Not a bad review at all, I would recommend breaking your review down into categories and then going into detail talking about them to make your review longer and more detailed. I think you should space it out and once you do that and break it down it will be easier and more interesting to read making it organized and easy to read because neatness is everything, you can have a top notch detailed review, but it won't be as good if it is all close together and sloppy, so remember neatness.
Overall not a bad review, I think you have a lot of potential to make good reviews, just remember to space your review out, break it down and really talk about each category, once you start talking about something, like the graphics for example, it becomes easier to say more about it which will boost your word count. So try to be detailed. So your off to a good start, just take my advice into consideration in your next review, you have a lot of potential, remember practice makes perfect, so don't give up and keep reviewing, I look forward to reading your next review, keep up the good work!
Not a bad review at all, I would recommend breaking your review down into categories and then going into detail talking about them to make your review longer and more detailed. I think you should space it out and once you do that and break it down it will be easier and more interesting to read making it organized and easy to read because neatness is everything, you can have a top notch detailed review, but it won't be as good if it is all close together and sloppy, so remember neatness.
Overall not a bad review, I think you have a lot of potential to make good reviews, just remember to space your review out, break it down and really talk about each category, once you start talking about something, like the graphics for example, it becomes easier to say more about it which will boost your word count. So try to be detailed. So your off to a good start, just take my advice into consideration in your next review, you have a lot of potential, remember practice makes perfect, so don't give up and keep reviewing, I look forward to reading your next review, keep up the good work!