lolguy162 : Hmm... This should be enjoyable so long as you enjoy making it- yeah?
So when you're ready : Continue.

I agree with On3On. As long as you want to post, keep on posting.

But I do have some criticism for your first chapter. First, you should always close things that characters are saying in quotation marks. It just makes it a lot easier to read. And second, there's nothing to really draw the reader in. You haven't set up the story. You haven't given a background for any of the characters. The dialogue is really short, and doesn't really explain anything. It just doesn't feel like there's anything to read. The way the first chapter looks now, someone could skip it entirely without missing anything important.

Anyway, those are just a few of the thoughts I had when I read this. I think if you add a little more to what you've written, it could be something really interesting. But right now, the only thing that's interested me is the fact that I liked both Mario and Terraria.

soxfan849 : THis is ment as a intro to the to seprate universes

Even still, I don't feel like much was introduced to me. If I didn't know what Mario or Terraria were, then I'd be completely lost. And even still, I only really have a very general idea of what you want these universes to be like. I'm not trying to be really critical of what you write. I'm just trying to give you things that you could think about next time to make it longer and more interesting.