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To Atlantis We Sail :D Chapter 3
11-04-13 10:09 PM
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Hey Chapter 3 . Has anyone noticed something special about ALL the chapter threes ? If you then let me know I think I do Anyway this one will be a wee bit elongated as to the various things taking place in this one . Here we go .. Enjoy Mid day . Grand Cay . Bahamian Island . : Matthew - " Its been half a day now And Zed still isn't here . " Luke - " Are you sure this where where he told you to meet him Amy ? " Amy - " Well he did not specify which island so I thought it would be the one closest to the North since that is where I think he'll be coming from " Roger - " That'd be truthful Ms . Mali but I'm afraid those predictions be a tad bit off the marrrkkkkhah " Amy - " Why . What makes you think that I'm wrong . I think I know more about Zed than you do Captain Roger ... with all due respect " Roger - " Yar Predictions be wrong because he ain't coming in fraam the Narth . He 's already here " * Points top the top of a banana tree * At the summit of the plant was the Captain himself ... mucnching on some bananas . Just chilling in the tree watching the crew stare up at him . Zed - * Swallows banana that he was chewing * " Mhhh. Good fruit . " John - " What are you doing up there ? " Zed - " Preventing scurvy . Keeping my potassium intake high . Here help yourself " * Cuts dwon a bunch of the fruit using his sword * " Be careful not to let them smush . * Takes another fruit from the tree * " Did you know these things saved my life once ? " Roger - " Let me guesss. Execution ? " Zed - " You know me so well . " * Jumps don from tree " Amy - " Ok we're all here . What is the plan ? And why did you betray England ? " Zed - " Oh don't worry . We can always vacation to Scotland . " Amy - " We're not welcome there .. remember ? " Zed - " France ? " Amy - " Burnt Crops " Zed - " Ghana ? " Amy - " Pretended to be chief " Zed - " What about .... Italy ? I haven't done anything wrong there have I ? " Amy - " Do the words ... " You ungrateful peasant . Get back with my Ship " .... " And Your not welcome here ever again " ring a bell ? " Zed - " I see . Well we can always just stay or visit here . No rules , regards and .... We have bananas , " Amy - " No . " Roger - " Sarry to intarrupt family time but We be needing a plan to get to the Golden Gates of the fabled City " Zed - " We do don't we ? Right then . I don't have the Map . " Roger - " Then who does ? " Zed - " The English ship that tried to kill me . Now no doubt they found that body I left and are searching for us right now . When we sail I will retrieve it when they " bump " into us . It will be a glass of Rum " The crew prept for the journey at hand loading supplies from the island like wood and bananas on board the ship . When they were all aboard the vessel the ship took of . Zed - " Hey Roger . You wouldn't happen to see an extra captain's hat lying around here now would ye ? " Roger - " No . And eeven If a did A would burn it or throw it overboard . This be my ship Zed . Know yar placccccccccah " Zed - " You spat in my face again " Afternoon . Approaching the NorthWestern Atlantic Basin . Aboard The English Vessel : Frank - " SO turns out we didn't kill him then ey " Executioner 2 - " Don't beat yourself up Frank old boy . How were you supposed to know that he wasn't going to die ? " Frank - " I am an executioner . Killing is my job . And if I can't kill one measly pirate then what kinda of Executioner am I ? " Executioner 2 - " C'mon Frank . If Killing Zed were our jobs then We'd be fired within a week " Frank - " I guess your right " The captain comes striding in having heard word of a ship being spotted . He thinks Zed could be on that ship and orders for it to be boarded . As they approach the ship ( Yeah Zed is on it ) The Captain goes to the back . Well he is not really the captain of this ship but you know how it is . Anyway He sneaks off to the stern . Amy - " Zed . Where are you going ? " Zed - " Those bloody English are good seekers . If I were to stow away and hide here then I'd be found . And anyone associated with me would be killed . I can't have them kill you because of me . " Amy - " So you DO care about me " Zed - " ......* Jumps overboard * " If they do question you then tell them I'm not on the ship Ok ? " Amy - " Alright " Meanwhile the English are boarding the ship Zed Swims over to theirs and successfully boards it too . He knocks out a guard and quickly swaps clothing with him . Meanwhile on Roger's ship : Captain of the English Ship - " Where is he ? " Matthew - " Where is who ? " Captain - " Zed . Where is he hidden his thieving person now ? " Roger - " Zed ain't aboard my ship . The likes a him ain't welcome here " Captain - " We will find him .... We will arrest you all for associating with him and we will have you all executed. Now to make your punishment easier ... disclose his location . " Roger - * Looks straight into the Captain's eyes with his eyes , lifting the eye patch from its position , revealing a burnt morcle of flesh that was an eye * " This is what happened the last time I " ASSOCIATED WITH THAT MAN . The lead sprinkler it was far me . The galloes far him . The sprinkler had molten , hot pieces of lead or oil in it . They started at my eye . When the found out that Zed had escaped they ran off to him and left me be . I paid for my crimes with both money and me eye . " * Pulls down his eye patch * " I ain't paying againnnah " The Captain simply ordered a search of the ship to find the convict of which they searched for . When there was no progress after 5 minutes the Commander ordered the men back to their ship and t .... or so they thought . Meanwhile on the English ship : Zed walked to the middle of the main deck looking as normal as ever .. blending in . Since the other men were on Roger's ship Zed had time to search for the Map . So he entered the captain's quarters in search of the item in question . He approached a desk with four drawers , two on each side . He opened them and found no Map . He then looked upon the desk .. no map . He searched the cabin thoroughly and still .. no map Zed - " I wonder where he'd put the map ? If I were a map then where would I .... * Stumbles and falls over a loose floor board to find the map stowed away in a bottle* " There you are . " He took the map but had no where to hide it till he noticed a captain's hat ontop of a cabinet . Zed - " Now THERE .... we go " He put on the Hat and hid the Bottle with the Map inside it under it ontop of his head . . When the English boarded there ship the captain was the first to speak . The soldiers and privateers lived up . There was one canon on the main De ck . Captain - " You * Points at Zed .. Still oblivious to the fact that he isn't who he seems to be * Zed - " Me ? " Captain - " Yes . Why weren't you over there , searching for the prisoner ? " Zed - " I was making sure that no strangers baorded sir . Those pirates can be a tad bit sneaky . Wouldn't want one of them making off with anything sir " Captain - " Indeed . Good job . Now sink the ship . " Zed - "* Points at Roger's Ship * " That ship ? " Captain - " Yes that ship - " Frank - " Ohh . This is going to be great . That is what I need to get the old escape from death thing off my mind " The Captain told Zed that he would fire first . And after his shot then the other canons below deck would be fired too . . So Zed walked to the canon and lit the match that was on top of it . Zed - " You know there's one reason why I can't sink the ship ? " Captain - " And why might that be ? " Zed - " In this enterprise we take what we can get and steal . what we can't " Zed points the canon downwards and it shoot a hole in the deck . He jumps through the hole and runs towards the other canons and points them downwards before they fire so they too fire wholes in the ship . Zed then jumps overboard and swims to Roger's ship . When he board the ship he is still wearing the English uniform and the crew all aim thier swords and guns at him . Zed - * Raises hands int he air * " Relax . Its only me " The crew withdraw their weapons . Roger - " Did you get the Mapppah ? " Zed - " Thats not all I got . ... * Takes off Captain's hat * " I got a hat too " That was part 1 . Part 2 comins soon so I need ya'll to reply to this Here we go .. Enjoy Mid day . Grand Cay . Bahamian Island . : Matthew - " Its been half a day now And Zed still isn't here . " Luke - " Are you sure this where where he told you to meet him Amy ? " Amy - " Well he did not specify which island so I thought it would be the one closest to the North since that is where I think he'll be coming from " Roger - " That'd be truthful Ms . Mali but I'm afraid those predictions be a tad bit off the marrrkkkkhah " Amy - " Why . What makes you think that I'm wrong . I think I know more about Zed than you do Captain Roger ... with all due respect " Roger - " Yar Predictions be wrong because he ain't coming in fraam the Narth . He 's already here " * Points top the top of a banana tree * At the summit of the plant was the Captain himself ... mucnching on some bananas . Just chilling in the tree watching the crew stare up at him . Zed - * Swallows banana that he was chewing * " Mhhh. Good fruit . " John - " What are you doing up there ? " Zed - " Preventing scurvy . Keeping my potassium intake high . Here help yourself " * Cuts dwon a bunch of the fruit using his sword * " Be careful not to let them smush . * Takes another fruit from the tree * " Did you know these things saved my life once ? " Roger - " Let me guesss. Execution ? " Zed - " You know me so well . " * Jumps don from tree " Amy - " Ok we're all here . What is the plan ? And why did you betray England ? " Zed - " Oh don't worry . We can always vacation to Scotland . " Amy - " We're not welcome there .. remember ? " Zed - " France ? " Amy - " Burnt Crops " Zed - " Ghana ? " Amy - " Pretended to be chief " Zed - " What about .... Italy ? I haven't done anything wrong there have I ? " Amy - " Do the words ... " You ungrateful peasant . Get back with my Ship " .... " And Your not welcome here ever again " ring a bell ? " Zed - " I see . Well we can always just stay or visit here . No rules , regards and .... We have bananas , " Amy - " No . " Roger - " Sarry to intarrupt family time but We be needing a plan to get to the Golden Gates of the fabled City " Zed - " We do don't we ? Right then . I don't have the Map . " Roger - " Then who does ? " Zed - " The English ship that tried to kill me . Now no doubt they found that body I left and are searching for us right now . When we sail I will retrieve it when they " bump " into us . It will be a glass of Rum " The crew prept for the journey at hand loading supplies from the island like wood and bananas on board the ship . When they were all aboard the vessel the ship took of . Zed - " Hey Roger . You wouldn't happen to see an extra captain's hat lying around here now would ye ? " Roger - " No . And eeven If a did A would burn it or throw it overboard . This be my ship Zed . Know yar placccccccccah " Zed - " You spat in my face again " Afternoon . Approaching the NorthWestern Atlantic Basin . Aboard The English Vessel : Frank - " SO turns out we didn't kill him then ey " Executioner 2 - " Don't beat yourself up Frank old boy . How were you supposed to know that he wasn't going to die ? " Frank - " I am an executioner . Killing is my job . And if I can't kill one measly pirate then what kinda of Executioner am I ? " Executioner 2 - " C'mon Frank . If Killing Zed were our jobs then We'd be fired within a week " Frank - " I guess your right " The captain comes striding in having heard word of a ship being spotted . He thinks Zed could be on that ship and orders for it to be boarded . As they approach the ship ( Yeah Zed is on it ) The Captain goes to the back . Well he is not really the captain of this ship but you know how it is . Anyway He sneaks off to the stern . Amy - " Zed . Where are you going ? " Zed - " Those bloody English are good seekers . If I were to stow away and hide here then I'd be found . And anyone associated with me would be killed . I can't have them kill you because of me . " Amy - " So you DO care about me " Zed - " ......* Jumps overboard * " If they do question you then tell them I'm not on the ship Ok ? " Amy - " Alright " Meanwhile the English are boarding the ship Zed Swims over to theirs and successfully boards it too . He knocks out a guard and quickly swaps clothing with him . Meanwhile on Roger's ship : Captain of the English Ship - " Where is he ? " Matthew - " Where is who ? " Captain - " Zed . Where is he hidden his thieving person now ? " Roger - " Zed ain't aboard my ship . The likes a him ain't welcome here " Captain - " We will find him .... We will arrest you all for associating with him and we will have you all executed. Now to make your punishment easier ... disclose his location . " Roger - * Looks straight into the Captain's eyes with his eyes , lifting the eye patch from its position , revealing a burnt morcle of flesh that was an eye * " This is what happened the last time I " ASSOCIATED WITH THAT MAN . The lead sprinkler it was far me . The galloes far him . The sprinkler had molten , hot pieces of lead or oil in it . They started at my eye . When the found out that Zed had escaped they ran off to him and left me be . I paid for my crimes with both money and me eye . " * Pulls down his eye patch * " I ain't paying againnnah " The Captain simply ordered a search of the ship to find the convict of which they searched for . When there was no progress after 5 minutes the Commander ordered the men back to their ship and t .... or so they thought . Meanwhile on the English ship : Zed walked to the middle of the main deck looking as normal as ever .. blending in . Since the other men were on Roger's ship Zed had time to search for the Map . So he entered the captain's quarters in search of the item in question . He approached a desk with four drawers , two on each side . He opened them and found no Map . He then looked upon the desk .. no map . He searched the cabin thoroughly and still .. no map Zed - " I wonder where he'd put the map ? If I were a map then where would I .... * Stumbles and falls over a loose floor board to find the map stowed away in a bottle* " There you are . " He took the map but had no where to hide it till he noticed a captain's hat ontop of a cabinet . Zed - " Now THERE .... we go " He put on the Hat and hid the Bottle with the Map inside it under it ontop of his head . . When the English boarded there ship the captain was the first to speak . The soldiers and privateers lived up . There was one canon on the main De ck . Captain - " You * Points at Zed .. Still oblivious to the fact that he isn't who he seems to be * Zed - " Me ? " Captain - " Yes . Why weren't you over there , searching for the prisoner ? " Zed - " I was making sure that no strangers baorded sir . Those pirates can be a tad bit sneaky . Wouldn't want one of them making off with anything sir " Captain - " Indeed . Good job . Now sink the ship . " Zed - "* Points at Roger's Ship * " That ship ? " Captain - " Yes that ship - " Frank - " Ohh . This is going to be great . That is what I need to get the old escape from death thing off my mind " The Captain told Zed that he would fire first . And after his shot then the other canons below deck would be fired too . . So Zed walked to the canon and lit the match that was on top of it . Zed - " You know there's one reason why I can't sink the ship ? " Captain - " And why might that be ? " Zed - " In this enterprise we take what we can get and steal . what we can't " Zed points the canon downwards and it shoot a hole in the deck . He jumps through the hole and runs towards the other canons and points them downwards before they fire so they too fire wholes in the ship . Zed then jumps overboard and swims to Roger's ship . When he board the ship he is still wearing the English uniform and the crew all aim thier swords and guns at him . Zed - * Raises hands int he air * " Relax . Its only me " The crew withdraw their weapons . Roger - " Did you get the Mapppah ? " Zed - " Thats not all I got . ... * Takes off Captain's hat * " I got a hat too " That was part 1 . Part 2 comins soon so I need ya'll to reply to this |
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Nice job writing this Anyway, is it that Zed steals something every chapter 3? Nice job writing this Anyway, is it that Zed steals something every chapter 3? |
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11-05-13 03:09 PM
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A user of this : Nope but you are welcomed to try again. The thing that is in common has not been written for THIS chapter 3 yet . Part 2 of the is chapter 3 will have it But again ... gonna need someone to post |
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