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just a little poem i wrote

 

10-04-10 08:25 PM
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Beauty escapes the eye when shocked
seeing you i freeze
i cant breath
the thought of you
brings a moment of purity
the devil within seeks death
a path shrouded by blood
beauty calms these tainted eyes
whats seen on the surfas remains
whats blown away by sight remains in darkness
a beautiful woman captivates the heart of a man unknowingly
life becomes rainbows and butterflies
seances begin to weaken
weakness brings sorrow
a light unseen remains
blood will rain
love will die
hate will grow as i lose you
death remains my salvation
the beauty of youth fades
as the age begins to show
beauty fades all but the memory's with you
but will it be enough to save whats bin ripped to shreds??
only time will tell...
Beauty escapes the eye when shocked
seeing you i freeze
i cant breath
the thought of you
brings a moment of purity
the devil within seeks death
a path shrouded by blood
beauty calms these tainted eyes
whats seen on the surfas remains
whats blown away by sight remains in darkness
a beautiful woman captivates the heart of a man unknowingly
life becomes rainbows and butterflies
seances begin to weaken
weakness brings sorrow
a light unseen remains
blood will rain
love will die
hate will grow as i lose you
death remains my salvation
the beauty of youth fades
as the age begins to show
beauty fades all but the memory's with you
but will it be enough to save whats bin ripped to shreds??
only time will tell...
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10-09-10 08:05 AM
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This is very nice..keep up the good work.
This is very nice..keep up the good work.
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10-12-10 09:11 AM
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Thats an awesome poem much better then any i have ever made
Thats an awesome poem much better then any i have ever made
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