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heres part 2 lets find out what happens to cassy now  shall we?

"I was eating my food quietly princess cassy I have something to tell you" said the queen "yes what is it is?" I said " well I am going to get married to king Arthur because I can't work on my own and I love him so dearly" "ok" I replied. Three months came my old parent's was going to be set free from jail. "we are free!" said jessy "finally" said dad. Meanwhile back at the palace "mother can I go to school?" said princess cassy "well soon enough" said the queen. My mother also told me that when I am 18 I am going to have a ball party that means wearing a fancy dress and I just can't wait! Then Tuesday came my mother said that I will be going to school today. And I a going to the school that I had been before. In our school their are different classes like the horrible alien class, British class (the one I was I before,) African class, Mexican class, the one I am going to is the princess class!  and I has to wear a fancy dress and a bit of make up too like (lipstick, blusher and mascara.) just to tell you I had professionals doing it perfect for me so it looked perfected. To tell you the truth when I looked in the mirror I never looked so pretty in my entire life! Meanwhile in the school the headmaster ms flowers was getting everyone early to school because of me.

well of course the other princesses didn't have to but everyone else did.back at the palace I was still not finished because I had another professional doing my hair. They did my hair straight and dyed it as well my hair colour was brown and now it is yellow. They even made it shiny as well! Back at the school half of the students was at school while the other half was on there way. So back at the palace the professionals was not finished the finishing touch was the crown. One person had to fit it my crown while I was sitting. She did it very carefully and the person gave me a mirror and wow I looked like a princess! Back at the school half of the other students came very quickly and Jerry was wondering what was happening. At the palace my maid got my coat for me and I made my way outside where alfie was waiting for me then he opened the carriage door and I went in then I made my way to school back at the school everyone was waiting for me. I arrived at the school and other carriages were there with other princesses inside them. The monster in my carriage came out went to the front  entrance to the school. And it said " good morning all! You will bow down to the princesses and there will be about 14 of them so I hope those legs of yours will not hurt. So the first princess to arrive was princess Nicole and the country she comes from is Greece and may I say what a fascinating dress that is! Right! The next princess is princess Suzanne from Brazil this dress she is wearing is complicated but beautiful. And the next one is princess cassette from Russia! The biggest country of them all!"

I couldn't see what he was doing but one by one  the carriages began to leave and I will soon will be next. Then he came to my one! "don't panic cassy just follow your footsteps" said alfie the "next princess is princess cassy!" everyone gasped including Jerry! I  came in and in my head I kept thinking follow your footsteps and it will all be over. People kept looking at me even my archenemy. He kept saying it until the last one. She looked prettier than me! I can't believe that princess looked prettier than me everyone kept saying how gorgeous. "well that's everyone" said the announcer I said to myself maybe I should go back to my parents. So when school was finished Jerry came running after me as I was about to go in my carriage "princess cassy!" he called out "oh hello Jerry how may I help you?" I said and Jerry said "you look so pretty....." and I said back "well soon I will have to get married who knows maybe it will be you" I waved to him. I was halfway to getting back home I kept thinking to myself should I go back to my parents although they have done a lot for me since the time I was born. Yes I will have my old parent's back but first I need a chat with the queen. Your majesty the princess has arrived" said the announcer.

 I said "mother we need to talk"  "sure ok" said the queen we went somewhere private to talk. "mother.....this may hurt but it is for the best mother I want my old parents back" said princess cassy "but why? I made you into a princess I give you your fav food and much more why won't you be my daughter anymore?!" said the queen and I said" don't worry I will always be your little princess and I will always love you. I have some favour to ask will you except it please?" said princess cassy "ok but a promise me you are still a princess to me and you will always be a royal family. You can visit me anytime" said the queen " ok these are the favours I want to  have. I would like a new house like yours and some furniture beds etc and some new dresses. And I also want to keep my crown. And there is one more thing can you help with the other people I didn't like because they are from outer space and can I still have alfie to drive alfie to drive me everywhere please? That is all" said princess cassy. "ok all of that shall be done" so I went to the police station my old mum and dad were getting ready to leave. But when I was on my way to the cells my old parents were saying " I miss my little girl so much she means so much to me I want her back" said jessy "darling we will have her back soon" said dad. I came to their cells and the two policemen opened the gate and letting my mum and dad out and then closed it.

"cassy!!" said the both of them I started to run to them and they did the same. By the way this was in slow motion I ran closer and closer I go there finally. I kept saying how sorry I was and they did the same "mother father we have a new house and I am still a princess I ordered other things from now on mum you are a queen and dad you are a king is that ok?" "oh that is fine by me" said mum "and me too" said dad
"now lets get out of here" I said. We got out "good afternoon your highness's. I shall take you to your new house" said alfie  and mum said "what is going to happen to the stuff in our house?" "oh you don't need that" said alfie. We hopped in the carriage and settled off to our new house. I go very excited I could not wait! I wonder what it will look like we were half way there I saw a bit of it and it looked better when we came closer and closer. It was so big and it was the colour blue! I like blue my mum and dad likes blue as well but my fav colour is pink!

"welcome to your new home" said alfie  "oh my! It looks astonishing!" said mum "and it looks fab and fantastic!" said dad.  and I said "mother  father I love you both so much since you are king and a queen you will have to wear a crown but first we have a ball" alfie said something he said "everyone come out from the castle its time to meet your new king , queen and the princess!" I was so surprised  we had lots of servants, cookers, dressmakers, butlers, maids and many more! This is the best day of my life! "so shall we go in?"said alfie "yes!" said mum, dad and me. When we went in I did not know what to say my mouth just dropped so did my mum and dad. Well all did not know what to say  "so what do you think?" said alfie "well we don't know what to say" said dad "but I know what we can say a big THANK YOU" said mum "yes thank you" said princess cassy  and alfie said "shall I take you to your bedrooms?" "yes please!"  said princess cassy. First alfie showed us my room " this is your bedroom princess cassy all princesses has to have their room like this, even though it is big but you will have to live with it now we are going to the next room which is of course the king and the queens room" said alfie. So we all went to my mum and dads bedroom "here we are the king and the queens room so I hope that you will feel comfortable and have a good life" said alfie. So this is how it ended we had a ball and of course we had to wear our best clothes but mine was the best. The other queen helped me to be friends with the people from outer space and now I'm 18 years old. I had to choose a husband but it wasn't easy I chose Jerry because the minute I saw him I fell in love. So I got married to him and then we lived happily ever after



"thank you for reading my longest story ever told which was written by eni oyenekan" said cassy

THE END


 
heres part 2 lets find out what happens to cassy now  shall we?

"I was eating my food quietly princess cassy I have something to tell you" said the queen "yes what is it is?" I said " well I am going to get married to king Arthur because I can't work on my own and I love him so dearly" "ok" I replied. Three months came my old parent's was going to be set free from jail. "we are free!" said jessy "finally" said dad. Meanwhile back at the palace "mother can I go to school?" said princess cassy "well soon enough" said the queen. My mother also told me that when I am 18 I am going to have a ball party that means wearing a fancy dress and I just can't wait! Then Tuesday came my mother said that I will be going to school today. And I a going to the school that I had been before. In our school their are different classes like the horrible alien class, British class (the one I was I before,) African class, Mexican class, the one I am going to is the princess class!  and I has to wear a fancy dress and a bit of make up too like (lipstick, blusher and mascara.) just to tell you I had professionals doing it perfect for me so it looked perfected. To tell you the truth when I looked in the mirror I never looked so pretty in my entire life! Meanwhile in the school the headmaster ms flowers was getting everyone early to school because of me.

well of course the other princesses didn't have to but everyone else did.back at the palace I was still not finished because I had another professional doing my hair. They did my hair straight and dyed it as well my hair colour was brown and now it is yellow. They even made it shiny as well! Back at the school half of the students was at school while the other half was on there way. So back at the palace the professionals was not finished the finishing touch was the crown. One person had to fit it my crown while I was sitting. She did it very carefully and the person gave me a mirror and wow I looked like a princess! Back at the school half of the other students came very quickly and Jerry was wondering what was happening. At the palace my maid got my coat for me and I made my way outside where alfie was waiting for me then he opened the carriage door and I went in then I made my way to school back at the school everyone was waiting for me. I arrived at the school and other carriages were there with other princesses inside them. The monster in my carriage came out went to the front  entrance to the school. And it said " good morning all! You will bow down to the princesses and there will be about 14 of them so I hope those legs of yours will not hurt. So the first princess to arrive was princess Nicole and the country she comes from is Greece and may I say what a fascinating dress that is! Right! The next princess is princess Suzanne from Brazil this dress she is wearing is complicated but beautiful. And the next one is princess cassette from Russia! The biggest country of them all!"

I couldn't see what he was doing but one by one  the carriages began to leave and I will soon will be next. Then he came to my one! "don't panic cassy just follow your footsteps" said alfie the "next princess is princess cassy!" everyone gasped including Jerry! I  came in and in my head I kept thinking follow your footsteps and it will all be over. People kept looking at me even my archenemy. He kept saying it until the last one. She looked prettier than me! I can't believe that princess looked prettier than me everyone kept saying how gorgeous. "well that's everyone" said the announcer I said to myself maybe I should go back to my parents. So when school was finished Jerry came running after me as I was about to go in my carriage "princess cassy!" he called out "oh hello Jerry how may I help you?" I said and Jerry said "you look so pretty....." and I said back "well soon I will have to get married who knows maybe it will be you" I waved to him. I was halfway to getting back home I kept thinking to myself should I go back to my parents although they have done a lot for me since the time I was born. Yes I will have my old parent's back but first I need a chat with the queen. Your majesty the princess has arrived" said the announcer.

 I said "mother we need to talk"  "sure ok" said the queen we went somewhere private to talk. "mother.....this may hurt but it is for the best mother I want my old parents back" said princess cassy "but why? I made you into a princess I give you your fav food and much more why won't you be my daughter anymore?!" said the queen and I said" don't worry I will always be your little princess and I will always love you. I have some favour to ask will you except it please?" said princess cassy "ok but a promise me you are still a princess to me and you will always be a royal family. You can visit me anytime" said the queen " ok these are the favours I want to  have. I would like a new house like yours and some furniture beds etc and some new dresses. And I also want to keep my crown. And there is one more thing can you help with the other people I didn't like because they are from outer space and can I still have alfie to drive alfie to drive me everywhere please? That is all" said princess cassy. "ok all of that shall be done" so I went to the police station my old mum and dad were getting ready to leave. But when I was on my way to the cells my old parents were saying " I miss my little girl so much she means so much to me I want her back" said jessy "darling we will have her back soon" said dad. I came to their cells and the two policemen opened the gate and letting my mum and dad out and then closed it.

"cassy!!" said the both of them I started to run to them and they did the same. By the way this was in slow motion I ran closer and closer I go there finally. I kept saying how sorry I was and they did the same "mother father we have a new house and I am still a princess I ordered other things from now on mum you are a queen and dad you are a king is that ok?" "oh that is fine by me" said mum "and me too" said dad
"now lets get out of here" I said. We got out "good afternoon your highness's. I shall take you to your new house" said alfie  and mum said "what is going to happen to the stuff in our house?" "oh you don't need that" said alfie. We hopped in the carriage and settled off to our new house. I go very excited I could not wait! I wonder what it will look like we were half way there I saw a bit of it and it looked better when we came closer and closer. It was so big and it was the colour blue! I like blue my mum and dad likes blue as well but my fav colour is pink!

"welcome to your new home" said alfie  "oh my! It looks astonishing!" said mum "and it looks fab and fantastic!" said dad.  and I said "mother  father I love you both so much since you are king and a queen you will have to wear a crown but first we have a ball" alfie said something he said "everyone come out from the castle its time to meet your new king , queen and the princess!" I was so surprised  we had lots of servants, cookers, dressmakers, butlers, maids and many more! This is the best day of my life! "so shall we go in?"said alfie "yes!" said mum, dad and me. When we went in I did not know what to say my mouth just dropped so did my mum and dad. Well all did not know what to say  "so what do you think?" said alfie "well we don't know what to say" said dad "but I know what we can say a big THANK YOU" said mum "yes thank you" said princess cassy  and alfie said "shall I take you to your bedrooms?" "yes please!"  said princess cassy. First alfie showed us my room " this is your bedroom princess cassy all princesses has to have their room like this, even though it is big but you will have to live with it now we are going to the next room which is of course the king and the queens room" said alfie. So we all went to my mum and dads bedroom "here we are the king and the queens room so I hope that you will feel comfortable and have a good life" said alfie. So this is how it ended we had a ball and of course we had to wear our best clothes but mine was the best. The other queen helped me to be friends with the people from outer space and now I'm 18 years old. I had to choose a husband but it wasn't easy I chose Jerry because the minute I saw him I fell in love. So I got married to him and then we lived happily ever after



"thank you for reading my longest story ever told which was written by eni oyenekan" said cassy

THE END


 
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Very nice story! So is it done? Or are you going to make a part 3? I am just asking this out of my curiosity. Have a nice day Eniitan!
Very nice story! So is it done? Or are you going to make a part 3? I am just asking this out of my curiosity. Have a nice day Eniitan!
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Well, very nice story! I enjoyed reading it! I can imagine it in a way as if I am watching an episode in my head which would really help make reader interested in reading this! 

You have done an awesome job and I can't wait if there is a part 3 coming.
Well, very nice story! I enjoyed reading it! I can imagine it in a way as if I am watching an episode in my head which would really help make reader interested in reading this! 

You have done an awesome job and I can't wait if there is a part 3 coming.
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