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06-07-11 01:06 AM
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Alright I am making a new game and right now it is just a recreation of harvest moon- however, I was hoping for a better rpg so I need a storyline. I am actually looking for several story lines as I plan on allowing the character to participate in all or no story lines.

There are a few limits-
No God, angel, Satan,demon references
Nothing Sexual Please (Romances are fine and somewhat encouraged just dont give me all romance we do need some action-adventure)

Thank you so much
I look forward to reading your storylines
Alright I am making a new game and right now it is just a recreation of harvest moon- however, I was hoping for a better rpg so I need a storyline. I am actually looking for several story lines as I plan on allowing the character to participate in all or no story lines.

There are a few limits-
No God, angel, Satan,demon references
Nothing Sexual Please (Romances are fine and somewhat encouraged just dont give me all romance we do need some action-adventure)

Thank you so much
I look forward to reading your storylines
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06-07-11 01:10 AM
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how about one where the hero has to answer riddles which are found in different places which lead to a treasure which he use to save an orphanage
how about one where the hero has to answer riddles which are found in different places which lead to a treasure which he use to save an orphanage
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06-08-11 06:45 PM
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Here's a brief one I could throw in so you could have some kind of idea. 

A male went on a travel, journeying various lands, fought massive beasts, and he was known by nobody. One day, he got ambushed by a ferocious black dragon, and got knocked out. He woke up, in a strange land. He tried to think, but he couldn't even remember himself, and why he was here, and even why he was knocked out! He got up, and fell back down when he saw a young girl watching him in curiosity. 
He waved at her tenatively, and she approached him. 

"Are you okay?"
The guy replied. "I think so- Wait." He mentally checked his body, and nothing seemed wrong except for his head, which was pounding in pain. "Yeah, my head's screwed up."
"I saw you with that dragon! You were great!"

He stalled. What dragon? Why was he great? He looked at her, and asked in confusion. "What?" 
She rolled her eyes, and pointed at the ratty sword. "You scared off the dragon! How did you do that?"

I don't remember...

(And so on. )
Here's a brief one I could throw in so you could have some kind of idea. 

A male went on a travel, journeying various lands, fought massive beasts, and he was known by nobody. One day, he got ambushed by a ferocious black dragon, and got knocked out. He woke up, in a strange land. He tried to think, but he couldn't even remember himself, and why he was here, and even why he was knocked out! He got up, and fell back down when he saw a young girl watching him in curiosity. 
He waved at her tenatively, and she approached him. 

"Are you okay?"
The guy replied. "I think so- Wait." He mentally checked his body, and nothing seemed wrong except for his head, which was pounding in pain. "Yeah, my head's screwed up."
"I saw you with that dragon! You were great!"

He stalled. What dragon? Why was he great? He looked at her, and asked in confusion. "What?" 
She rolled her eyes, and pointed at the ratty sword. "You scared off the dragon! How did you do that?"

I don't remember...

(And so on. )
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06-11-11 04:49 AM
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Snowdeath asked me to post here so she could make another post.  So I did.  As you can see.
Snowdeath asked me to post here so she could make another post.  So I did.  As you can see.
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-Cracks knuckles- Here we go. I'm going to use a different interface. It's not going to be something like a story, I'm going to state character bio's.
Boy Character
Personalities: Flat, since this is the main character.
2nd option of personalities: Stubborn, easily angered, has a sense of justice and is usually the vengeful type.
Looks: Up to you.
Past story: He was born in [TOWN NAME], and he still lives in this rural town. He is a farmer, but also a novice swordsman in training. He has a sister, who were murdered recently. He was the one who figured out that she was dead, by checking in her room, and finding it was a bloodbath- Oddly enough, there were no corpse. The town is still shaken by it, because his sister is well known for her green thumb and her friendliness among the community. The boy is maybe 17 or 18. He has a mother, but he lost his father in a war between the nations of [NAME] and [NAME]. (If you need more, let me know.)
Blood: He is bloodrelated to the royal kingdom of the [COUNTRY NAME], but he never knew about that. ( Mother is the royal, father is the common. )
---------------------------
Girl Character
Personalities: Sassy, friendly, out-going, but a little dumb.
Looks: Of course, up to you.
Past Story: Grew up in the same town with the Boy Character. Same age. She is a shopkeeper's daughter, so she gets to see the Boy Character daily for the farmed food. (I can't think of anything else regarding to her 'past'.)
Blood: She is bloodrelated to the royal kingdom of a DIFFERENT county. Princess.
---------------------------
The "VILLAIN":
*drumroll*
The Sister! (Well, I didn't want it to be a common game.)
Personalities: Her true personality is corrupted, but she is still good.
Looks: UP TO YOU!
Reason she's the villain: She is threatened for her life and her entire town's life. Wait, what? Yep. There were a bloodbath (referred in Boy Character's past), because The (TRUE VILLAIN) chose her as his servant, but she tried to fight off, so the bad guy attacked and brought her to a near coma stage. Meanwhile, she has been tortured (NOT SHOWN, OF COURSE), and that made her become different, more harsh, and more evil because of the unfairness she went through. She is forced to be the bad guy's servant to save everyone.
Blood: She is directly related to Boy Character's father, the common side. She has no royal in her.
----------------------------
The Bad Guy
Personality: UNKNOWN
Age: UNKNOWN
He is the final boss of the game. He is a pure dragon, cursed by an ancient Mage to be a human. He does still have his dragon-like abilities, for example, flying, breathing flames, skin of steel, etc. The reason he's the bad guy is because he's trying to return to his true dragon form, and the only way to do that is to sacrifice each country's princesses. (THUS THE REASON THE GIRL CHARACTER GETS KIDNAPPED.)
-----------------------------
The reason the Boy Character can't just waltz up to the bad guy and kill him already is because his location is unknown, and the guy has to go through several dungeons to get a key leading to each level of the tower the bad guy will be in. This way, you have a deep storyline while having the quality of the playing everyone likes to play.
(PS- I'm posting this in your thread, to make that an official application.)
Please let me know if there's anything you'd like to be fixed, or removed.
Thanks!

*EDIT* I've decided to implent  an actual story because I'm bored.

It was a hot sunny day, even if it's only spring. It was roughly around 9 AM in the morning. 

Crash! Thunk. Thunk!

It was the sound of a farmer's hoe, digging below the hard, but yet still full of moisture soil. He wiped off his sweat, and rested a bit, looking around. He nodded, as that he was almost done with conditioning his field. He walked off to check his other parts of the field, to check out the already-ripening crops. He suddenly heard footsteps, and turned his head to the entrance of the farm, and saw a lush of blonde hair. 

"Hey, Kalya! Ready for your freshest crop?" The guy shouted at her in a amused tone.
The girl called Kalya turned around at the direction of the voice, and chuckled softly. "As ready as ever, Tydin!"
"How are you?"
The guy, named Tydin, asked while going after to his storehouse to collect Kalya's crops for her mother's townstore.
Kalya grinned at him, clearly affectionate, and shrugged. "Oh, I'm just better now, after seeing you."
"Heh, well, that's good to hear! Hey, wait a second."
Tydin went into the storehouse, and noises could be heard from him, stocking up on the crops in the boxes. He returned outside, lugging 10 crates full of fresh crop. "Hey, they're pretty heavy, do you want me to come with you?"
Kalya considered this for a moment, and shrugged once again. "Sure!" 

They remained quiet, as Tydin dragged the heavy crates on a platform that had wheels. 
Once they arrived at the townstore, Kalya's mother greeted them both. 

"Hey, you two! Come right in!"
Tydin grinned, waved at her with his free hand, and placed the crate carrier outside, but in a shade, entering the shop. 

~ END for now. I'm just throwing out some ideas via a RP. ~
-Cracks knuckles- Here we go. I'm going to use a different interface. It's not going to be something like a story, I'm going to state character bio's.
Boy Character
Personalities: Flat, since this is the main character.
2nd option of personalities: Stubborn, easily angered, has a sense of justice and is usually the vengeful type.
Looks: Up to you.
Past story: He was born in [TOWN NAME], and he still lives in this rural town. He is a farmer, but also a novice swordsman in training. He has a sister, who were murdered recently. He was the one who figured out that she was dead, by checking in her room, and finding it was a bloodbath- Oddly enough, there were no corpse. The town is still shaken by it, because his sister is well known for her green thumb and her friendliness among the community. The boy is maybe 17 or 18. He has a mother, but he lost his father in a war between the nations of [NAME] and [NAME]. (If you need more, let me know.)
Blood: He is bloodrelated to the royal kingdom of the [COUNTRY NAME], but he never knew about that. ( Mother is the royal, father is the common. )
---------------------------
Girl Character
Personalities: Sassy, friendly, out-going, but a little dumb.
Looks: Of course, up to you.
Past Story: Grew up in the same town with the Boy Character. Same age. She is a shopkeeper's daughter, so she gets to see the Boy Character daily for the farmed food. (I can't think of anything else regarding to her 'past'.)
Blood: She is bloodrelated to the royal kingdom of a DIFFERENT county. Princess.
---------------------------
The "VILLAIN":
*drumroll*
The Sister! (Well, I didn't want it to be a common game.)
Personalities: Her true personality is corrupted, but she is still good.
Looks: UP TO YOU!
Reason she's the villain: She is threatened for her life and her entire town's life. Wait, what? Yep. There were a bloodbath (referred in Boy Character's past), because The (TRUE VILLAIN) chose her as his servant, but she tried to fight off, so the bad guy attacked and brought her to a near coma stage. Meanwhile, she has been tortured (NOT SHOWN, OF COURSE), and that made her become different, more harsh, and more evil because of the unfairness she went through. She is forced to be the bad guy's servant to save everyone.
Blood: She is directly related to Boy Character's father, the common side. She has no royal in her.
----------------------------
The Bad Guy
Personality: UNKNOWN
Age: UNKNOWN
He is the final boss of the game. He is a pure dragon, cursed by an ancient Mage to be a human. He does still have his dragon-like abilities, for example, flying, breathing flames, skin of steel, etc. The reason he's the bad guy is because he's trying to return to his true dragon form, and the only way to do that is to sacrifice each country's princesses. (THUS THE REASON THE GIRL CHARACTER GETS KIDNAPPED.)
-----------------------------
The reason the Boy Character can't just waltz up to the bad guy and kill him already is because his location is unknown, and the guy has to go through several dungeons to get a key leading to each level of the tower the bad guy will be in. This way, you have a deep storyline while having the quality of the playing everyone likes to play.
(PS- I'm posting this in your thread, to make that an official application.)
Please let me know if there's anything you'd like to be fixed, or removed.
Thanks!

*EDIT* I've decided to implent  an actual story because I'm bored.

It was a hot sunny day, even if it's only spring. It was roughly around 9 AM in the morning. 

Crash! Thunk. Thunk!

It was the sound of a farmer's hoe, digging below the hard, but yet still full of moisture soil. He wiped off his sweat, and rested a bit, looking around. He nodded, as that he was almost done with conditioning his field. He walked off to check his other parts of the field, to check out the already-ripening crops. He suddenly heard footsteps, and turned his head to the entrance of the farm, and saw a lush of blonde hair. 

"Hey, Kalya! Ready for your freshest crop?" The guy shouted at her in a amused tone.
The girl called Kalya turned around at the direction of the voice, and chuckled softly. "As ready as ever, Tydin!"
"How are you?"
The guy, named Tydin, asked while going after to his storehouse to collect Kalya's crops for her mother's townstore.
Kalya grinned at him, clearly affectionate, and shrugged. "Oh, I'm just better now, after seeing you."
"Heh, well, that's good to hear! Hey, wait a second."
Tydin went into the storehouse, and noises could be heard from him, stocking up on the crops in the boxes. He returned outside, lugging 10 crates full of fresh crop. "Hey, they're pretty heavy, do you want me to come with you?"
Kalya considered this for a moment, and shrugged once again. "Sure!" 

They remained quiet, as Tydin dragged the heavy crates on a platform that had wheels. 
Once they arrived at the townstore, Kalya's mother greeted them both. 

"Hey, you two! Come right in!"
Tydin grinned, waved at her with his free hand, and placed the crate carrier outside, but in a shade, entering the shop. 

~ END for now. I'm just throwing out some ideas via a RP. ~
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(edited by Snowdeath on 06-11-11 07:12 AM)    

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