Bravery the sacred
gold and the sacred silver chapter 7:
a horrible surprise…
Prince fou took out
his sword and he fatal blow nights to his weak point: his crystal located in
his heart. Marigi said:”HEY! THAT’S ONE OF MY FRIENDS! That’s it let the match
begins RIGHT NOW!” prince fou used his sword attack at marigi but no effect…
marigi punches prince fou, kicks him and send him flying marigi said:”WEEE IT’S
FUN BEATING YOU UP!” marigi ground pound prince fou. Fou said:”OUCH! How dare
you hurt me!” marigi sneak behind fou he said:”ha ha got your cape!” marigi
swings prince fou and send him flying and marigi reground pound him again.
Prince fou was nearly dead until he said:”uh… I it’s u-up to you…. BROTHER!!!”
peach said:”Way to go marigi! Wait did prince fou said “brother”?      What does he mean by that?” nights woke up
he managed to survive he said:”OH MY GOD! I TOTALLY REMEMBERED! Guys to tell
you the truth is that….” Dynamic girl said:”that what?” nights said:”PRINCE FOU
HAS A TWIN OLDER BROTHER!!!!!” peach got mad and she start shaking nights she
said:”THEN WHY DIDN’T OU TELLED US THIS FROM THE FIRST PLACE?!?!?!?!?” nights
said:”sorry I forgot because im very stupid! Not only that gathering the sacred
gold and the sacred silver REVIVED ALL OF HIS POWER BACK!!!!” marigi said:”OH
WHAT!? WELL THANK YOU NIGHTS!” there was thunder and prince fou’s twin older
brother got full revived he said:”FINALLY IM FREE!!! PRINCE FOU SWORD TIME!”
prince fou transforms into a sword. Marigi said:”oh yeah? Well I have to do
this! HAAAAAAA! IT’S SUPER MARIGI!

"Twin older brother". XD. Anyway, I love the little references you're putting in you stories. "Ha, ha, got your cape!"



"Ha, ha, got your tail!" - Goku, TFS Abridged Parody Episode 1.

hmmmm. I like it, but I feel that it's a bit short. It's good though, how many chapters do you plan on doing overall?

zanderlex : in the sacred gold and the sacred silver maybe there will be 9 or 10 chapters or more it depends the idea

greenluigi : Meh. I really think you should rack you brain for more ideas because I really think that you can make this much longer. I don't think 9 or 10 will be enough. You should at least try to make it 12 to 15. Or, if you make 9 0r 10, you can make the last one really long, like 1000 words to make it seem like a big deal.