Greetings! I'm here to talk to you about a game called Alien vs. Predator. This Capcom-arcade beat em' up game takes place possibly after the events of the action-horror movies Alien and Predator. Instead of Brett and Alan. We get 2  soldiers that are Brett and Alan traits. There is also two predators, warrior and hunter. The humans and predators work together to stop the aliens from attacking the city!                                          --
overall-9.9: I love the game play. It does not have a lot of hard-hitting opponents coming after you,making it difficult, nor only 7 enemies at a time not even moving, making it too easy. i has the right amount of enemies you can attack. plus, you have strong melee attacks which is awesome.

Graphics-8: the the graphics are okay, the fact  that that make detail on the alien, predators and other things prevents it having a 5.

Sound-10: My goodness how the music sounds. really upbeat and suspenseful. likes its from the movie alien and predator.

Addictiveness-5: the game is  really fun but  i don't play it every day. that does not mean i do not like it.

Story-6: its very random at first. then it makes sense. (I apologize for lack of words for story.)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               depth-9: i never made it to stage 5. so i do not khow how big it is. but belived it about 10 stages long.

Difficulty-6: alien vs. predator is not too hard, but the bosses are difficult! they attack with powerful strength and ussaly make you lose a couple lives if you not careful.
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This wraps up my review for the arcade game alien vs. predator. Thank you for taking your time to read this review. i hope you have a wonderful day

ultramagnus99 : Overall, for a first time review, I'll say it's pretty good. Although yes there are a lot of flaws, most of these can be fixed.

For example you had a few format errors; you depth category started at the end of a line rather on a new line, this also occurred when separating you introduction paragraph with your overall category, the -- marks aren't needed as a line space does the same job (use two if you want to separate your category run downs with your introduction) and finally I personally find it best to put the overall category last as this is mainly used as a form of conclusion, using this to make a quick summary is a good idea.

Another thing I want to touch on is your grammar in certain places, for example :
      Addictiveness-5: the game is  really fun but  i don't play it every day. that does not mean i do not like it.

You forgot to Capitalize many of the sentences and you should have used commas instead of making a new sentence.
For example I'll rewrite the above copy -
      Addictiveness-5: The game is really fun, I don't play it everyday but that doesn't mean I dislike it.

Can you see the improvement? Remember there is a Spell Check, not only does it fix any spelling mistakes it can also fix grammar mistakes.

The final thing in which I want to bring up is the amount of detail, first off the amount of detail you put in is pretty standard for first time reviewers. However the more detail you put into a review the higher it will be rated, so here is an example of a more detailed review, CLICK HERE. The more detail you put into a review the better. I suggest reading other reviews to see ways of putting detail in before writing your own (remember copy-pasting is not allowed.)

I hope this helps, I've rated this review a 3 for now, Good Job anyway!