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New rulers of hyrule
after the great legendary hero defeated the great evil in the land of hyrule everything was peaceful until now where has the hero gone who will take his place
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09-01-12 03:25 PM
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(hint there is no ultimate hero thing its a group of three and the bad people haha)

Marko felt the breeze hit his hair  as he twiddled the wheat in his mouth working at the ranch wasn't a full day job but it was still tiring. Laying down Marko moved his gaze looking at the clouds the peace was quickly interrupted by a loud shriek of a goat running his way. "AHHHHHH" he yelped launching himself strait up and dodge the animal just quick enough he heard snickering  after the animal had ran to the other side of the field there sat Milo and his group sitting on the fence with a sling shot smiling mischievously at Marko.

"Why are you just standing around farm boy isn't there a goat you have to chase" Marko grit his teeth in anger "yeah farm boy" said one of Milo's gang "go chase some goats" another one said. Marko exploded with anger

"Don't you have anything better to do then be a pest to people why aren't you trying to become a swordsman like Colin i remember how much you used to love being the good guy" His eyes calmed as he became quiet waiting for Milo's answer

"Used" was all Milo answered back as he and his gang walked off Marko then turned walking towards the goat walking slowly chanting "it's okay girl i won't hurt you" he laid his hand softly on the goats head and walked it back to the barn. Marko has noticed that things had been different the animals acting up people being strange personality's changing Marko sensed darkness approaching but without the hero what was going to happen.

My form  

Form:
Name: Marko
Teen/Adult: Teen
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power: Swordsman (might have a special power later)
Town: Ordan village
Description: Black hair, Blue and green eyes, tall, bulky bust mostly skinny

Form:
Name:
Teen/Adult:
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power:
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Description:
(hint there is no ultimate hero thing its a group of three and the bad people haha)

Marko felt the breeze hit his hair  as he twiddled the wheat in his mouth working at the ranch wasn't a full day job but it was still tiring. Laying down Marko moved his gaze looking at the clouds the peace was quickly interrupted by a loud shriek of a goat running his way. "AHHHHHH" he yelped launching himself strait up and dodge the animal just quick enough he heard snickering  after the animal had ran to the other side of the field there sat Milo and his group sitting on the fence with a sling shot smiling mischievously at Marko.

"Why are you just standing around farm boy isn't there a goat you have to chase" Marko grit his teeth in anger "yeah farm boy" said one of Milo's gang "go chase some goats" another one said. Marko exploded with anger

"Don't you have anything better to do then be a pest to people why aren't you trying to become a swordsman like Colin i remember how much you used to love being the good guy" His eyes calmed as he became quiet waiting for Milo's answer

"Used" was all Milo answered back as he and his gang walked off Marko then turned walking towards the goat walking slowly chanting "it's okay girl i won't hurt you" he laid his hand softly on the goats head and walked it back to the barn. Marko has noticed that things had been different the animals acting up people being strange personality's changing Marko sensed darkness approaching but without the hero what was going to happen.

My form  

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Name: Marko
Teen/Adult: Teen
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power: Swordsman (might have a special power later)
Town: Ordan village
Description: Black hair, Blue and green eyes, tall, bulky bust mostly skinny

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Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power:
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Alright, I'll give it a try.

Little did Marko know, there was a man watching him through binoculars from afar. He had no identity, no friends or family; just a stranger who wandered through life. If you wanted the description of a shady character, he was it. He wore a cloak that hid his entire body, always having his hood up to shield his face. The reason why he was watching Marko from afar was because of a few reasons. One reason was because he had every intention to hop the fenced off area and go rummaging for things to steal. He knew he had to wait until night though, because he feared Marko's abilities. Another reason why was because he to could feel the presence of darkness approaching. He knew that if he was to continue his lifestyle, he had to find someone to have his back, as much as he hated the idea. He chose Marko because he was aware of the inner power that Marko possessed. You see, the shady character had the ability to read people. He knew Marko was capable of dominating Milo if he felt like it, but he also knew that Marko had a good heart; a trait that the shady character could not relate to. He was not evil though; he just worried about himself mainly.

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Name: Marko
Teen/Adult: Teen
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power: Swordsman (might have a special power later)
Town: Ordan village
Description: Black hair, Blue and green eyes, tall, bulky bust mostly skinny


Form:
Name: (find out later)
Teen/Adult: Adult
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power: The ability to read people's abilities and power level / Master Thief (will develop telekinesis later)
Town: Unknown
Description: Dark green/black cloak, black gloves, thin, short
Alright, I'll give it a try.

Little did Marko know, there was a man watching him through binoculars from afar. He had no identity, no friends or family; just a stranger who wandered through life. If you wanted the description of a shady character, he was it. He wore a cloak that hid his entire body, always having his hood up to shield his face. The reason why he was watching Marko from afar was because of a few reasons. One reason was because he had every intention to hop the fenced off area and go rummaging for things to steal. He knew he had to wait until night though, because he feared Marko's abilities. Another reason why was because he to could feel the presence of darkness approaching. He knew that if he was to continue his lifestyle, he had to find someone to have his back, as much as he hated the idea. He chose Marko because he was aware of the inner power that Marko possessed. You see, the shady character had the ability to read people. He knew Marko was capable of dominating Milo if he felt like it, but he also knew that Marko had a good heart; a trait that the shady character could not relate to. He was not evil though; he just worried about himself mainly.

Form:
Name: Marko
Teen/Adult: Teen
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power: Swordsman (might have a special power later)
Town: Ordan village
Description: Black hair, Blue and green eyes, tall, bulky bust mostly skinny


Form:
Name: (find out later)
Teen/Adult: Adult
Swordsman/Rouge/Secret power: The ability to read people's abilities and power level / Master Thief (will develop telekinesis later)
Town: Unknown
Description: Dark green/black cloak, black gloves, thin, short
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09-03-12 12:59 AM
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Marko felt the hairs on the back of his neck tingle and his back twitched quickly turning he observed the grounds around him. Not seeing anything he decided to turn around and sit back down once again twiddling the wheat in his mouth and laying down slowly falling asleep in the peaceful field.

In his dream he was in a black room voices echoed around him he turned to every corner alarmed and making sure no one was behind him. Marko heard battle cries and the sounds of monsters wailing their last cry. Next all he could hear was the peaceful sound of a woman humming a lullaby suddenly she appeared from the darkness she was beautiful dressed like someone of royalty, As her humming came to a close she disappeared and once again the sounds of battle could be heard but this time he felt a tingling in his arms  as he heard the cry of the one who had fought all of the battles it sent a chill down Marko's back as the breathes became faster, like choking and the suddenly stopped a heart beat could be heard in the dream loudly as a glowing blade fell from the sky almost slowly with the beat of the heart a shield coming down with it. The sword and shield smashed to the ground in a clash as the glowing blade with a purple hilt shattered to pieces. Marko's heart became empty as only the handle remained sitting next to the shield. Stepping closer he saw three triangle sitting on the ground amazed by there beauty he reached his hand out to touch one it felt good for the first second then suddenly burned he began to scream in pain as he tried to drop the triangle piece but it inserted itself into his hand.

Waking up with a jolt Marko could feel himself in a cold sweat his hand throbbing on his side he quickly looked at it but nothing was on it. Confused he thought to himself 'it felt so real there's no way that was any normal dream but this was defiantly something he would keep to himself he got up in the cold night still in the field  and thought Tell no one' he grabbed his sac and began to walk home  through the now dark of Ordon.
Marko felt the hairs on the back of his neck tingle and his back twitched quickly turning he observed the grounds around him. Not seeing anything he decided to turn around and sit back down once again twiddling the wheat in his mouth and laying down slowly falling asleep in the peaceful field.

In his dream he was in a black room voices echoed around him he turned to every corner alarmed and making sure no one was behind him. Marko heard battle cries and the sounds of monsters wailing their last cry. Next all he could hear was the peaceful sound of a woman humming a lullaby suddenly she appeared from the darkness she was beautiful dressed like someone of royalty, As her humming came to a close she disappeared and once again the sounds of battle could be heard but this time he felt a tingling in his arms  as he heard the cry of the one who had fought all of the battles it sent a chill down Marko's back as the breathes became faster, like choking and the suddenly stopped a heart beat could be heard in the dream loudly as a glowing blade fell from the sky almost slowly with the beat of the heart a shield coming down with it. The sword and shield smashed to the ground in a clash as the glowing blade with a purple hilt shattered to pieces. Marko's heart became empty as only the handle remained sitting next to the shield. Stepping closer he saw three triangle sitting on the ground amazed by there beauty he reached his hand out to touch one it felt good for the first second then suddenly burned he began to scream in pain as he tried to drop the triangle piece but it inserted itself into his hand.

Waking up with a jolt Marko could feel himself in a cold sweat his hand throbbing on his side he quickly looked at it but nothing was on it. Confused he thought to himself 'it felt so real there's no way that was any normal dream but this was defiantly something he would keep to himself he got up in the cold night still in the field  and thought Tell no one' he grabbed his sac and began to walk home  through the now dark of Ordon.
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Slowly creeping from afar, the shady man follow Marko as he walked. He knew what Marko had just dreamed. He knew this, because he had the same dream the previous night. There was only one difference in what the shady man had seen. The triangles had imprinted themselves on to his hand. This puzzled the man greatly. How can there be two heroes? Perhaps the two men were linked in some way. He decided right there and then, that if he got caught robbing Marko's house, he would recite the dream and tell Marko that he was looking for him.

As Marko entered his home, the shady man parked himself in some bushes near by. He sat and waited until there was total darkness and total silence before he would begin his robbery. One thing that the shady man did not account for was the fact that the bushes he was hiding in were full of bugs. Occasionally swatting at is neck the man watched and waited. Having a cloak on limited his feeling tremendously, so he did not notice that his cloak was crawling with bugs by now. Suddenly, all at once, an incredible burning sensation came over the man's body and he could do nothing more than scream at the top of his lungs and jump out of the bushes as fast as he could.

Of course, this completely ruined his plans to rob the home of Marko, as he was confronted by a man standing over him with a sword at his throat. The shady man threw off his cloak as fast as possible and began rolling on the ground rubbing his body all over while hollering the words "Bugs! Bugs! They're all over me! They're biting me everywhere." "Stop moving", replied the man holding the sword. Suddenly, the shady man could not move. He was lying flat on his back and appeared to be temporarily paralyzed. The man with the sword sprinkled some dust over the shady man that he had grabbed from a satchel he had tied around his neck.

After a moment of being paralyzed in fear and reality, the shady man's body began to feel warm and he also could no longer feel any bugs walking all over him and biting him. He relaxed for a moment and then he heard "Who are you and what are you doing here?" Unsure of how to respond, the shady man replied by saying "My name is Cyd. I am looking for a man named Marko." The sword wielding man paused for a moment and then replied by asking "How do you know Marko and what do you want from him?" "I can not tell you that. You would not understand. I must speak with Marko. It is very important." Suddenly, another person emerged from the home and picked the man up, tied his hands behind his back and put a sac over his head. "Walk." Cyd heard from a very deep and older sounding voice.

Cyd was in and out of consciousness for the next hour or two, although it seemed like an eternity to him. His entire body was on fire, but he could feel that his arms and legs were tied to something, so he could not move very far. He felt somebody touch his body and a sudden burst of immense pain came over him. "AHHHH! Don't touch me! That hurts a lot!", Cyd screamed as he opened his eyes for the first time since having a sac put over his head. "It should hurt. You got stung by a large colony of flings. On top of that, you also had a number of crawlers nesting in your cloak. The essence of the flings must have forced the crawlers to hatch early, which is why they were so aggressive." The deep voice of the man speaking to him was the same as the one who told him to walk. He caught his first glimpse of the mysterious voice as the sac was removed from his head. He could see that the voice belonged to an old bearded man who was incredibly tall and wearing a robe similar to that of his own. "Who are you and what do you want from me?" said Cyd. "I should be asking you that question", replied another voice emerging from the darkness. It was the same voice of the sword wielding man. As he stepped into the light, Cyd could see that the man was Marko. "I know you followed me home, and that you were hiding in the bushes near my house. Why do you think I got to you so quickly? I threw a rock at the fling hive above your head. I knew you couldn't keep hidden when you were getting swarmed.

"What?! You bestowed this pain on me? Why would you do that? Untie me right now!" Cyd yelled. "Not until we get some answers" replied the older man, calmly. "Besides, we saved your life. The crawlers living in your cloak would have eaten you alive while you slept had we not awoken them prematurely and dusted them. The dust that Marko sprinkled on you was a combination of crawler repellent and sleeping dust. We salted your body while you passed out to help heal and reduce your bites. Your welcome. Now, why have you come to seek Marko?"

Cyd began explaining the dream, and how he saw Marko in the background, and how he remembers the scar Marko had on his hand. "I know Marko had the exact same dream as me. Except I was the one who grabbed the triangles, not Marko. He was just in the background, watching me as I picked it up. I also had another dream, which told me to come to this town and seek a man named Marko. I knew who he was because the dreams I had were so vivid, so real. Marko's face is burned into my memory. Also, there was a stone I was holding. It also had the same marks as the triangle on it. I remember that Marko was overwhelmed when he picked the stone up and dropped it immediately. But when I picked it up, I was able to control to power it gave me." The old man frowned as he heard these words and said "This greatly concerns me."
Slowly creeping from afar, the shady man follow Marko as he walked. He knew what Marko had just dreamed. He knew this, because he had the same dream the previous night. There was only one difference in what the shady man had seen. The triangles had imprinted themselves on to his hand. This puzzled the man greatly. How can there be two heroes? Perhaps the two men were linked in some way. He decided right there and then, that if he got caught robbing Marko's house, he would recite the dream and tell Marko that he was looking for him.

As Marko entered his home, the shady man parked himself in some bushes near by. He sat and waited until there was total darkness and total silence before he would begin his robbery. One thing that the shady man did not account for was the fact that the bushes he was hiding in were full of bugs. Occasionally swatting at is neck the man watched and waited. Having a cloak on limited his feeling tremendously, so he did not notice that his cloak was crawling with bugs by now. Suddenly, all at once, an incredible burning sensation came over the man's body and he could do nothing more than scream at the top of his lungs and jump out of the bushes as fast as he could.

Of course, this completely ruined his plans to rob the home of Marko, as he was confronted by a man standing over him with a sword at his throat. The shady man threw off his cloak as fast as possible and began rolling on the ground rubbing his body all over while hollering the words "Bugs! Bugs! They're all over me! They're biting me everywhere." "Stop moving", replied the man holding the sword. Suddenly, the shady man could not move. He was lying flat on his back and appeared to be temporarily paralyzed. The man with the sword sprinkled some dust over the shady man that he had grabbed from a satchel he had tied around his neck.

After a moment of being paralyzed in fear and reality, the shady man's body began to feel warm and he also could no longer feel any bugs walking all over him and biting him. He relaxed for a moment and then he heard "Who are you and what are you doing here?" Unsure of how to respond, the shady man replied by saying "My name is Cyd. I am looking for a man named Marko." The sword wielding man paused for a moment and then replied by asking "How do you know Marko and what do you want from him?" "I can not tell you that. You would not understand. I must speak with Marko. It is very important." Suddenly, another person emerged from the home and picked the man up, tied his hands behind his back and put a sac over his head. "Walk." Cyd heard from a very deep and older sounding voice.

Cyd was in and out of consciousness for the next hour or two, although it seemed like an eternity to him. His entire body was on fire, but he could feel that his arms and legs were tied to something, so he could not move very far. He felt somebody touch his body and a sudden burst of immense pain came over him. "AHHHH! Don't touch me! That hurts a lot!", Cyd screamed as he opened his eyes for the first time since having a sac put over his head. "It should hurt. You got stung by a large colony of flings. On top of that, you also had a number of crawlers nesting in your cloak. The essence of the flings must have forced the crawlers to hatch early, which is why they were so aggressive." The deep voice of the man speaking to him was the same as the one who told him to walk. He caught his first glimpse of the mysterious voice as the sac was removed from his head. He could see that the voice belonged to an old bearded man who was incredibly tall and wearing a robe similar to that of his own. "Who are you and what do you want from me?" said Cyd. "I should be asking you that question", replied another voice emerging from the darkness. It was the same voice of the sword wielding man. As he stepped into the light, Cyd could see that the man was Marko. "I know you followed me home, and that you were hiding in the bushes near my house. Why do you think I got to you so quickly? I threw a rock at the fling hive above your head. I knew you couldn't keep hidden when you were getting swarmed.

"What?! You bestowed this pain on me? Why would you do that? Untie me right now!" Cyd yelled. "Not until we get some answers" replied the older man, calmly. "Besides, we saved your life. The crawlers living in your cloak would have eaten you alive while you slept had we not awoken them prematurely and dusted them. The dust that Marko sprinkled on you was a combination of crawler repellent and sleeping dust. We salted your body while you passed out to help heal and reduce your bites. Your welcome. Now, why have you come to seek Marko?"

Cyd began explaining the dream, and how he saw Marko in the background, and how he remembers the scar Marko had on his hand. "I know Marko had the exact same dream as me. Except I was the one who grabbed the triangles, not Marko. He was just in the background, watching me as I picked it up. I also had another dream, which told me to come to this town and seek a man named Marko. I knew who he was because the dreams I had were so vivid, so real. Marko's face is burned into my memory. Also, there was a stone I was holding. It also had the same marks as the triangle on it. I remember that Marko was overwhelmed when he picked the stone up and dropped it immediately. But when I picked it up, I was able to control to power it gave me." The old man frowned as he heard these words and said "This greatly concerns me."
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