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01-02-12 10:47 PM
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I am here.

You are not.

We are one.

But far apart.


One day the lines will come together
One day our thoughts will be near.

One day I will hold you close
One day will be forever.


With every second that goes by
I feel us getting closer
But every second that goes past
I feel us falling apart.


One day the lines will fade away
One day they will be gone

One day the memories will be all
One day will be eternity


I am here.

You are not.

We are one.

But far apart.
I am here.

You are not.

We are one.

But far apart.


One day the lines will come together
One day our thoughts will be near.

One day I will hold you close
One day will be forever.


With every second that goes by
I feel us getting closer
But every second that goes past
I feel us falling apart.


One day the lines will fade away
One day they will be gone

One day the memories will be all
One day will be eternity


I am here.

You are not.

We are one.

But far apart.
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6-Time VCS Winner

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One Love.
One Dream.


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01-02-12 10:50 PM
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Wow... that's pretty deep.

But I guess it's hard to be far apart when you're just seconds away on Facebook or Vizzed, right? But I suppose it's not the same as being together in real life.
Wow... that's pretty deep.

But I guess it's hard to be far apart when you're just seconds away on Facebook or Vizzed, right? But I suppose it's not the same as being together in real life.
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01-12-12 11:52 AM
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Truly enjoyed this piece. It's simple but there is a sense of deep pain and longing. It's touched my heart, as I recite the words again in my mental bank: I can honestly say, that I know how the narrator feels.

I look forwards to seeing more of your work - feel free to check out my stuff too, if you want :]

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Truly enjoyed this piece. It's simple but there is a sense of deep pain and longing. It's touched my heart, as I recite the words again in my mental bank: I can honestly say, that I know how the narrator feels.

I look forwards to seeing more of your work - feel free to check out my stuff too, if you want :]

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01-12-12 05:17 PM
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That's a good poem, pretty deep into feelings if I say so myself. Being apart sucks, but you are always together in heart.
That's a good poem, pretty deep into feelings if I say so myself. Being apart sucks, but you are always together in heart.
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