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03-14-13 02:48 PM
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it's me again for another installment of generalspleen's poem extravaganza!!!! LOL I'm just kidding. But in all seriousness here is another poem of mine. Please share this one all over vizzed and let me know what you all think. Anyways here it is. It's titled the last stand:

I pickup my shield. I unsheathe my sword.
I alone shall take on this demon horde.
I pray to the gods to help me ward;
Off the army. To this I am sworn.

Their coming so fast. I have to be faster.
Because I know deep down what they are truly after.
If they get a hold of it they will call their master,
But that won't happen so that doesn't matter.

I'm battered and bruised but I continue to fight.
The horde is desperate. They attack from the right.
I take my sword and swing with all my might.
The horde is gone from a ray of light.

The war is over. I made my stand.
I put an end to the evil ones heinous plans.
But I can never rest. I have to be a man.
Because tomorrow I will have to do it all over again.

And there you have it. I hope you all enjoy it. Please let me know what you think about it and to share my work with the vizzed community. I would really appreciate it.


Thank you very much and have a blessed day
it's me again for another installment of generalspleen's poem extravaganza!!!! LOL I'm just kidding. But in all seriousness here is another poem of mine. Please share this one all over vizzed and let me know what you all think. Anyways here it is. It's titled the last stand:

I pickup my shield. I unsheathe my sword.
I alone shall take on this demon horde.
I pray to the gods to help me ward;
Off the army. To this I am sworn.

Their coming so fast. I have to be faster.
Because I know deep down what they are truly after.
If they get a hold of it they will call their master,
But that won't happen so that doesn't matter.

I'm battered and bruised but I continue to fight.
The horde is desperate. They attack from the right.
I take my sword and swing with all my might.
The horde is gone from a ray of light.

The war is over. I made my stand.
I put an end to the evil ones heinous plans.
But I can never rest. I have to be a man.
Because tomorrow I will have to do it all over again.

And there you have it. I hope you all enjoy it. Please let me know what you think about it and to share my work with the vizzed community. I would really appreciate it.


Thank you very much and have a blessed day
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Amazing...How is this for your poems? (Layout)
Amazing...How is this for your poems? (Layout)
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Are you familiar with (edited out name)
Are you familiar with (edited out name)
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rcarter2 : Actually yes. Only reason I say that is because Shawn D patient is my name lol. How do you know my name?????
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rcarter2 : Actually yes. Only reason I say that is because Shawn D patient is my name lol. How do you know my name?????
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Generally, when people start posting a lot of poems that can be found on other sites, I make sure that they aren't ripping them off as their own. I ask them a question such as if they are familiar with so and so (the author). You would be surprised how many people rip off other people's work and don't even bother to know the author's name. When I ask if they are familiar with that person, their response is no. Not that I was just assuming you were ripping off things. I just prefer to look into it for the author's sake.
Generally, when people start posting a lot of poems that can be found on other sites, I make sure that they aren't ripping them off as their own. I ask them a question such as if they are familiar with so and so (the author). You would be surprised how many people rip off other people's work and don't even bother to know the author's name. When I ask if they are familiar with that person, their response is no. Not that I was just assuming you were ripping off things. I just prefer to look into it for the author's sake.
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rcarter2 : That makes sense. But couldn't you have at least sent me a private message and asked me? I don't like my name to be posted so the whole world can see. I'm not mad you or anything. Just for the next person could you try private messaging them instead?


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rcarter2 : That makes sense. But couldn't you have at least sent me a private message and asked me? I don't like my name to be posted so the whole world can see. I'm not mad you or anything. Just for the next person could you try private messaging them instead?


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I do apologize. I figured that sine your name was on display for the poems on the other site simply by google'ing a passage, you wouldn't mind. But I get where you are coming from. I edited my post and took the name out. you can do the same on your post.
I do apologize. I figured that sine your name was on display for the poems on the other site simply by google'ing a passage, you wouldn't mind. But I get where you are coming from. I edited my post and took the name out. you can do the same on your post.
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this is really good keep making poems
this is really good keep making poems
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Usually i dislike poems but this was a good one. Great job! Keep making more, i would love to read them.
Usually i dislike poems but this was a good one. Great job! Keep making more, i would love to read them.
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jaws123 :
Eniitan: I will keep doing poems if u both keep reading the. Lol
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Eniitan: I will keep doing poems if u both keep reading the. Lol
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Wow, this is really good! I enjoyed reading it! I also don't like poems but I like this one!
Wow, this is really good! I enjoyed reading it! I also don't like poems but I like this one!
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Very good poem!
It reminds me of a game where you fight of zombies while with survivors and you have to fend of the zombies until you have the supplies to move to places so you can escape.
Very good poem!
Very good poem!
It reminds me of a game where you fight of zombies while with survivors and you have to fend of the zombies until you have the supplies to move to places so you can escape.
Very good poem!
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Barathemos : I'm glad you enjoyed my poem ^^ I have more if you want to check them out. You can find them in my profile under my threads I've made I think. By the way I'm loving your layout ^^ megaman and protoman are awesome!!!!
Gamingmonkey: thanks ^^ It kinda does make me think of a zombie game now that I re-read it lol. By the way your layout is sooo cute ^^ I want one lol
Barathemos : I'm glad you enjoyed my poem ^^ I have more if you want to check them out. You can find them in my profile under my threads I've made I think. By the way I'm loving your layout ^^ megaman and protoman are awesome!!!!
Gamingmonkey: thanks ^^ It kinda does make me think of a zombie game now that I re-read it lol. By the way your layout is sooo cute ^^ I want one lol
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