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The first poem I ever wrote

 

03-30-11 10:41 PM
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This was a while back, so please try to be pleasant =P

a side note, this was when I thought length meant everything... not the case

another side note- this is basically a list of all the things me and my best friend remembered about things we did together in our childhood.

I remember...

I remember,
1st grade meeting my first friend
I remember,
Being there in the moment
I remember,
Turtles, Swimming and having ol' good fun
I remember,
Penguins too, even if they were only pictures
I remember,
Midnight Madness and hanging with my friends
I remember,
moving away that night to Freeport, ME, USA
I remember,
My first day here
I remember,
How I felt
I remember,
I was scared
I remember,
How it was
I remember,
Going to Brunswick for 1 year and a half
I remember,
How awful it was and wishing it would end
I remember coming back to Freeport,
And here I am stay

Wow! My memory must be shot,
I don't remember so much no more
I'm having trouble with my speech and thoughts,
And all of a sudden a meadow.
I've never been here,
But I remember it so clear.
But I've never been there,
Could it be a dream?
I pinch myself,
It's no dream,
All reality.

I try not to worry about the past
Because we are living in the moment.
So I guess it's good
that I remember other things
Riding bikes, Trampolines,
Jumping Jacks, fiendesh schemes,
Monkey bars, Candy Bars,
Looking at the planet Mars,
I wish, I wish, upon a star
I always wonder where you are,
Seven to Six, Nine to Five,
The United States takes a Swan Dive,
Harry Potter and The Hobbit,
Lord of the Rings and Beat-It Bop-It
Jackie Moon, It's high tide,
Funtown's Southern Amazon Guide,
Summer Days, Winter Nights
Can't overcome my fear of heights,
Stuck in Time, Stuck in Space
Survivor and the Amazing Race
Football games, and Race Cars,
Pizza Parties, Cookie Jars
Play the Trumpet, don't miss a step,
Come on Boys one more rep,
Cowboys, Celtics, and Red Sox,
Troy Polomalu's flowing locks
I always wanted to go to Disneyland,
Walk on the Beach, Strut in the sand
Cowboy boots, Cowboy hats,
Big Foam fingers, Sea Dogs bats,
Love My Easter, Chocolate Bunny,
Kingdom Hearts, out of Munny,
Runescape, and World of Warcraft,
Star Trek, Stargate, Battlecraft
Star Wars, loss of limb,
Obi-Wan and Qui-Gonn Jinn,
Yoda, Dooku, and Darth Vader
Pac-Man, Sinbad, Space Invaders
Wrestling on Mondays and Fridays,
Going to Baskin Robbins for Sundays,
Hockey Players, Creepy Carneys,
And that purple dino Barney
Assemblies and Barbecues
Pizza pies and curly ques
Wednesday morning, Saturday night,
O.K off to McDonalds for a bite,
Big Mac and the Whopper
Pulled over by the coppers
Balloons, Hair Salons
Watch the Boston Marathon
New York, Subway
Holy Crap it's Sunday
Do my homework, do this poem
Watch a game in the Metro-dome
Cross-Country, Basketball
I'll start running in the fall
Freddy Krueger, Endliss Bliss,
Johnny Depp, and Carlton Fisk
The Big Papi and the Monster
Hula-Hoops and the Roller Coaster
Soda Pop and the Beatles,
God, I'm so afraid of needles
Pittsburg Steelers, Cardinals too,
Man, now I'm really feeling blue.
American Studies is a chore
But with all chores comes a reward.
Today's tomorrow's yesterday,
And yesterday's tomorrow.
Looking at the future's bleak,
and in the past may be sorrow.
So don't be sad,
Don't be mad,
Just be glad that you remember.
This was a while back, so please try to be pleasant =P

a side note, this was when I thought length meant everything... not the case

another side note- this is basically a list of all the things me and my best friend remembered about things we did together in our childhood.

I remember...

I remember,
1st grade meeting my first friend
I remember,
Being there in the moment
I remember,
Turtles, Swimming and having ol' good fun
I remember,
Penguins too, even if they were only pictures
I remember,
Midnight Madness and hanging with my friends
I remember,
moving away that night to Freeport, ME, USA
I remember,
My first day here
I remember,
How I felt
I remember,
I was scared
I remember,
How it was
I remember,
Going to Brunswick for 1 year and a half
I remember,
How awful it was and wishing it would end
I remember coming back to Freeport,
And here I am stay

Wow! My memory must be shot,
I don't remember so much no more
I'm having trouble with my speech and thoughts,
And all of a sudden a meadow.
I've never been here,
But I remember it so clear.
But I've never been there,
Could it be a dream?
I pinch myself,
It's no dream,
All reality.

I try not to worry about the past
Because we are living in the moment.
So I guess it's good
that I remember other things
Riding bikes, Trampolines,
Jumping Jacks, fiendesh schemes,
Monkey bars, Candy Bars,
Looking at the planet Mars,
I wish, I wish, upon a star
I always wonder where you are,
Seven to Six, Nine to Five,
The United States takes a Swan Dive,
Harry Potter and The Hobbit,
Lord of the Rings and Beat-It Bop-It
Jackie Moon, It's high tide,
Funtown's Southern Amazon Guide,
Summer Days, Winter Nights
Can't overcome my fear of heights,
Stuck in Time, Stuck in Space
Survivor and the Amazing Race
Football games, and Race Cars,
Pizza Parties, Cookie Jars
Play the Trumpet, don't miss a step,
Come on Boys one more rep,
Cowboys, Celtics, and Red Sox,
Troy Polomalu's flowing locks
I always wanted to go to Disneyland,
Walk on the Beach, Strut in the sand
Cowboy boots, Cowboy hats,
Big Foam fingers, Sea Dogs bats,
Love My Easter, Chocolate Bunny,
Kingdom Hearts, out of Munny,
Runescape, and World of Warcraft,
Star Trek, Stargate, Battlecraft
Star Wars, loss of limb,
Obi-Wan and Qui-Gonn Jinn,
Yoda, Dooku, and Darth Vader
Pac-Man, Sinbad, Space Invaders
Wrestling on Mondays and Fridays,
Going to Baskin Robbins for Sundays,
Hockey Players, Creepy Carneys,
And that purple dino Barney
Assemblies and Barbecues
Pizza pies and curly ques
Wednesday morning, Saturday night,
O.K off to McDonalds for a bite,
Big Mac and the Whopper
Pulled over by the coppers
Balloons, Hair Salons
Watch the Boston Marathon
New York, Subway
Holy Crap it's Sunday
Do my homework, do this poem
Watch a game in the Metro-dome
Cross-Country, Basketball
I'll start running in the fall
Freddy Krueger, Endliss Bliss,
Johnny Depp, and Carlton Fisk
The Big Papi and the Monster
Hula-Hoops and the Roller Coaster
Soda Pop and the Beatles,
God, I'm so afraid of needles
Pittsburg Steelers, Cardinals too,
Man, now I'm really feeling blue.
American Studies is a chore
But with all chores comes a reward.
Today's tomorrow's yesterday,
And yesterday's tomorrow.
Looking at the future's bleak,
and in the past may be sorrow.
So don't be sad,
Don't be mad,
Just be glad that you remember.
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03-30-11 10:45 PM
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Its and amazing poem leggy how old were you when you wrote this.
Its and amazing poem leggy how old were you when you wrote this.
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This is pretty neat. I lol'd at Kingdom Hearts, out of munny, I see what you did there e_e This seems to be very good for a first time
This is pretty neat. I lol'd at Kingdom Hearts, out of munny, I see what you did there e_e This seems to be very good for a first time
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I love it when it starts to rhyme. It also makes me sad though... as things of that nature usually do. I guess because it's about time you can never get back and I think alot of people take their youth for granted like I did.




I love it when it starts to rhyme. It also makes me sad though... as things of that nature usually do. I guess because it's about time you can never get back and I think alot of people take their youth for granted like I did.

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03-30-11 10:49 PM
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crazycatpup :

somewhere between 14 and 15 I think. I spent maybe 20 minutes on it.
crazycatpup :

somewhere between 14 and 15 I think. I spent maybe 20 minutes on it.
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Interesting poem. It got me thinkin' about my childhood. It had some heart in it i felt.
Interesting poem. It got me thinkin' about my childhood. It had some heart in it i felt.
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Nice one leggy! I'm so proud of youse!!!!
Nice one leggy! I'm so proud of youse!!!!
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that was good i can never write poems like that good job
that was good i can never write poems like that good job
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wow you had a jam paked life, at 15 my life consisted of the internet (onprivate browsing) and playstation...and school :|
wow you had a jam paked life, at 15 my life consisted of the internet (onprivate browsing) and playstation...and school :|
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POKeMAD :

Live life while you can, it keeps one happy and sane.

I did a lot early in life, so if I ever suddenly died, I'd have no regrets.
POKeMAD :

Live life while you can, it keeps one happy and sane.

I did a lot early in life, so if I ever suddenly died, I'd have no regrets.
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legacyme3 : truer words have never been spoken, i completley agree. I've changed for the better now but back then i had realllllly low self esteem and didnt get out much i got alot more confidence now, thanks though your words are still very helpful also i know a lot of people that could really benefit from hearing that to so i hope you dont mind me using it. wise words though we should make like a self help thread ( just putting it out there) oh and again ..nice poem
legacyme3 : truer words have never been spoken, i completley agree. I've changed for the better now but back then i had realllllly low self esteem and didnt get out much i got alot more confidence now, thanks though your words are still very helpful also i know a lot of people that could really benefit from hearing that to so i hope you dont mind me using it. wise words though we should make like a self help thread ( just putting it out there) oh and again ..nice poem
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Hey, that's a great poem! A little long, but nevertheless, a great one =)

The first sentence reminds of my 1st official poem =D

I sat and watched the 5th graders take their graduation scrolls
As I watched in jealously,
I wanted it so bad. 

I walked on the platform, and got my 5th grade graduation scroll,
And cheered so loudly. 
I got crushed again, 
When I saw the 8th graders receive their 8th grade graduation scrolls. 

I once again walked on the platform,
And received my 8th grade graduation scroll. 
Yet again, got crushed when,
I saw the 12th graders receive their final graduation scrolls. 

I dream of walking on that platform, 
Getting that graduation scroll. 

This is my dream
I will get that. 
I can get that.
Hey, that's a great poem! A little long, but nevertheless, a great one =)

The first sentence reminds of my 1st official poem =D

I sat and watched the 5th graders take their graduation scrolls
As I watched in jealously,
I wanted it so bad. 

I walked on the platform, and got my 5th grade graduation scroll,
And cheered so loudly. 
I got crushed again, 
When I saw the 8th graders receive their 8th grade graduation scrolls. 

I once again walked on the platform,
And received my 8th grade graduation scroll. 
Yet again, got crushed when,
I saw the 12th graders receive their final graduation scrolls. 

I dream of walking on that platform, 
Getting that graduation scroll. 

This is my dream
I will get that. 
I can get that.
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