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Abdullahboys : Tom journeys across the countryside, far and wide, through several mountains and deserts, in the harshest snow, until finally, he comes to a small Chinese town.
Abdullahboys : Tom journeys across the countryside, far and wide, through several mountains and deserts, in the harshest snow, until finally, he comes to a small Chinese town.
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02-03-17 08:42 PM
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And that's when Tom finds someone, who can refer him to someone, who can take him to another person, who knows a good noodle shop right across the street from someone who can bring Tom to a small village with someone who knows someone else very important that can help Tom's quest. 
And that's when Tom finds someone, who can refer him to someone, who can take him to another person, who knows a good noodle shop right across the street from someone who can bring Tom to a small village with someone who knows someone else very important that can help Tom's quest. 
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After being floated around from house to house and having searched over the whole village, it had finally occurred to him that no one would be able help him there because he doesn't speak Chinese, causing him to question his decision to walk to China.
After being floated around from house to house and having searched over the whole village, it had finally occurred to him that no one would be able help him there because he doesn't speak Chinese, causing him to question his decision to walk to China.
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02-04-17 09:12 AM
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But in that moment, Tom sees a light far far away in the mountains and for some reason Tom thinks it could help him somehow.
But in that moment, Tom sees a light far far away in the mountains and for some reason Tom thinks it could help him somehow.
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Tom steals a donkey and rides to the mountains only to find a crazy man with a glow stick saying random one-liners in Chinese.
Tom steals a donkey and rides to the mountains only to find a crazy man with a glow stick saying random one-liners in Chinese.
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Tom realizes that this must be the successor for his demonic powers, so he begins training the man on top of the mountain.
Tom realizes that this must be the successor for his demonic powers, so he begins training the man on top of the mountain.
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02-04-17 03:34 PM
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Tom realizes that the old man was the therapist all along.

(PLOT TWISTS ARE FUN AREN'T THEY) 
Tom realizes that the old man was the therapist all along.

(PLOT TWISTS ARE FUN AREN'T THEY) 
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02-07-17 01:37 PM
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So after realizing that he's teaching the therapist his demonic powers, Tom passes out having only taught the man some of his powers.
So after realizing that he's teaching the therapist his demonic powers, Tom passes out having only taught the man some of his powers.
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02-07-17 06:54 PM
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Tom wakes up realizing that the therapist ran away for some reason.

Also his PlayStation 2 was sitting in front of him with the disc for Tekken 5 still in.
Tom wakes up realizing that the therapist ran away for some reason.

Also his PlayStation 2 was sitting in front of him with the disc for Tekken 5 still in.
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And that's when Tom goes into a mental breakdown from all the recent events that's been happening to him, so he then blacks out AGAIN.
And that's when Tom goes into a mental breakdown from all the recent events that's been happening to him, so he then blacks out AGAIN.
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02-10-17 11:29 AM
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Abdullahboys : Continued.

Tom came to and woke up. He shivered. Moonlight shone through the clouds. Were those tree branches over his head? How did he end up here?

Tom didn't know.

He stood, stretched, and realized how chilled he was by the nighttime winter air. He curled his heavy coat around him, dug his hands into his pockets, stood, and started walking. Lights from a nearby building lit up the low clouds and he could hear the faraway sounds of traffic.

First things first, find that therapist and exact Tom's revenge.
Abdullahboys : Continued.

Tom came to and woke up. He shivered. Moonlight shone through the clouds. Were those tree branches over his head? How did he end up here?

Tom didn't know.

He stood, stretched, and realized how chilled he was by the nighttime winter air. He curled his heavy coat around him, dug his hands into his pockets, stood, and started walking. Lights from a nearby building lit up the low clouds and he could hear the faraway sounds of traffic.

First things first, find that therapist and exact Tom's revenge.
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Tom decides to head to the local library, which at this point, is in Chinese. He goes inside on a PC to search up the therapists name, which he specifically remembered his name because it sounded quite strange. His name was...

Was... 

Tom was scratching his head now, he needed to remember what his name was!
Tom decides to head to the local library, which at this point, is in Chinese. He goes inside on a PC to search up the therapists name, which he specifically remembered his name because it sounded quite strange. His name was...

Was... 

Tom was scratching his head now, he needed to remember what his name was!
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02-16-17 08:23 AM
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Tom didn't remember his name, nor did he feel he needed one. He scratched his head, dirty and tangled from so many days on the road. Others in the library frowned at him for being aromatic. He needed a shower, a change of clothes, and perhaps something to eat. His stomach twisted at him now that he paid attention to it. He recognized that his body was wasting away slowly but surely.

Tom frowned. He had no money, and certainly a beggar with a western face wouldn't be able to get much. The locals would assume he was wealthy, as they assumed of all westerners when they saw them in person. He struggled with the decision he now made.

Down the street, through dirty alleys where chickens and cats cavorted, Tom kept an eye for the older shopkeepers. He saw a stand with bananas, certainly a rarity in China at this time of year. The man behind the cart was in his 80s and looked frail and slow.

Tom made his move. He grabbed the bananas and sprinted off. Shouts of angry Chinese chased him as he dodged people strolling the market. He ran behind a pile of trash lying the shadow of a building and heard heavy footsteps rumble by. Chinese police, closer than he expected, thundered by, calling out only what he figured was "thief" in their language.

Tom smiled at the bananas. He consumed them quickly, his stomach arguing at the suddenly volume of food. He buried the peels under the trash and strolled onward down the street, creating distance between him and the cart.

Now he could think.
Tom didn't remember his name, nor did he feel he needed one. He scratched his head, dirty and tangled from so many days on the road. Others in the library frowned at him for being aromatic. He needed a shower, a change of clothes, and perhaps something to eat. His stomach twisted at him now that he paid attention to it. He recognized that his body was wasting away slowly but surely.

Tom frowned. He had no money, and certainly a beggar with a western face wouldn't be able to get much. The locals would assume he was wealthy, as they assumed of all westerners when they saw them in person. He struggled with the decision he now made.

Down the street, through dirty alleys where chickens and cats cavorted, Tom kept an eye for the older shopkeepers. He saw a stand with bananas, certainly a rarity in China at this time of year. The man behind the cart was in his 80s and looked frail and slow.

Tom made his move. He grabbed the bananas and sprinted off. Shouts of angry Chinese chased him as he dodged people strolling the market. He ran behind a pile of trash lying the shadow of a building and heard heavy footsteps rumble by. Chinese police, closer than he expected, thundered by, calling out only what he figured was "thief" in their language.

Tom smiled at the bananas. He consumed them quickly, his stomach arguing at the suddenly volume of food. He buried the peels under the trash and strolled onward down the street, creating distance between him and the cart.

Now he could think.
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02-16-17 11:10 AM
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Tom began to ponder the decisions he had made, should there be a successor? Perhaps this all happened for a reason...
Tom began to ponder the decisions he had made, should there be a successor? Perhaps this all happened for a reason...
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Tom realized what he needed to do. He stepped out into the open and was attacked by men with swords shouting "賊!" (Thief) and "笨!" (A common insult meaning something along the lines of stupid or idiot).

Then, for not even a second, he saw something out of the corner of his eye.

He spotted the therapist making a run for it!

Tom felt his powers charging up as he was about ready to make his first move.
Tom realized what he needed to do. He stepped out into the open and was attacked by men with swords shouting "賊!" (Thief) and "笨!" (A common insult meaning something along the lines of stupid or idiot).

Then, for not even a second, he saw something out of the corner of his eye.

He spotted the therapist making a run for it!

Tom felt his powers charging up as he was about ready to make his first move.
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In an intense flash of light, Tom draws his demonic sword and begins to charge at the men. If he wants to catch the therapist he'll have to make this quick....
In an intense flash of light, Tom draws his demonic sword and begins to charge at the men. If he wants to catch the therapist he'll have to make this quick....
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Tom anime ran towards the therapist, screaming "DESU DESU DESU" the entire run. When Tom caught up to the therapist, he tackled him to the ground. The therapist fell to the ground with a loud and violent thud.
 
"It's all ogre now..." Tom said as he slit the therapists throat with his sword, and cast his body off with his demonic powers.
Tom anime ran towards the therapist, screaming "DESU DESU DESU" the entire run. When Tom caught up to the therapist, he tackled him to the ground. The therapist fell to the ground with a loud and violent thud.
 
"It's all ogre now..." Tom said as he slit the therapists throat with his sword, and cast his body off with his demonic powers.
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Tom looked up to see the sun setting, and realized he needed some rest. After some thought, he began to search the town for an inn.
Tom looked up to see the sun setting, and realized he needed some rest. After some thought, he began to search the town for an inn.
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Tom searched night and day, town to small Chinese town, attempting to find an Inn for him to stay in when he found himself in a city. Tom didn't know Chinese, so he could not tell what city he was in, but he found what looked to be an Inn. He opens the doors and walks up to the counter.

"Hello, I'd like to find out the price for a room..."

"Oh, you are American?"

Tom said yes and asked why, the person at the counter responded that she knew English so it was good in his part, until he found out that the rooms are an equivalent to around $100 U.S. dollars. 

"Okay, let me see how much I have"

Tom checks into his wallet to find nothing, he forgot he had no money in a foreign place that he had no idea how to read or speak the language. 

Tom needs to find some sort of excuse fast or else he will be sleeping on the floor and called a homeless person. 
Tom searched night and day, town to small Chinese town, attempting to find an Inn for him to stay in when he found himself in a city. Tom didn't know Chinese, so he could not tell what city he was in, but he found what looked to be an Inn. He opens the doors and walks up to the counter.

"Hello, I'd like to find out the price for a room..."

"Oh, you are American?"

Tom said yes and asked why, the person at the counter responded that she knew English so it was good in his part, until he found out that the rooms are an equivalent to around $100 U.S. dollars. 

"Okay, let me see how much I have"

Tom checks into his wallet to find nothing, he forgot he had no money in a foreign place that he had no idea how to read or speak the language. 

Tom needs to find some sort of excuse fast or else he will be sleeping on the floor and called a homeless person. 
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