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It al started when the wolf ninja clan began to take control of the city now is time for the clans to rise.
But can a new ninja world? the story in three cities: the city of soul,the city of light,the city of darkness and the city fire But can a new ninja world? the story in three cities: the city of soul,the city of light,the city of darkness and the city fire |
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narutoliker : You have a great idea going, and i wish to join to help you out, can i come from the city of soul? also pm me! |
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*Xado, the quiet but ambitious, young ninja was found in the city of soul. He was brought up in the home of his Sensei Ahzmeth and his family that consisted of his wife Leia and his two sons Ishezar and Laomin. Xado loved and appreciated his family. He trained with them daily, exerting their bodies beyond limits improving on skills only taught to them by the city of soul, and between Ishezar and Laomin his skills matched the two, although Xado hasn't gotten to the point where he could conserve chakra like the other two since the way of the city of soul requires an immense amount of chakra.
One day Xado along with Ishezar and Laomin was amongst a group of other highly skilled low level ninjas ("genin") in the outskirts of town sparring. The message of The wolf ninja clan had spread abroad that the city of soul would soon be targeted and Xado didn't want to waste anytime preparing for their arrival. The wolf ninja clan was an exceedingly strong clan as it is and they were only getting better as days past by, nevertheless they all had to be ready. Sensei Ahzmeth and the council of the city of soul watched the youth train amongst each other but recognized that their skill wasn't enough to face the wolf ninja clan. Sensei Ahzmeth feared for the young generation of the city of soul. Will they come up to par if the elders of the city are unable to stop the wolf ninja clan? Or will they have to flee for their safety? Sensei Ahzmeth debated on a plan with the elder council, seeing as the rival cities were too in danger of being attacked but wanted no part with the city of soul nor any other city, there wasn't an option to join forces. Sensei Ahzmeth didn't see any hope for their endangered city...* One day Xado along with Ishezar and Laomin was amongst a group of other highly skilled low level ninjas ("genin") in the outskirts of town sparring. The message of The wolf ninja clan had spread abroad that the city of soul would soon be targeted and Xado didn't want to waste anytime preparing for their arrival. The wolf ninja clan was an exceedingly strong clan as it is and they were only getting better as days past by, nevertheless they all had to be ready. Sensei Ahzmeth and the council of the city of soul watched the youth train amongst each other but recognized that their skill wasn't enough to face the wolf ninja clan. Sensei Ahzmeth feared for the young generation of the city of soul. Will they come up to par if the elders of the city are unable to stop the wolf ninja clan? Or will they have to flee for their safety? Sensei Ahzmeth debated on a plan with the elder council, seeing as the rival cities were too in danger of being attacked but wanted no part with the city of soul nor any other city, there wasn't an option to join forces. Sensei Ahzmeth didn't see any hope for their endangered city...* |
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Yuri enters the in a dark forest his chakra starts an dark blue colour and an electric sucge pase through it body . Sense Dando is stink on log to show chakr nature manipulation . WHEN A SHURIKEN STRIKES HIM !!
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*Sensei Ahzmeth concluded the meeting with the elder council departing to meet with the young genin of the city of soul, when he finally grasped his destination he couldn't disguise the expression on his face that told of despairing news. He kneeled before the young genin of the city of soul and looked each of them in their innocent eyes that spoke of admiration towards Ahzmeth, he took a deep breath to soothe the pain he was feeling before he spoke. "First let me say that I think you all are doing extremely well with your training, I am very proud of all that you are accomplishing growing both physically and mentally.. With the skills you have all learned from this great city you have each developed your own talents and are evolving into unique individuals. I along with the other Sensei who have trained you are witnessing the fruits of your potential just as you are beginning to realize them. Our faith in you to become great is endless, which is why we have come to the conclusion that it is best that you do not join us in the fight against the Wolf Ninja Clan. Through all your preparation we feel that you just haven't reached the level to properly fight against them. It would be selfish, careless, and utterly ridiculous for you to accompany us. In the end, we just don't want to lose any of you. We have formulated a few evacuation plans and provided survival kits just in case we do not make it. Remember, do not remain in the same habitat for a long period of time, they can track you faster than the normal as they are the wolf ninja clan." Ishezar listened with tears cascading down his face at the ready to collapse under his rage, Xado could see he was nearing his boiling point, and just watched as Ishezar ran to his father. "Father! I don't care about any of that I WANT to fight!! I have been training really, really hard.. I Want to be by your side, I KNOW WE CAN DEFEAT THE WOLF NINJA CLAN!!" Sensei Ahzmeth smiled at his son prepared to speak, but at the sudden realization of his missing son Laomin every word changed. "Where is Laomin?" Xado turned to face his right side where he was certain Laomin was standing, just a little off behind him yet he didn't see him. The group began to panic.. Where has Laomin gone off to? |
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*Sensei Ahzmeth wasted no time in instructing His two sons to return to the village along with their peers while he went to look for laomin. Xado nodded and began to follow behind the other genin, his gaze fixed upon his sensei watching him fade into the depths of the forest. Ishezar quickly geared himself to follow behind his father to aid him. "What are you doing father told us to go to the village!" Xado reminded him but Ishezar ignored him and darted off in the direction his father went. Xado grievously sighed and chased after him, creating a mass chain effect causing the other genin that were with them to follow after him. Burrowing deeper and deeper into the forest Xado's sense of awareness began to build his defenses, sensing danger around them. Not too far behind Ishezar, Xado and the genin group scanned the forest for Sensei and Laomin, they decided to scatter into groups of three to pan out the forest. Xado took two acquaintances and covered the east while Ishezar took two and headed for the west, Leaving only three to cover the north. Xado carefully evaluated his surroundings incapable of shaking the feeling of danger. He paused and turned to his blindspot where he heard rustling in the bushes. "Somethings not right guys.." he forementioned "Ōkami Oni No Sutoraiki!" before Xado could comprehend it he was struck by a powerful Taijutsu. The barrage of fist to palm strikes were both swift and effective as they brought Xado to his knees. Xado quickly panned the area to see where the attack was coming from but there was no trace of an opponent as far as he could see he then looked to his allies as he attempted to stand to his feet. The attacker invoked the same strike upon the other two genin, Xado watched as a blurred silhouette bounced back and forth between the two genin with devastating strikes that rendered them helpless. The two genin dropped to the floor gasping for a breath of air as the attacker his himself within the darkness of the forest. Xado noticed that the attacker would take cover right after completing his jutsu he then lowered his left arm just under his right forearm curling his first, fourth, and fifth digits of each hand, taking a familiar stance of the city of soul dragging his right foot back preparing himself for the attacker to strike again hoping to find another flaw in this jutsu...
Ishezar and the two genin with him bickered as they searched throughout the west side of the forest oblivious to anything around them they kept their primary focus on finding Sensei Ahzmeth. "Ishezar i have a gut feeling that he isn't this way, if you wanted to find him we should have went north like the smart ones did!" a female voice compelled. "Are you even listening to me!?!? Ishezar groaned continuing his journey forward uninterested in anything either one had to say. "If you wanted to go north then why didn't you instead of tagging along with us and talking all of our ears off!" the other genin asked. "Look i would appreciate it if you both would either shut up or take a different route, then either was i wouldn't have to hear either of you.." Ishezar began to suddenly trail behind the other two looking to Ishezar wondering why he was slowing down. Ishezar peered down into a bush to spot Laomin hidden within it. "Guys! Its Laomin!! Come Quick!" Ishezar called to them. He reached in to help his brother out noticing his cuts and bruises. "B-Brother you shouldn't be here!" Laomin's voice was very feint. Ishezar positioned himself to aid Laomin upon his back to carry him to the village for treatment. "Ishezar you-you're not listening to me you really shouldn't be here. Realizing his brother wouldn't hear him Laomin decided to reveal his secret jutsu immobilizing Ishezar "Seishin No Kotei-Ka!!" Laomin dropped from his brothers back to stand behind his paralyzed victim he then turned around to the other genin. "This is what i was trying to warn you of.." Laomin was then accompanied by two members of the Wolf Ninja Clan who set their eyes on Ishezar as their target. The two genin prepared themselves for battle witnessing a traitor amongst them. Sensei Ahzmeth finally reached as far into the woods having had no luck finding his son Laomin. He lowered his head preparing to search a different area of the woods when he heard movement behind him, his instincts told him to hide and prepare to strike. He darted far into the tree above him and drew two shuriken. As the movement approached he could hear their voices, he recognized that they were his students. He waited until they were within range to surprise them. His two shuriken flew toward them but they were easily deflected, Sensei Ahzmeth succeeded in drawing their attention toward the tree where the shuriken bolted out concealing his objective of an ambush from behind. "Quick Shoot there! Thats where they came from!" One genin pointed out. "Okay kids i think its time i stopped toying with you!" Ahzmeth stopped them before they could could release a jutsu and cause any damage. "I wouldn't want you to give out our location if any Wolf Ninja Clans were running around here.." Ahzmeth said before flashing a smile. "Sensei! Xado, Ishezar and 4 others are spread throughout the forest in search for you and Laomin, no telling where they could be or what could have transpired..." one of the genin informed him. Sensei Ahzmeth again lowered his head. "I lose one child and in my haste to find him i lose six others.. thank you Shina for informing me, Kinomoru and Rekuga lets go find the others!" Ishezar and the two genin with him bickered as they searched throughout the west side of the forest oblivious to anything around them they kept their primary focus on finding Sensei Ahzmeth. "Ishezar i have a gut feeling that he isn't this way, if you wanted to find him we should have went north like the smart ones did!" a female voice compelled. "Are you even listening to me!?!? Ishezar groaned continuing his journey forward uninterested in anything either one had to say. "If you wanted to go north then why didn't you instead of tagging along with us and talking all of our ears off!" the other genin asked. "Look i would appreciate it if you both would either shut up or take a different route, then either was i wouldn't have to hear either of you.." Ishezar began to suddenly trail behind the other two looking to Ishezar wondering why he was slowing down. Ishezar peered down into a bush to spot Laomin hidden within it. "Guys! Its Laomin!! Come Quick!" Ishezar called to them. He reached in to help his brother out noticing his cuts and bruises. "B-Brother you shouldn't be here!" Laomin's voice was very feint. Ishezar positioned himself to aid Laomin upon his back to carry him to the village for treatment. "Ishezar you-you're not listening to me you really shouldn't be here. Realizing his brother wouldn't hear him Laomin decided to reveal his secret jutsu immobilizing Ishezar "Seishin No Kotei-Ka!!" Laomin dropped from his brothers back to stand behind his paralyzed victim he then turned around to the other genin. "This is what i was trying to warn you of.." Laomin was then accompanied by two members of the Wolf Ninja Clan who set their eyes on Ishezar as their target. The two genin prepared themselves for battle witnessing a traitor amongst them. Sensei Ahzmeth finally reached as far into the woods having had no luck finding his son Laomin. He lowered his head preparing to search a different area of the woods when he heard movement behind him, his instincts told him to hide and prepare to strike. He darted far into the tree above him and drew two shuriken. As the movement approached he could hear their voices, he recognized that they were his students. He waited until they were within range to surprise them. His two shuriken flew toward them but they were easily deflected, Sensei Ahzmeth succeeded in drawing their attention toward the tree where the shuriken bolted out concealing his objective of an ambush from behind. "Quick Shoot there! Thats where they came from!" One genin pointed out. "Okay kids i think its time i stopped toying with you!" Ahzmeth stopped them before they could could release a jutsu and cause any damage. "I wouldn't want you to give out our location if any Wolf Ninja Clans were running around here.." Ahzmeth said before flashing a smile. "Sensei! Xado, Ishezar and 4 others are spread throughout the forest in search for you and Laomin, no telling where they could be or what could have transpired..." one of the genin informed him. Sensei Ahzmeth again lowered his head. "I lose one child and in my haste to find him i lose six others.. thank you Shina for informing me, Kinomoru and Rekuga lets go find the others!" |
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