This is my first review of a game ever so tell me if I got a 1 out of 20 or a 20 out of 20 and sorry for the lack of grammar and all but I'm not really good at writing so it may look weird.  

   Some people say that it suck having only one starter, I say it's fine with me unlike other people I saw in the comments section of this game I love abra.  I like the new look but the two moms thing needs two be fixed.  When you go to get your first pokemon at the lab the police officer is there even though you have not encountered the girl/guy (I have yet to know what gender the character is) yet, and why did the creator take the fun away from getting the Farfetchd out of the forest it's pretty easy to do and usually won't take but about 10 to 30 seconds.  

   The upsides to this game is that you can get some uncommon pokemon early on like Feraligatr, Slowbro, and Golbat,  Those could easily help you out early on in the game but me personally don't use them because I like to raise mine up and watch them evolve.  The things I hate are listed above and I'm not good at being detailed so sorry about that.  Other thing I disliked are that you rival gets celebi right off the bat and you can catch it that I know of.  I saw in some videos that you can get a Dratini and a Slugma in the  game so I found the location where the two are at and it only took this guy a few seconds to get his but even with the fast forward thing it took me almost an hour to get them both.  

   The reason I give the game an overall six is because  they make pokemon I don't use easy to catch and the one's I do use extremely hard to catch.  Also when you get to Goldenrod City you can fight the gym leader but when you go to the Radio Tower you can only go to the second floor because some security guards are blocking the way up further so you can't beat team rocket and get the squirtbottle to move sudowoodo to continue the game.  I can't think of anything else and I literally have been typing the first thing that comes in mind so this is it and thank you for reading my odd review.   lol

This is a good first timer. All i can say is that next time you should try to organize it into the rating sections. such as 


GRAPHICS: 9/10 (or whatever you rate it)

why you rated it what you rated and tell us about the graphics, what you like or dislike. Are they good for the time the game was made? Stuff like that.

and so on with all the other ratings. 

Ok thank you I will try better with the next review.  

Hey, this is a good job on a first review. I agree with what jaws told you, so I'll not try to elaborate on details. I would like to say though, No need to apologize for detail, detail is great in a review, so pour it on! lol

The game itself is a great game. This hack, however, is pretty meh if you ask me. I'm not sure, it's just very stale, but if a guy decides to improve it, I'm all in for it.

This has nothing to do with the review but I just realized that there is a like and dislike button under every post.  

Yeah this is a decent review here. You had all the basics that a review should have. You have good info and organization, but I definitely think you add more detail to spice it up more. As jaws said, you can break it down into categories and talk abou t the game from there which is easy and the way most people present their reviews.

If you really talk about the game and state your opinion on what you thought made it a good or bad game for each category. Then detail, descriptiveness and length shouldn't be a problem.

Just continue reviewing frequently and I can promise you that you will get better with more practice and your reviews will become longer naturally. Do that and your reviews will be longer and more popular. So keep up the good, hard work and keep reviewing regularly if you want to get better. I look forward to reading your next review! Remember to keep practicing! I promise you that your reviews will be better if you do it!