Pokémon Latios-

Ok,this review is gonna be accurate. This game is a awesome rom hack with only 1 starter,namely Raichu. It is the evolved form of Pikachu,furthermore,Pikachu is the evolved form of Pichu,the 1st stage of the Chu Evolution Line (or as I call it.) this review or thread would be my 18th post I have did for games in the Retro Game Room. I have not did any in the Video Game room yet. This game has 16 gyms due to the 2 regions (Johto and Kanto. I know that in the first review I did for this game, it said Jot and Kan. That was because I was a Newbie back then. It forced me to Spell Check so this time it's accurate. I am probably not going to do Spell Check on this thread/review because of the Pokemon names (which are not real words). Do you guys think I'm going good so far? I'm getting better at reviews.(Just my opinion but it's up to you guys ) Just saying...Ok,now let's move on to the basics-16 gyms,Victory Road (as in all Pokemon games) I do not think Unknown Dungeon is available in this game. But,I think you can do a place where you catch Mewtwo called Cerulean Cave or something like that. I have been having trouble typing on this keyboard because it's old and stuff. Forget about that though. There is a new cave above Oilvine City. What surprised me about it-After you get mystic wing,go to the cave surf up and it's a level 40 Latios! I geuss that's why they called this game "Pokemon Latios". I was all like "WHAT THE?!?!". Lol. Now I should take a break before typing so much makes me EXPLODE! 5 minutes later-Ok,we're back up! 300 words of this review! Longest review I did. I probably deserve at least a "good review". Huh? I'm not gonna do the main stuff in this edit because I need to go to the store because I have a 8th birthday party TOMORROW! Try to stay on vizzed tommorow and either post on my profile or send me a Private Message. So,as I was saying,this is the edited review of Pokemon Latios.  I might have repeated this 100,000,000 times but this edited version of this review so I forget what I say. 16 Pokemon gyms,VERY FAST speed up which enabled me to beat the Elite Four very Quickly with Latios but the bad thing is your time. If you use the Speed Up feature,time goes by faster in the game. I use the speed up feature but I was suprised by the time I had. 20:56. When I beat Kanto,I had 40:37. Ok so this is the 4th time I've edited because I keep thinking of stuff to say. So now I have 67 or 68 posts. Some for crazy house, some for reviews such as this one. Some threads, replies for stuff,etc. So I have improved with posts a good percentage. I'm pretty sure this is one of the biggest posts on vizzed. I'm gonna have to ask Jordanv78 and tRIUNE if it is. If so, I geuss I worked on this review for 2 months for a reason. If not, I'm mad. Really mad. So school is back in and today's Friday so this weekend I'm going to focus on posting. I might just throw in another review for a different review in this one just to make it longer like a 2 in 1! That will be nice, huh? Here we go!



Pokemon SoulSilver (I know this game is not on vizzed but meh.)

Let's begin!

Pokemon SoulSilver is a pretty cool game that I'm working on on my Nintendo DS so I decided to make a review for it on here! It has 2 regions like Latios. I geuss Latios is a hack of both SoulSilver and HeartGold, Silver, Gold, Yellow too probably! The game is OK, I play it regularly, maybe for something to do if I get bored and sweaty from pogo sticks. 16 gyms again that make you WORK HARD! Very hard work indeed. Red was a pain like always. That Venusaur kept using super effective moves against my Feraligatr. And it was level 99! Pikachu was hard too. Volt Tackle?! Come on. No fair! One day I was lucky. I beat Red BARELY with my last pokemon-Ampharos level 54 at 2 HP!!! I was not even looking-I was in a daze watching SpongeBob SquarePants! LOL I look at the screen and Charizard's health was running down at 0.1 MPH. So close it died. OMG I was SO happy I began jumping on my bed like crazy! I just about broke it and I'm a lightweight. I'm only 58 lbs. At age 8 currently. I am the smartest kid in my whole 3rd grade and even I'm having trouble with stuff. Math is crazy on the 8th day of school.Game progress I made today- Beat normal gym, ghost gym, all the gyms today, made it to Elite Four, beat E4, beat Lance, now I'm working on Kanto stuff now (well not right now, I am currently looking for the legendary dogs.) Then I'll focus on Kanto. So great progress, beat Johto in 16 hours and 53 minutes. If you wanna know Lance's Pokemon here they are- Gyarados, Dragonite, Dragonite, another Dragonite, Aerodactyl, Charizard! They're level's are: Gyarados: 46 Dragonite: 49 Dragonite:50 Dragonite: 49 Aerodactyl: 48 Charizard:48. Forget the rest of the stuff I said that is not about the game. So I beat the game now. Now my goal is doing reviews for games on vizzed.

cade9 : Hey you need to make this more game, less social life. I have seen some of your other reviews and they are very spammy. Especially the one with 7 words.

DittoDude44 : That's your first account Cade!
And you're telling yourself that how to type lol?

cade9 :   This is a review
with remarkable spelling and grammar for an eight year old. You didn't use the checker at all. I can tell. The few spelling and grammatical errors that are here, are ones that adults all over the Internet make everyday. You can't be blamed. You may have learned to spell and form sentences from the computer. When I was your age, computers weren't in widespread use. I learned the old fashioned way. I listened to Mom and Pop.

The thing that I find most interesting about your review is that it's mostly about you, your life, your accomplishments and struggles in the game. This would be wonderful if you were writing a "web log" (or colloquially a "blog") in which you logged daily info about your life around gaming and additionally every Pokémon obtained, exactly how you did it, how you beat tough trainers and what moves you used. I digress. Usually when people read a review, they are expecting information about how the game is for everyone, so they can make a judgment on how they think it will be for them.

You might want to consider typing up a draft on your word processor during the first few days of play. These observations of yours will seem fresher to your audience. If you keep the observations about the game itself and not about you and what you're doing, the review will be set apart from others for being relevant.

I decided to play the game regardless of this review because I did not see any new information. Good job with the typing. I know it's tough.

P3

P.S. Try out a spelling and grammar checker once in a while. They usually let you ignore their suggestions if you know they are wrong. You'll be a better and more discerning speller and speaker if you check your words carefully after typing.

six solid 10's and one 7 man you have got to love the game to give it at least more than three 10's seems like a great review and good grammar.

Postman3 : I think bumping is against the rules, am I wrong? I am not sure, I have not been on vizzed lately.

Pokemon's Silver hack right here isn't necessarily the best one around in variety mark, but I'll say that game is pretty cool. Unique in its own special way. I can play it anytime.

Nicely done, very nicely done.
Keep it up.