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A Vizzed-Up Story: Chapter 3

 

10-06-13 01:18 PM
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Here's chapter three of my story!  Last time we left off, tgags shocked goodboy into oblivion, and Barathemos joined the fun. I'll list the last chapters under my credits like last time. Enjoy!

Chapter 3: Enter: Some random people who are somehow related to tgags.

I wake up from my nap.

"Wugh... What the heck... was that?" I looked around. I was in... a cave. I got up from the floor, and walked towards a light. Torches.

"Tgags? Tgags! Where are you? And why the crap did you beat me up out there after looking at that dude? Why did I feel lightning? Answer me! Now!" I yelled, half-expecting an answer. I eventually walked to the point where there were hieroglyphics. Were these... about me?

It shows about some guy and an army beating up a large being, and enclosing it into a void. I look at the pictures later shown. The void is opened up, releasing beasts. The old hero is nowhere to be found, and the army is being destroyed and picked off. It shows another person coming up from the light, and fighting these beasts... And it ends there. Odd...

"Hmm... Does this possibly mean--" I say, being cut off.

"We kidnapped you and brought you here because YOU'RE the next hero? Eeyup!" said a voice. I jumped back into the hieroglyphics, and fall over.

"Who's there?" I say, frightened.

A figure appears out of the shadows. "I'm SadSecrets. Nice to meet you. Call me Sekky!" they reply.

"Okay, Sekky, where's tgags? And was that a magic trick or what?" I ask.

"I'm right here," a voice says from behind me. Tgags.

"Explain what the heck is going on. Now," I demand.

"Well, in short, Barathemos, the beast in the hieroglyphics, is back. He's basically the most evil thing, ever. There's a hero, per se, meant to fight and kill Barathemos and his empire. The last one locked him up in the darkness of time, and now he's back. We think you're the hero, here. We kidnapped you and brought you back. Sekky frightened you and you screamed like a little girl, and now, I'm not sure if I should reveal the rest of my family to you," he explains.

My mouth drops open. Sekky is the one to talk.

"So, tgags, can I bring them out now?" she asks.

"Be my guest," he replies.

Suddenly, people start coming in. They look normal. But they aren't.

"Here, first I'll say one thing. We're a species of superhumans. Many refer to us as Things. We all have special powers, so to speak. Here, I'll introduce you to SOME of them," he says.

"I'm, as you know, tgags. I control the elements, which consists of water, fire, lightning, earth, and wind.

That's Sekky. She's got the power of fusing into her surroundings.

That's Singelli. She's got the power of reading hearts and emotions. Also, when she builds up pressure into herself, she can release it in the form of power. Oh, did I mention she teleports?

That's Eirinn over there. He can fly.

That's Razor-987 over there. He, as his name forbids, can turn his body parts into blades.

Eniitan can turn invisible.

And so on. We've got way too much people to talk about," he explains. "You, however, have the power of all powers. All Heroes do. Which is why we need you."

My mouth hangs open. So we go from eating fries to revealing me as a demigod? What sorcery is this?

------------------

Here's chapter 3. Sort of confusing, yes, but I had to do it at some point. I hope you enjoyed this one. This chapter was mainly information and more background about the story. And, if you find resemblance between me and tgags' stories, that's what we were planning on doing. What was it exactly? Not telling until a long time from now.

Mentioned here were the following:

tgags123 :
SadSecrets :
Barathemos :
Singelli :
Eirinn :
Razor-987 :
Eniitan :

Chapter 1:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=66518

Chapter 2:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=66556
Here's chapter three of my story!  Last time we left off, tgags shocked goodboy into oblivion, and Barathemos joined the fun. I'll list the last chapters under my credits like last time. Enjoy!

Chapter 3: Enter: Some random people who are somehow related to tgags.

I wake up from my nap.

"Wugh... What the heck... was that?" I looked around. I was in... a cave. I got up from the floor, and walked towards a light. Torches.

"Tgags? Tgags! Where are you? And why the crap did you beat me up out there after looking at that dude? Why did I feel lightning? Answer me! Now!" I yelled, half-expecting an answer. I eventually walked to the point where there were hieroglyphics. Were these... about me?

It shows about some guy and an army beating up a large being, and enclosing it into a void. I look at the pictures later shown. The void is opened up, releasing beasts. The old hero is nowhere to be found, and the army is being destroyed and picked off. It shows another person coming up from the light, and fighting these beasts... And it ends there. Odd...

"Hmm... Does this possibly mean--" I say, being cut off.

"We kidnapped you and brought you here because YOU'RE the next hero? Eeyup!" said a voice. I jumped back into the hieroglyphics, and fall over.

"Who's there?" I say, frightened.

A figure appears out of the shadows. "I'm SadSecrets. Nice to meet you. Call me Sekky!" they reply.

"Okay, Sekky, where's tgags? And was that a magic trick or what?" I ask.

"I'm right here," a voice says from behind me. Tgags.

"Explain what the heck is going on. Now," I demand.

"Well, in short, Barathemos, the beast in the hieroglyphics, is back. He's basically the most evil thing, ever. There's a hero, per se, meant to fight and kill Barathemos and his empire. The last one locked him up in the darkness of time, and now he's back. We think you're the hero, here. We kidnapped you and brought you back. Sekky frightened you and you screamed like a little girl, and now, I'm not sure if I should reveal the rest of my family to you," he explains.

My mouth drops open. Sekky is the one to talk.

"So, tgags, can I bring them out now?" she asks.

"Be my guest," he replies.

Suddenly, people start coming in. They look normal. But they aren't.

"Here, first I'll say one thing. We're a species of superhumans. Many refer to us as Things. We all have special powers, so to speak. Here, I'll introduce you to SOME of them," he says.

"I'm, as you know, tgags. I control the elements, which consists of water, fire, lightning, earth, and wind.

That's Sekky. She's got the power of fusing into her surroundings.

That's Singelli. She's got the power of reading hearts and emotions. Also, when she builds up pressure into herself, she can release it in the form of power. Oh, did I mention she teleports?

That's Eirinn over there. He can fly.

That's Razor-987 over there. He, as his name forbids, can turn his body parts into blades.

Eniitan can turn invisible.

And so on. We've got way too much people to talk about," he explains. "You, however, have the power of all powers. All Heroes do. Which is why we need you."

My mouth hangs open. So we go from eating fries to revealing me as a demigod? What sorcery is this?

------------------

Here's chapter 3. Sort of confusing, yes, but I had to do it at some point. I hope you enjoyed this one. This chapter was mainly information and more background about the story. And, if you find resemblance between me and tgags' stories, that's what we were planning on doing. What was it exactly? Not telling until a long time from now.

Mentioned here were the following:

tgags123 :
SadSecrets :
Barathemos :
Singelli :
Eirinn :
Razor-987 :
Eniitan :

Chapter 1:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=66518

Chapter 2:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=66556
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Nice job! I see that the idea is starting to come into play! Really good chapter!
Nice job! I see that the idea is starting to come into play! Really good chapter!
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tgags123 :

Hehe, thanks! Yeah, I've been trying to incorporate your idea in mine, and I'm on high course with it, as you can see here. I'm gonna start Chapter 4, as of now. If you have any last minute ideas, PM me. If not, I'll start.
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Hehe, thanks! Yeah, I've been trying to incorporate your idea in mine, and I'm on high course with it, as you can see here. I'm gonna start Chapter 4, as of now. If you have any last minute ideas, PM me. If not, I'll start.
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goodboy : change the fourth letter in Sekky's name into an "s".  Then proceed to laugh :-D.  

Not a bad job you've done so far!  I can't wait to see how it will continue!
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YAY I SCARED SOMEONE
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SadSecrets : I didn't mean to offend you or anything.  I just wanted to give some people a good laugh.  
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Why does this sound like Percy Jackson and I Am Number Four? But anyway, good story!
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