face palmed:”now I have to hug iris : (!” he came and he hugs iris. Iris takes green’s hat green says:”HEY THAT’S MY HAT!” iris starts ruffling green’s hair. Anju starts laughing:”it seems like iris likes you! Its ok if iris keeps that hat for one night? Green screamed like a girl:”FOR ONE NIGHT! ABSOLUTLEY NOT! IM NOTHING WITHOUT MY HAT! IM NOT FABULOUS, AND IM NOT A MAN LIKE THIS!” kimmy punches green:”GREEN! Please don’t cause a drama…” green:”fine you can have it ONLY FOR ONE NIGHT!” anju smiled:”thank you! We promise tomorrow your hat will be just fine.” The mayor dotour said:”now let me show you your house and your bedrooms!” kimmy:”SWEET!” they took their stuffs from the bulletin board and the mayor dotour shows them their houses and their bedrooms. Kimmy and green takes a shower. Kimmy has finished but green not. She said:”strange it’s the first time im done before green.” Then she heard a smoke coming from green’s shower and she screamed:”AHHHH GREEN! YOU….. SMOKE!?!?” green:”yeah do you have a problem?! Kimmeh starts beating greenluigi up. She said:”TELL ME ANOTHER TIME WHEN YOU SMOKED!” he said:”in the kokiri planet after I locked the phantom door I smoked and the battle against giga bowser when he knocked me down, I smocked.” Kimmy:”WHY YOU… well its ok why im mad anyway!?” green faints and he said:”nevermind let’s go to |
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Sweet mother of Pearl! You weren't kidding when you said The Phantom Key-blade's sequel was a simultaneous comedy, huh? It's hilarious! Zorro's Mask (I know it's spelled with only one 'r', but I'm used to the movie Zorro, so deal with it), is definitely going to be a smash hit; the first chapter made me laugh so hard that I nearly thought my eyes were going to fall out of their sockets. "But then she fell because she's good at falling". That's funny. I am, in fact, good at falling in real life. But you already know that, Green! Your recurring use of 'chumps' in your hilarious stories remind me of that inside joke we made about a certain phrase in a Mario and Luigi game, if you catch my drift. Wink, wink, hint, hint. Anyhow, great job on kicking of your series to a brand new start! A fresh beginning is a decisive stage, especially in an ongoing series like yours. People handle those parts pretty based on what I've seen, but you just take the cake! First of all, wow. Second of all, wow. Third of all - you know what? Wow! This initial chapter tells me this is going to be a great new step in the series' history, cousin, and I know it is going to be a big one! NintendoFanKimmeh is by far one of my most favorite nicknames I have gone by here on Vizzed. Well, then. It looks like Green and Kimmy have been invited to Clock Town for a nice vacation after all that hard work saving the possesed Vizzed users and kicking Giga Dark Boswer's butt. I knew it was too good to be true. I had a sneaky suspicion since I read the invitation scene that something would go awry. I liked this one - another attack from the good, ol' Elephant Bandits! I remember you telling me about the Titan Dweevil puppet. It was great seeing it in action. I know this is shaping up to be a pretty long review, but, hey, it's a long chapter, so it deserves a long review, right? The lenght of this chapter was astounding compared to previous ones in the series, and the story perfectly fit the capacity that it was given. Nice job rounding that up, Green. That's pretty impressive. Too bad Kimmy's such a coward! And, yes, you got this part right - Green is not fabulous without his hat. Now way, no how. Impossible. He loses all his glam and fab and swag and whatever gay things you want to say (pardon my language... I meant happy). He's no man without that hat, that's for sure. Well, that about sums it up for this review. My conclusion? 100/100. Top notch! I'll be checking out chapter two of this installment real quick; I just need to celebrate my 1,000 post thing with a quick thread beforehand. This was a nother batch of brian candy to me, and it was even sweeter this time! Well, time to head over to the next fun musadventures of cute, little, innocent - wait, wait, wait, hold on for just one cotton-picking moment, Green smokes? ... My childhood is officially ruined forever. 5/5 Stars. Sweet mother of Pearl! You weren't kidding when you said The Phantom Key-blade's sequel was a simultaneous comedy, huh? It's hilarious! Zorro's Mask (I know it's spelled with only one 'r', but I'm used to the movie Zorro, so deal with it), is definitely going to be a smash hit; the first chapter made me laugh so hard that I nearly thought my eyes were going to fall out of their sockets. "But then she fell because she's good at falling". That's funny. I am, in fact, good at falling in real life. But you already know that, Green! Your recurring use of 'chumps' in your hilarious stories remind me of that inside joke we made about a certain phrase in a Mario and Luigi game, if you catch my drift. Wink, wink, hint, hint. Anyhow, great job on kicking of your series to a brand new start! A fresh beginning is a decisive stage, especially in an ongoing series like yours. People handle those parts pretty based on what I've seen, but you just take the cake! First of all, wow. Second of all, wow. Third of all - you know what? Wow! This initial chapter tells me this is going to be a great new step in the series' history, cousin, and I know it is going to be a big one! NintendoFanKimmeh is by far one of my most favorite nicknames I have gone by here on Vizzed. Well, then. It looks like Green and Kimmy have been invited to Clock Town for a nice vacation after all that hard work saving the possesed Vizzed users and kicking Giga Dark Boswer's butt. I knew it was too good to be true. I had a sneaky suspicion since I read the invitation scene that something would go awry. I liked this one - another attack from the good, ol' Elephant Bandits! I remember you telling me about the Titan Dweevil puppet. It was great seeing it in action. I know this is shaping up to be a pretty long review, but, hey, it's a long chapter, so it deserves a long review, right? The lenght of this chapter was astounding compared to previous ones in the series, and the story perfectly fit the capacity that it was given. Nice job rounding that up, Green. That's pretty impressive. Too bad Kimmy's such a coward! And, yes, you got this part right - Green is not fabulous without his hat. Now way, no how. Impossible. He loses all his glam and fab and swag and whatever gay things you want to say (pardon my language... I meant happy). He's no man without that hat, that's for sure. Well, that about sums it up for this review. My conclusion? 100/100. Top notch! I'll be checking out chapter two of this installment real quick; I just need to celebrate my 1,000 post thing with a quick thread beforehand. This was a nother batch of brian candy to me, and it was even sweeter this time! Well, time to head over to the next fun musadventures of cute, little, innocent - wait, wait, wait, hold on for just one cotton-picking moment, Green smokes? ... My childhood is officially ruined forever. 5/5 Stars. |
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