This game is pretty good The sound is great and this game was a good was original not that fun but this mod was great the graphics was decent the story-line is great it goes all the way through the game unlike some other game mood's this game is a little bit easy than the original sadly I wish it was harder but he/she made the starting Pokemon better then they usually are. Also made more of them so that is a Pokemon games then to be easy to beat after you beat some trainers. Personally I like how this mod add the full poked ex in it that a upside so we can see all the modded names he made for the Pokemon and there new stats. Sadly he didn't edit the way everybody looks but he edited some people. The reason I gave the Addictiveness a 5 was this game is really old so its not really addictive because who hasn't played this game all day one time. Other than that this game is pretty addicting because he/she edited so many things. So my overall option of this game is great I hope all of you like it as much as I did. I give this game a thumbs up.

Local Mods : this doesn't meet the minimum requirements for a review...

prowess : The minimum requirements to make a game review has to be at least 100 words describing the game. For first timers, you can try to categorize your review so it can be long. good luck next time bud!

prowess : Sorry, but this does not qualify as a review.

edit: sorry, ninja'd


But thank you very much for trying! I like it.

prowess : This isn't really much a review because it's below the 100-word line and normally below 100 words, then it's more of a discussion more than a review, but this being your first review, it's pretty ok, but just next time, post a much longer review and you should be good, and to make it good, also separate them as well while you're at it.

Edit: blast, double ninja'd

prowess : Haven't critiqued a review in a while so I feel like doing one right now .

Is this your first review? I like how you expressed your opinions in this review. You stated the same was 'pretty good', that the sound was 'great', the graphics were 'decent', etc. Good work!

You should develop these sentences more though. Saying that the game is pretty good is completely acceptable but it would do you good to explain to us why you thought the game was pretty good, why you thought the graphics were decent and the sound was great. Developing your points will improve your writing and thus you will become an even better reviewer. For example:

"I felt that the graphics in this game were decent as there was many different colours and shadings and it all blended in well. However, I didn't feel that the creator of this game put a lot of detail into the game's graphics as some areas of the game were out of place and it wasn't that pleasing to look at." 

This is developing your points. Although that sentence didn't make much sense and didn't correspond to the game you played it does show how you should include your reasons why you didn't/did like certain areas of the game.

There are some grammar tweaks here and there. Also, some words were left out in cases. "this game was a good was original". If you read over your reviews before publishing it can minimise the chances of these errors.

If you take on board what I have said you can improve your reviews and make them super detailed and get better credit for them. 

Wasn't a bad review, it was short and to the point - I like it.

I think the minimum requirement for a review is 100 words however I could be wrong. Just double check that.

Good Luck!

Sorry I was in a rush and didn't get to finish my review.

prowess : It's OK, as long as you fixed it.
Good overall job on this, just it could be written better. Look at this thread to make them great.
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382
( It really helps! )

Ok Thanks it does.