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Breaking Point: Future plot Help

 

05-22-12 05:18 PM
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As most of you should know, I am writing a story called Breaking Point, chronicling the rise and eventual victory of a mutant Yoshi as he leads everyone's favorite Koopa King into the victory he so truly desires. What most of you don't know (except for one lucky individual who I spoiled this too) is I will be bringing back some of the more memorable (to me anyway) Mario villains.

Thats right, later on Jo, my anti-hero is going to track down and recruit various villains to have their revenge against Mario. I am so freaking glad that they have dragons in the Mario realm. Thats right Hooktail and her brother Gloomtail will make an appearance. They also have a larger role then the others listed below.

Also included/planned are:

Fawful(If you didn't enjoy him every scene he was in, then you are dead emotionally. This guy will be hard to write for, so if I decide to use him, PLEASE BE GENTLE!!!!)

Tubba Blubba (I loved that chapter more then I should have. In my mind he deserves a second chance. Another villain never truly killed, just humiliated)

Jr. Troopa (He was annoying but he is the one of the villains Mario never truly "killed")

Popple (Was it me or did this guy steal the show? I loved Popple and his sidekick "Rookie")

Doopliss (I loved the fight music for him, so epic and dramatic, he deserves a chance for glory. Plus his skills will be needed desperately.

I feel like there should be more, I will think of more as soon as I post this. If you had a favorite villain that either gave you problems or you really liked and I played the game he or she (?) appeared in, then I will consider adding it to the story. These were the ones at the top of my head at the time of writing this. I would like to hear your thoughts as to how the story is progressing.

This story will not end the way the games do. If you are a die hard Mario fan and do not want to see the villains win for once, then to avoid damage to your childhood, I suggest staying away from this story. I read a Bowser story chronicling his life as a child and how he came to be the "monster" he is today, and loved it. I am now a Bowser fan because of that story. Do not worry, Mario and Co will not be killed off. That is all I can say though, I hope you understand.
As most of you should know, I am writing a story called Breaking Point, chronicling the rise and eventual victory of a mutant Yoshi as he leads everyone's favorite Koopa King into the victory he so truly desires. What most of you don't know (except for one lucky individual who I spoiled this too) is I will be bringing back some of the more memorable (to me anyway) Mario villains.

Thats right, later on Jo, my anti-hero is going to track down and recruit various villains to have their revenge against Mario. I am so freaking glad that they have dragons in the Mario realm. Thats right Hooktail and her brother Gloomtail will make an appearance. They also have a larger role then the others listed below.

Also included/planned are:

Fawful(If you didn't enjoy him every scene he was in, then you are dead emotionally. This guy will be hard to write for, so if I decide to use him, PLEASE BE GENTLE!!!!)

Tubba Blubba (I loved that chapter more then I should have. In my mind he deserves a second chance. Another villain never truly killed, just humiliated)

Jr. Troopa (He was annoying but he is the one of the villains Mario never truly "killed")

Popple (Was it me or did this guy steal the show? I loved Popple and his sidekick "Rookie")

Doopliss (I loved the fight music for him, so epic and dramatic, he deserves a chance for glory. Plus his skills will be needed desperately.

I feel like there should be more, I will think of more as soon as I post this. If you had a favorite villain that either gave you problems or you really liked and I played the game he or she (?) appeared in, then I will consider adding it to the story. These were the ones at the top of my head at the time of writing this. I would like to hear your thoughts as to how the story is progressing.

This story will not end the way the games do. If you are a die hard Mario fan and do not want to see the villains win for once, then to avoid damage to your childhood, I suggest staying away from this story. I read a Bowser story chronicling his life as a child and how he came to be the "monster" he is today, and loved it. I am now a Bowser fan because of that story. Do not worry, Mario and Co will not be killed off. That is all I can say though, I hope you understand.
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